Popped back in...Loved this Aleisha! I don't know where my first comment went! And I agree with Joy! This grabs you right from the beginning!! You do such a great job!! Was fun to watch it again;)
This is awesome, Aleisha! I was riveted to the very end. Amazing that you can accomplish this with $zero budget! You are goin' places, girl, no question in my mind!!
Wow! Thanks Joy! I'm really glad I was able to accomplish that. Yeah, my first attempt before attending film school and that summer we did 3 over 3 different weekends, on no budget. This one, Brown Eyed Girls and An Act of God. :D So I'm happy. I'm working on my first feature now. So, thank you! I hope to go places real soon. :D Hugs,
Great flick, I liked it, even though it was predictable, reminded me of a Hollywood movie. Let this be a lesson to young women everywhere, BEWARE OF MEN WHO PLAY WITH BARBIES
Aleisha, this was wonderful! Oh, all the work that is put into these little productions, I know. It must have been great working with a cast. How I would love the opportunity like that. Also finding different locations to film is always difficult, especially with no budget.
The sidewalk death scene, how hard was that?? Controlling foot traffic from getting in the scene.
How do you manage to get so many people to be available at the same time for shooting? Bribe them with beer? HA HA!!
Thank you Mike. Just read your profile. I'm glad you're able to get back into it. Isn't it interesting how one first starts and recognizes the love of their life? :) I am able to put any length of movie up on youtube as I was one of the first "directors" here and as such at the time they allowed any length. :D Yay!
Thank you Rusty and Fred. :) I'll be sure to let you know when the next one is in progress. I'm working on a feature, but I'm also waiting on a short I acted in, perhaps some day, the filmmakers at the Art Institute will finish it. :P
Wow wow...Aleishar!!! This is sooooo great! The best movie I ever seen on YT. You are a amazing film maker. All actors did a great job. My respect to you all...I had goosebumps and my imagination went crazy. I was captured by this thriller ... An Oscar from me from Germany ... Many stars + fav + shared
6 Nice twist at the end! I thought even wilder twist would have been her girlfriend turned out to be the killer and they guy next door just creepy guy (maybe you see her put a knife away in a solitary scene and then they move out together)...but that's just something that went through my head towards the end. Enjoyed it! Hope you don't mind my in-depth commenting and I know critiquing brings out the weaker points, but it is because I enjoyed it I want to give an honest opinion.Thanks!
2. The first murders...blood stains seemed unrealistic (to me), 2nd murders were really gory in their own way and excellent.
3. I would have liked to see the villian much more darkly lit and some extreme close-ups...let me into his psycho world. That being said, what a psycho! well done!
4. Overall acting was good!
5. The punch sound during the slow motion took away from teh scene (imho)..I think no sound at all or slowed sound there would have worked better.
Hi Aleisha, first let me say this was great! I hope you don't mind I'm going to give you some honest criticism as sometimes that can be hard to get here and having been involved with helping to make a short, I know how hard it can be and how much thoughts are needed to see what people think!
So here are a few things I noted....
1. Sound....background sound was very inconsistent which was distracting...try to get an amient sound that is consistent throught the movie. Continued next comment :)
Yeah, ambient sound was very difficult because of different times...we had strange problems...So, I understand that. I tried at first to strip that sound and it made the dialog sound really weird like they were talking in a tunnel.
I'm intrigued to see what happens...as soon as it loads. I actually am working on a screenplay for my movie also called The Uninvited. You can check it out and tell me what you think. What I've filmed so far is just a test to get an idea of everything from filming to editing. I'm hoping actual filming will start early next year...with a much better camera. hehe!
woot! lol Thanks Daniel. Yeah, maybe one day I'll upload a feature here...we'll see...but I plan on shooting one soon. If I don't upload it, I'll certainly upload my trailer. ;)
=) Thanks Alexandra! I was really happy with my cast too...and the cop, guess what? He's got a feature coming out now...kind of Kill Bill-esque. ;-) I really want to watch it. hehe. How are you dear? xxx
Oh thank you very much Sam. I'm delighted to know that. :) It's been a long time coming as you know but finally it's done and I can start something new and grand! =D
Great job Aleisha! It sucked me right in from the beginning! I liked the way the crazy guy would hear reverberated sounds coming from the cops voice..very creative! *****
Best YouTube Video I Have Seen In A Long Time...I LOVE A Good Haunting Mystery! KEEP EM COMMIN!
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pasha19981 2 years ago
What an awesome comment! Thank you VERY MUCH!! :)
Happy Holidays!
aleishar 2 years ago
Popped back in...Loved this Aleisha! I don't know where my first comment went! And I agree with Joy! This grabs you right from the beginning!! You do such a great job!! Was fun to watch it again;)
Cameragirl803 2 years ago
Thanks so much Jane. I really appreciate that. I'm working on the details of my first feature so I intend to do a hundred times better. :D xoxo
aleishar 2 years ago
This is awesome, Aleisha! I was riveted to the very end. Amazing that you can accomplish this with $zero budget! You are goin' places, girl, no question in my mind!!
All the best,
Joy/the Leopard Lounge
LeopardJoy 2 years ago
Wow! Thanks Joy! I'm really glad I was able to accomplish that. Yeah, my first attempt before attending film school and that summer we did 3 over 3 different weekends, on no budget. This one, Brown Eyed Girls and An Act of God. :D So I'm happy. I'm working on my first feature now. So, thank you! I hope to go places real soon. :D Hugs,
Aleisha
aleishar 2 years ago
Aw that was cool! ..great acting! ..thanks for sending :) ..ciao.
windchimex 2 years ago
Hey thanks so much! I really appreciate it! :D
aleishar 2 years ago
This is a really great movie Aleisha, very good ! Endless stars ! A.D. :))
4DRY4N 2 years ago
woot! :) Thanks A.D.!
aleishar 2 years ago
Really impressive - well done!!
Janeinwales 2 years ago
Thank you very much Jane! :)
aleishar 2 years ago
thanks dear friend for send this short film..good lucky...wish to you..
piergiorgiovico 2 years ago
Thank you very much! :)
aleishar 2 years ago
Great flick, I liked it, even though it was predictable, reminded me of a Hollywood movie. Let this be a lesson to young women everywhere, BEWARE OF MEN WHO PLAY WITH BARBIES
wizardeal 2 years ago
Thanks wizard! I really appreciate that. hahah, yeah, a definite warning sign. :P
aleishar 2 years ago
Nice work ladies!!!!!!!!!!That dudes a freak!
mindfulmusic78 2 years ago
haha, thanks man! :)
aleishar 2 years ago
Aleisha, this was wonderful! Oh, all the work that is put into these little productions, I know. It must have been great working with a cast. How I would love the opportunity like that. Also finding different locations to film is always difficult, especially with no budget.
The sidewalk death scene, how hard was that?? Controlling foot traffic from getting in the scene.
How do you manage to get so many people to be available at the same time for shooting? Bribe them with beer? HA HA!!
DelisaProductions 2 years ago
love it
loveyourposture 2 years ago
Thank you very much! :)
aleishar 2 years ago
nice video
louice 2 years ago
thank you! :)
aleishar 2 years ago
your welcome
louice 2 years ago
Improve soundworks.Vignette why? Beside that: Work it on: Nice!
klickfilm 2 years ago
Yeah, need to improve that. Thanks. Which vignette? The theatre one? Just part of the show, this was a play first that I wrote for theatre.
aleishar 2 years ago
the longer your here the busyier you get
iseehaters 2 years ago
lol...yeah, it's true, isn't it? :P
aleishar 2 years ago
cool
iseehaters 2 years ago
Thank you man! :) Sorry, it's been so long, how have you been?
aleishar 2 years ago
good 5*
Inky261 2 years ago
thanks inky! :D
aleishar 2 years ago
9/19/09
very well done
actors are tops
camera is crisp and sharp
good dialog throughout
Thomas
dadhiltonmps 2 years ago
Thank you Thomas! :) I really appreciate that from a man of your education and experience. Can't wait to shoot a feature! :D
aleishar 2 years ago
From one Filmmaker to another. GOOD JOB! Making movies is adictive.
How did you get a 20 min video up?
Thanks
Mike
glovercm 2 years ago
Thank you Mike. Just read your profile. I'm glad you're able to get back into it. Isn't it interesting how one first starts and recognizes the love of their life? :) I am able to put any length of movie up on youtube as I was one of the first "directors" here and as such at the time they allowed any length. :D Yay!
aleishar 2 years ago
This was well made, great job, Aleisha! :-)
Evhead68 2 years ago
Thank you Aleisha! :) :P
aleishar 2 years ago
nice short, look forward to the next
deckthree 2 years ago
Thank you Rusty and Fred. :) I'll be sure to let you know when the next one is in progress. I'm working on a feature, but I'm also waiting on a short I acted in, perhaps some day, the filmmakers at the Art Institute will finish it. :P
aleishar 2 years ago
Very well made film
faffytunes 2 years ago
Thank you faffy! :D Greetz to the UK. :D
aleishar 2 years ago
Wow wow...Aleishar!!! This is sooooo great! The best movie I ever seen on YT. You are a amazing film maker. All actors did a great job. My respect to you all...I had goosebumps and my imagination went crazy. I was captured by this thriller ... An Oscar from me from Germany ... Many stars + fav + shared
Big hugs, Heidi
TravelWithMusic 2 years ago
Danke Sehr Heidi. :) Wir haben sehr hard gearbeitet und ich war stolz auf allem.
Speech for my German Oscar comes later. ;) hehehe.
Hugs and kisses,
Aleisha
aleishar 2 years ago
Fabulous story and characters Aleishar! Most enjoyed your short film! Cheers!
EdMuirton 2 years ago
Thank you very much Ed! I appreciate that. :D
aleishar 2 years ago
very good vid
thanks for sharing
lilly
doremi5002 2 years ago
Thank you so much Lilly! :D
aleishar 2 years ago
6 Nice twist at the end! I thought even wilder twist would have been her girlfriend turned out to be the killer and they guy next door just creepy guy (maybe you see her put a knife away in a solitary scene and then they move out together)...but that's just something that went through my head towards the end. Enjoyed it! Hope you don't mind my in-depth commenting and I know critiquing brings out the weaker points, but it is because I enjoyed it I want to give an honest opinion.Thanks!
//dan
dvnobles 2 years ago
Thank you Dan! No, really, I do appreciate the insight. It would have been a really unexpected and cool. Thanks! :D
aleishar 2 years ago
2. The first murders...blood stains seemed unrealistic (to me), 2nd murders were really gory in their own way and excellent.
3. I would have liked to see the villian much more darkly lit and some extreme close-ups...let me into his psycho world. That being said, what a psycho! well done!
4. Overall acting was good!
5. The punch sound during the slow motion took away from teh scene (imho)..I think no sound at all or slowed sound there would have worked better.
Continued next comment....
dvnobles 2 years ago
This is great! :)Yeah the extreme closeups...I'm a big fan of that too. I've got that in my short, The Only One.
aleishar 2 years ago
Hi Aleisha, first let me say this was great! I hope you don't mind I'm going to give you some honest criticism as sometimes that can be hard to get here and having been involved with helping to make a short, I know how hard it can be and how much thoughts are needed to see what people think!
So here are a few things I noted....
1. Sound....background sound was very inconsistent which was distracting...try to get an amient sound that is consistent throught the movie. Continued next comment :)
dvnobles 2 years ago
Yeah, ambient sound was very difficult because of different times...we had strange problems...So, I understand that. I tried at first to strip that sound and it made the dialog sound really weird like they were talking in a tunnel.
aleishar 2 years ago
very good i really liked it 5 stars
drnorris56 2 years ago
Awesome! Thank you so much drnorris56!
aleishar 2 years ago
Very Good Video:)
The Smith Sistahs*
P.s. Hope you had a Beautiful & blessed wedding
cjanice4 2 years ago
Oh thank you all so much. :D I had a wonderful wedding. I had so hoped you could come, but I understand. Have you been doing many gigs?
Hugs,
Aleisha
aleishar 2 years ago
AWSOME VIDEO !
craigsgbcustomised21 2 years ago
I'm so glad you thought so! Thank you! :D
aleishar 2 years ago
good video
CoolRavenGuild 2 years ago
Thank you very much! :)
aleishar 2 years ago
Great story! And luckily a completely different idea.
jmnpc 2 years ago
lol yeah! ;) Let me know how your shoot goes! :D
aleishar 2 years ago
I'm intrigued to see what happens...as soon as it loads. I actually am working on a screenplay for my movie also called The Uninvited. You can check it out and tell me what you think. What I've filmed so far is just a test to get an idea of everything from filming to editing. I'm hoping actual filming will start early next year...with a much better camera. hehe!
jmnpc 2 years ago
Hello Aleishar Great Film Great Job!! 5 Big stars for You Aleishar Very Cool!! Thank You Aleishar for the share, pam.
aspire62 2 years ago
Thank you so much Pam. :) I'm glad you liked it. I'm starting to put together my crew for my feature now..so it's going to be amazing. :D
aleishar 2 years ago
Your Welcome so much aleishar, Yes i do like it that is Cool aleishar !! pam.
aspire62 2 years ago
I'm impressed that U can do over 10 minutes! 5*****!!!!!
77Pacer 2 years ago
woot! lol Thanks Daniel. Yeah, maybe one day I'll upload a feature here...we'll see...but I plan on shooting one soon. If I don't upload it, I'll certainly upload my trailer. ;)
aleishar 2 years ago
sittin here on a sunday morning with my tea and toast..hehe..
loving this hun ...great plot...I was drawn in from the start...I do like your police officers uniform ..ours here in the uk are
awful..lol..
seriously though hun this is fantastic..great cast too ...(( hugs )) xx
alexandraxxxxxx 2 years ago
=) Thanks Alexandra! I was really happy with my cast too...and the cop, guess what? He's got a feature coming out now...kind of Kill Bill-esque. ;-) I really want to watch it. hehe. How are you dear? xxx
aleishar 2 years ago
hey hunni ...im good thx just a busy bee lately....I will drop by and check your friend out in a mo ..thx u ...love to you both ,,,,big hugs xxx
alexandraxxxxxx 2 years ago
Oh yeah Jason? He's great...a sweetheart too. :D
Glad you're well...busy is good..me too. But, I love it. It helps me accomplish my goals. Gonna shoot a feature soon! =)
aleishar 2 years ago
Ill look forward to it hun.....sorry its been a while ...had a lot of stuff going on outside here ....lots of love babes ..xxx
alexandraxxxxxx 2 years ago
What a deliciously intertwined plot. Everything connected masterfully! 5*****
celestialsam 2 years ago
Oh thank you very much Sam. I'm delighted to know that. :) It's been a long time coming as you know but finally it's done and I can start something new and grand! =D
aleishar 2 years ago
Great job Aleisha! It sucked me right in from the beginning! I liked the way the crazy guy would hear reverberated sounds coming from the cops voice..very creative! *****
Cameragirl803 2 years ago
Thank you Jane! =D I had a lot of fun going back to these old shoots I did and finishing them. Now onward to my feature! =D
aleishar 2 years ago
lol....the camera work turned out pretty good, I like the sound effects on the Nate interview scene. That was fun to see!
JeffreyJamesLippold 2 years ago
Thanks Jeff and thank you for being a great part of it! =D I love the cop character. You were perfect!
Hugs,
Aleisha
aleishar 2 years ago
lol....I am glad you think so!
JeffreyJamesLippold 2 years ago
This is great Aleish...you are so talented !!!!
ottodix 2 years ago
Thanks so much Bri-! :D Nice to see your name here again. Mwah!
aleishar 2 years ago
Good job babe :)
effects69 2 years ago
Thanks hon. <3
aleishar 2 years ago