AMAZING!!!!!!! LOved IT!!!!!!
MrAlBlitz 9 months ago
Nice!
script5 9 months ago
My comments if this is for kids:
1. The pace is too fast, too busy, depending on the target age group.
2. The vocabulary is at a very high level for kids - will lose them
3. Suggest slowing the pace down, enunciating more clearly and slower.
Great story line! Awesome details!
runedithrun 9 months ago
I frickin LOVE it! Great job everyone!!!!
PiperLeafProductions 10 months ago
AMAZING!!!!!!! LOved IT!!!!!!
MrAlBlitz 9 months ago
Nice!
script5 9 months ago
My comments if this is for kids:
1. The pace is too fast, too busy, depending on the target age group.
2. The vocabulary is at a very high level for kids - will lose them
3. Suggest slowing the pace down, enunciating more clearly and slower.
Great story line! Awesome details!
runedithrun 9 months ago
I frickin LOVE it! Great job everyone!!!!
PiperLeafProductions 10 months ago