Really, that was too controversial? Why? I think perhaps that was too awesome, they must have blocked this cause you would have made everyone elses speech seem poor in comparison. Great job.
When you begin your speech with "Fear!", it can create a sense of uneasiness for listeners. While it is appropriate to address fear in the speech (it's the reality of how people often feel when confronting something new), you could still begin your speech with the importance of confronting fear, but perhaps choose a less stark way to begin or a less dramatic way to phrase it.
Not sure what was controversial about it. I really like the quote, "Rejection weighs ounces, but regret weighs tons." So true!
MOM2LITTLBOY 1 year ago
Really, that was too controversial? Why? I think perhaps that was too awesome, they must have blocked this cause you would have made everyone elses speech seem poor in comparison. Great job.
mbaya 1 year ago
@mbaya This is the feedback they gave me:
When you begin your speech with "Fear!", it can create a sense of uneasiness for listeners. While it is appropriate to address fear in the speech (it's the reality of how people often feel when confronting something new), you could still begin your speech with the importance of confronting fear, but perhaps choose a less stark way to begin or a less dramatic way to phrase it.
LeximoTV 1 year ago