not bad, but if you want it to sound more like Timbo and Danja then I would try to make the melody a little more complicated. Timbo tends to use a lot of arpeggiators and ethnic samples. I would also program the percussion in more of a melodic way rather than having them consistent like the ones you have on this. keep it up and good luck!
no prob. thanks. i think my compositions are generally good though. my focus here was really just the drums because i used the timbaland kit. i added the danja part last minute. tell me what you think of the default vid on my page.
it's funny because i had just messed with a whole bunch of knobs on my speakers and it was impossible to EQ anything. but i've recently gotten some headphone monitors and they work really well. i'm currently mixing a mixtape and try my best to master it. thanks alot for your imput.
thanks. oh yea, "kill yourself" had a nice choir. it reminds me of something else though. i can't quite catch it but i think i'm getting "promiscuous" just a little from the drums. what do you think? i liked your timbo beat and i saw alot of other impressive ones on youtube...so i just threw it together in a hurry.
Wow I saw you had enur feat natasja as one of your favorites, she's danish man, so sad she died! try to check out my remix of timbaland the way I are!
Drum pattern is really nice on this one, it would be great for a club, and I like the choir, it reminds a little of the beginning of "kill yourself" from shockvalue!
not bad, but if you want it to sound more like Timbo and Danja then I would try to make the melody a little more complicated. Timbo tends to use a lot of arpeggiators and ethnic samples. I would also program the percussion in more of a melodic way rather than having them consistent like the ones you have on this. keep it up and good luck!
okag3 1 year ago
this is so bad...
JamillaIce 2 years ago
Im sorry my dude but sounds like it was inspired by a porno!
rkfromchi 2 years ago
WTF..IS DIS!!! XD
TheBrainzBeatz 3 years ago
Needs harder drums, at least a harder snare. hats are cool
Ronaldinho87 3 years ago
thanks alot. people seem to comment mostly on the drums. i've improved a bit and i think i'll take all these suggestions and fix it up.
raymanbk 3 years ago
A dogg,nice drums, but you realy got to get some composition skills....not tryin to shoot,just some advice
Nikrt49 3 years ago
no prob. thanks. i think my compositions are generally good though. my focus here was really just the drums because i used the timbaland kit. i added the danja part last minute. tell me what you think of the default vid on my page.
raymanbk 3 years ago
like the crazy sounds creativ
Jacekdupa 3 years ago
lol, gd beat, u shld make some more beats!!
gducky92 3 years ago
thanks man. I'll have some more up pretty soon.
raymanbk 3 years ago
this beat is very nice, and where can i find the choir who danja uses in t.i. - tell em i said that song ?? i got fl studio
TurkishSoulBoy 3 years ago
thanks. it's not exactly the choir danja uses. it's called "Choir Opera Singer Female Voice".
raymanbk 3 years ago
thx man
TurkishSoulBoy 3 years ago
no problem
raymanbk 3 years ago
Its more Danja then Timbo, and this would have been alot better if you had a more SOLID pair of Drums and Snare.
Good Post!
Nagotiator 3 years ago
Thanks! by "solid" do you mean louder?
raymanbk 3 years ago
Louder Snare, and a Drum with more of a KICK, more POP to it. It would make a HUGE difference in the track. Trust me!
Nagotiator 3 years ago
it's funny because i had just messed with a whole bunch of knobs on my speakers and it was impossible to EQ anything. but i've recently gotten some headphone monitors and they work really well. i'm currently mixing a mixtape and try my best to master it. thanks alot for your imput.
raymanbk 3 years ago
really nice, creative...like this work
Jacekdupa 3 years ago
thanks! people seem to like this one. i'm thinking about starting a whole timb/danja-inspired series. what do you think?
raymanbk 3 years ago
where did you get the kik drum sample from?
Kaleelj 3 years ago
It comes with the timb kit. what i can tell you is to try to google it. the name is: TIMB3-1AB 011.wav
raymanbk 3 years ago
thanks. oh yea, "kill yourself" had a nice choir. it reminds me of something else though. i can't quite catch it but i think i'm getting "promiscuous" just a little from the drums. what do you think? i liked your timbo beat and i saw alot of other impressive ones on youtube...so i just threw it together in a hurry.
raymanbk 3 years ago
Wow I saw you had enur feat natasja as one of your favorites, she's danish man, so sad she died! try to check out my remix of timbaland the way I are!
MikeLtheSoulChild 3 years ago
Drum pattern is really nice on this one, it would be great for a club, and I like the choir, it reminds a little of the beginning of "kill yourself" from shockvalue!
MikeLtheSoulChild 3 years ago