I concur with other folks about the on-set/on-location sound. You need a boom mic, not a directional. It will eliminate the ambient noise. Another solution is micing your actors, though that can get a bit tricky. Last but not least, having a sound engineer check the sound in real time while filming would be a huge help.
I enjoyed watching this. The characters seems well conceived, and the dialogue is good. It has a lot of potential. Keep up the good work!
Thanks for telling me about this show. It looked pretty promising, but I'd really recommend you getting a boom mic or some of these neat little mikes you put under your shirts (I used them during outside shots in Berlin - they work fine!)
If it doesn't work out though, dub the outside scenes over. Bad sound is even worse than bad picture!
Dop NOt get better looking actors...cos then you will look just like all the american tv shows out there. "Normal" looking people make for a better drama. Look at Greengrass in Heartbeat...hes not gonna win any beauty prizes...but hes a damm good actor. You may want to get rid of the 'camer mounted on a tripod' set up if your camera man doesnt know how to use it properly. If he is panning and tilting he needs to do that with all the tripod head joints very loose. Hes got them to thight.
You may want to invest in a stedicam set up for the outdoor shots. They are avaliable quite cheap now'a'days. Or you can make one. Plenty of instructions here on youtube.
Sound sound sound. Invest in a boom mic it'll help greatly. You need something directional that will get the voices of your actors primarily. Also make sure your camera is level so your shots don't look lopsided. Your actors are great and I would watch this for sure but just make sure you fix the sound.
Good charactersg good camera angles, except one near the end on the girl that was too close. A lot of backround noise. Yes I know its outside amongst the noise. otherwise awesome. cant wait to see it all. (Gordy you can actually act. LOL) Best of luck .
Umm pretty good, but i wouldn`t recommend the background music UNTIL you have the boom mics for each actor
DmanM16 6 months ago
@DmanM16 Im sorry i thought I heard music but it was the music in the resteraunt
DmanM16 6 months ago
@DmanM16 Im sorry but you need boom mics FAST!!
DmanM16 6 months ago
I was hoping this series had some connection to the cancelled ABC soap The City. Thank you for the E-mail though.
DaleMurph 6 months ago
sweet
MrPicklesandfriends 7 months ago
awesome video
MrPicklesandfriends 7 months ago
i have a question... why do you want us to watch this in HD?!
thenewandrei4o94 7 months ago
@thenewandrei4o94 Better quality obviously.
DaleMurph 6 months ago
WOW! Really?! 946 viewers, 24 likes(2 dislikes, and 22 comments(well 23 after this one), but why!? This is AMAZING!
TheKrazyImagination 7 months ago
Nice. :)
McCRAAAZY 8 months ago
Excellent *****
OlympicGamesTV 8 months ago
nice...
lironeka123 10 months ago
I concur with other folks about the on-set/on-location sound. You need a boom mic, not a directional. It will eliminate the ambient noise. Another solution is micing your actors, though that can get a bit tricky. Last but not least, having a sound engineer check the sound in real time while filming would be a huge help.
I enjoyed watching this. The characters seems well conceived, and the dialogue is good. It has a lot of potential. Keep up the good work!
robtran 11 months ago 2
Watched the whole thing. Excellent work. Nice acting. Love those city scenes. Beautiful. Thumbs up!!
Rikotistic 11 months ago
Thanks for telling me about this show. It looked pretty promising, but I'd really recommend you getting a boom mic or some of these neat little mikes you put under your shirts (I used them during outside shots in Berlin - they work fine!)
If it doesn't work out though, dub the outside scenes over. Bad sound is even worse than bad picture!
RubicsCubeProduction 11 months ago
Dop NOt get better looking actors...cos then you will look just like all the american tv shows out there. "Normal" looking people make for a better drama. Look at Greengrass in Heartbeat...hes not gonna win any beauty prizes...but hes a damm good actor. You may want to get rid of the 'camer mounted on a tripod' set up if your camera man doesnt know how to use it properly. If he is panning and tilting he needs to do that with all the tripod head joints very loose. Hes got them to thight.
RDPproject 11 months ago
You may want to invest in a stedicam set up for the outdoor shots. They are avaliable quite cheap now'a'days. Or you can make one. Plenty of instructions here on youtube.
RDPproject 11 months ago
Get some better looking actors.
mycheesesteak 11 months ago
Sound sound sound. Invest in a boom mic it'll help greatly. You need something directional that will get the voices of your actors primarily. Also make sure your camera is level so your shots don't look lopsided. Your actors are great and I would watch this for sure but just make sure you fix the sound.
mulioctaveman 11 months ago
cut out background noise so we can hear what they say!
jattogam1ng 11 months ago
i'll coment when i get a better computer cos this lags loads!
jattogam1ng 11 months ago
good acting but i doubt i would watch the full series
jcthekiller150 11 months ago
its good :D
luvlybubbly53 11 months ago
It was okay. But good acting.
p34freak 11 months ago
Good charactersg good camera angles, except one near the end on the girl that was too close. A lot of backround noise. Yes I know its outside amongst the noise. otherwise awesome. cant wait to see it all. (Gordy you can actually act. LOL) Best of luck .
andrewkiwi1 11 months ago
Well done guys!
fassman1975 11 months ago
yay! just watched it =] its fantastic guys!!! can'y wait to see the next episode =] well done!!! xxx
3126Sam 11 months ago
Woohoo!!! exciting times!! xxx
MsSusiewoosie 11 months ago
Whoop, whoop - we are live! x
jandt4 11 months ago