The Aviatrix

[f5yeangel5]

this was awesome!!!

[hobbzrulz159]

wow!!

[MisterKeitel]

very good.



[earthsphere]

Love it.

[Exaternatet]

Масаракш, кульно как *о*

[aarxn82]

i loooooovvvvveeee Jessica Robertson! she played Kate Douglas in 'The Big Green' and i had a big crush on her when i was 12 lol, so good to see her in these indie films!

[duckguy4000]

1:05 kind of reminds me of that Air Force commercial

[lolsmileyface]

Makes me wonder how many cancer patients smoke......oh the irony....

There's a true story of a boy who had brain cancer, his doctors said he had only months to live. Every night his dad told him to dream about being a superhero zapping the cancerous tumor evil aliens with his laser gun. He literally put himself to sleep each night thinking about just that - not far from this short film. Long story short, the boy visited the doctor and they found absolutely zero cancer! The power of the mind.

[firewithfire]

Mmmmm, lemony ass!

[joolyah0]

amazing! saw this on PBS one night, wrote down your name (toddy burton) looked it up, and told all my friends!

golden. you really captured what having cancer is truely like. great work =)

[LegendaryAdrenaline]

That was fantastic.  I'm really impressed.

[mcjonin]

Great Story!!

[PinUpMaster]

Sweet story and GREAT music. These days fantasy is about all we have to escape the crude that surrounds us. But what's with all the cigarette smoking!!! Damn, is that a joke? She has a cancer that is unspecified...uh, LUNG CANCER perhaps? And "lawn boy" puffs away with her...if unintended counterpoint...really, REALLY ill considered.

[h8uall66]

The doctors put her through the brain scanner machine. That leads me to believe it is brain cancer, not lung cancer.

[explorejax]

Impressed !

[AsianGlow]

great job guys! 5/5

i found this through the "promoting videos" thing :)

[wiidog91]

wow this is truly the best short film i've ever seen

[mylindaroyer]

can't believe i'm just now commenting on this, but great job jess!!

[stepleechase]

very very nice

[MegaSaS123]

6:49... OMG! WTF! FU! OMG!...

[NeverwaY]

I really enjoyed this. The cinematography was excellant, and the use of colors was amazing!

[greatergoodcomedy]

Really loved it! Nice visuals, touching story! Congratulations for making something so cool.

[rubbe]

oaaaahhhh yeas

[lisssle]

This is fun, unique, awesome and beautiful!

[valvak]

OMG i kind of dont see the happines of this video OMFG its fucking teribile waste of time i totaly wasted 10 precius minutes of my precius life the space girl totaly spited in the eyes of the other space girl this was totaly discusting dude this vide fucking sucks

[aquariddick]

i love the movie it's just so great thanks for posting!!

[coldesser]

I loved how the mother called him "Lawn-Man".

[FidelityEverling]

i love it! i love how the cancer doesn't really matter in the end! this was really great!

[cinemastah]

I really enjoyed it...but it didn't show what happened to the cancer (a.k.a supervillian in red). Did she just disappear at the end? Like the typical, cliche, Hollywood-ending crap?

[lilee24]

Really great movie, great premise, and you went at it with no holds barred, not being afraid to show the whole range of it, with her actually being sick and whatnot. Its not something that is often shown, and you did it masterfully.

[gamecraze123]

cool effects but boring

[madmuffinz]

What. What happened to the woman in the red suite?

[AstroManProductions]

what a sad story. very well written, well acted, good special effects and good editing.

[manonfire7734]

that was good

[ttthompie]

Really nice done!

Great!

[Headman1234]

Terrific

[LordCheran]

It is very easy to see the symbolism is this, anne has created her alter ego, and her enemy (the chick in red) is the cancer she is fighting, then the guy that shows up is the superhero type version of the "lawn guy" that she meets. overall it is very well done and i could see it becoming a full length movie.

[guiltybystander77]

No shit.

[ninjaboy3433]

dude dont be a dick he was just making a comment on the movie ass fuck

[h8uall66]

Totally!

[baBristow]

and why do people say such grouse sexual things about you tube clips that are not even sexual in nature. I mean why? what's the point? Are they just perverts? I mean "mtdewftw" and "411maryjay" why?

[baBristow]

COOL! I loved it. I like the way the lawn boy was in the comic book at the end. Kind of sad though. The lead lady was a good actress.

[oldspice100]

he banged the cancer out of her.

[jewls73184]

Wow Smoking, while very sick, might even die.. reall smart.... lol

[klesmer]

Thats what I was thinking. Smoking,cancer/ Duh.

[the89thal]

great short film!

it will be greater if a full-length movie will be made from this.

[jandido]

cool

[411MaryJay]

He is such a sqaure,if you gave her some good dick,she would feel alot better. hes ugly anyway.

[limeyfather]

Great fucking film mate.

[leshyren]

this is a great film. short, but amazing. love the characters. great plot, and it's got a superhero like the comics do.

[frekijsimpson]

lol

she's fighting cancer, as she sits there smoking.

[s3eha]

@frekijsimpson maybe its a prostate cancer

[theScytheofGod]

Well done, Mr. Burton.

[Br0kenSaint358]

I loved this.:)

[djjezza]

4:20, is that a dick in the mouth?

[djjezza]

4:20 i mean

[411MaryJay]

U need help,LMAO!

[Chick6517]

Cool dude. you must be a wild

[KenneWilleJ]

awsome

[barrbrat]

Lol. That was great.

[rintachos]

nice job!!!

[girliechef20]

It's Lawn Man to the rescue!

[palebluerose]

Loved it!!!!!!! Kudos for the actors and the camerawork too. =)

[gentlemanimal]

Great work. Really nice characters and sparse but sparky dialogue. So... will there be more?

[ncfederal]

i can dig it...o fo sho!!!

[Badb0y999]

i can dig it...o fo sho!!!

[gryde007]

that was the shiiiiit. i loved it so much. lol great...

[highwayguy]

Very well done.

Loved it.

[Imagitv]

Great work, T. I hope you'll drop by our page.

[Puabond]

If she were smoking weed, that would make sense, and Bravo regardless.

[MisterKeitel]

Wow! Your movie was all kinds of awesome! You did a really good job with it. Loved both the story with the cancer girl and the superhero girl. It all worked. good color and lighting too and all the actors were good.

[y2knoproblem]

If she has cancer, why is she smoking?

[alfwynnxkioku]

Why wouldn't you smoke?

I mean...if it brings joy. You're going to die no matter what.

[snickerdoodleit]

That was cool!

I loved it <3

[JTheill]

fucking awesome! :D

[DjMartinEST]

I so lol'ed when the guy flew there with hes ''reactiv-lawnmover''or smth :D

[shesyourstruly]

loved it!

and i totally got the fighting thing :]

[nomad913]

Nice Job!

[xXHalfieXx]

So, did she die?

[hippocampuszosterae]

that good

[xxKursteexx]

I really really loved this.

Talented actors, wonderful concept.

Excellent!

[jamaicazfin3st]

i enjoyed the concept of the movie

[itsadurg]

i get it. she was fighting cancer in those little cut off imaginations.

[DJD3SS]

Mmmmm lemony ass.

[extrimalka]

very good movie! thanks

[GtheMVP]

I liked it:)

[Krono45]

lol

[grungesponge489]

my mom just finished battling cancer and i can kind of relate to the mother in a way because i felt hopeless but i was there for support even when i wasnt needed haha

[ShanaroNeasomi]

I loved how her battle with the red suit person is like the battle with her cancer

[Nameistree]

saw this at the md film festival

nice to see film on youtube

[talkissos]

What the fuck did I just watch.... ?

[nathantodayday]

read the info fucknut -.-

[talkissos]

I know what I saw fucknut. It was just retarded as hell.

[ifound000]

nice i liked it

[Wenis64]

boring

[feurzug]

very good

[brainthiest]

awsomeee!!!

[Pearlz37]

aww this film is so cute

[xxReconRickxx]

I liked it, didnt feel too contrived

[MartyMcFly23]

It had just the right amount of humor and emotion

[lungsmoke2]

Weird as hell but still good.

[koradek]

rofl gross, the chick puked on her

[nhp5000]

lol two girls on cup reinactment

[iKabaem]

Very nice video!good story

[GrandmasMan]

It was pretty good. It seemed kind of rushed and I didn't like the ending. I like the idea, but the final product was, eh...

[22devonshire]

seen it yesterday! lets chat

comment me back XE

[leonoreinoz]

Awesome short! Loved it.

[MrLionSir]

i stand by what i said three days ago, all species should be watching Action Wars Episode One!!

[MrLionSir]

All men,women, children, and anthropoids should go watch Action Wars Episode One.

[101CiaK]

bello

[DianaBoston]

I love her character. Great stuff.

[Thromkill]

Hey man I love this flick I hope you keep going with making them and props on the professional look

[Red0Riding0Hood]

wow! i love it!

[5a55y5a55]

OMG! A Walk to Remember..this is my favourite movie!

[habibirasakkharban]

This is a very high quality short made from the heart. So easy to watch--specific, creative, light and funny regarding a heavy topic.

[Emilyrulezwithaz]

That was great! I really loved it! Great performance.

[ghfyoug]

oh wow, that's was nice! wasn't expecting sth like this! great job!

[rafaelfekrus]

wow!

[WorldlyMusi]

I'd say the plot isn't very original. I was waiting for something I had not seen before but nothing came. Besides that, great shots! great quality!

[WillBlocher]

are you kidding?

Name another cancer-patient-alter-ego-havin­g-runs-away-with-lawn-boy-movi­e!

[donnchadhkerr]

Pfft nothing special really, it's a bit twee. Not a fair comparisson true but still in terms of a story of someone going a little nuts becaused they got all cancered up Breaking Bad pisses all over this

[pwpg0516]

WOW this was wow congratz .. excellent work! :))

[ihateguts]

'it's okay he was kind of a little shit' haha

[Ponchochickendoc]

Great Concept, and great performances- especially from Jess and Nick.

[KgrTrx]

that was good!

[ephrayimlevi]

oh id so watch this lolz. "Sort of"

*drives off in lawnmower*

rofl

[AliensRump]

Cool!

[davidramos85]

great job! :)

[amytamez]

Excellent work! Deep, strong, funny and full of truth. Thank you.

[BaldylocksLife]

Nice job! I feel like you've been looking right inside of my head!

[shannojo]

Brilliant !!

[farker175]

was the poster in the background the movie poster for the B-movie, "Terror from the Year 5000"?

[BluezzEh]

Well WOW!!! What can I say? This was truly amazing work. BRAVO! In 10 short minutes you made me laugh, cry and genuinely feel and get the lonliness a cancer patient feels. For such a short film, I came away feeling like I'd watch and entire movie start to finish. I can't say enough about how talented I think this film maker is. Are there anymore films by this person/persons? Thanks!

[BluezzEh]

....I came away feeling like I'd watch *an entire movie start to finish. *typo correction

[drainmudvayne27]

can any1 tell me has youtube changed cause mine is different now, dont know if i done somthing but i cant reply to comments and the thumb up and down i cant click on can any1 help me and all so my comment box and that are at the bottom of the page now?

[16541577]

lu lu luved it!!!

[darkcaveproductions]

Excellent job Mr. Burton and crew. Good use of wide shots to capture the awkwardness of "Cancer Girl" and "Lawnmower Boy," as well the visual metaphors of her fighting the cancer.

Thank you

[tifffany48]

sequel....sequel....sequel...

[HungryHerbproduction]

I LIKE MEN!

[cHiAzbIGeArZ]

"mmm... lemony ass"

xD

[chrisB889]

Haha that was cool.

[jaella08]

"my mom always said, 'never visit someone facing death without bringing them something to help them pretend they don't feel like shit'"

best line ever.

[metaphysikz101]

cute

[MarsDarinder]

Click on my name for many original music tracks!

Moi Buenos Musica (Mars Darinder)

[wenjo]

I want more, please.

[isteadicamcom]

ive worked in the film business for 20 yrs and that was really well done.

[shountypoo]

i liked it .. i liked the sappy ending :)

[eagillum]

Whoa that was intense! Even the credits were intense! I feel tense! I don't want to get cancer!!!!

[DarkDevaztation]

i feel like a nerd

[mrrad1]

cool

[CrimsonPillow]

How shit would it be if they were together and then bam, she died. He would be cut as.

[MrEPinky]

Nice work Toddy. Good to finally see some of your work after such a rough semester battling my own.

~C

[jhc28]

is this an indie film or just a hobby film, coz either way the cinematography and effects are really great! good job!

[bobthekiller32]

truly fantastic, it does a perfect job of being a 10 minute movie, great visual effects, i enjoyed it thoroughly

[paddycoolZ1]

Hi, watched this the other day. posting a video response. my short film, 'Cop thriller Cityscapes' remember, if you need original superhero /dramatic FREE music, I'm here. wish you every success. really liked the film.

Padraic

[abeobiz]

Simply breathtaking...

[s4svideos]

Oh dear, Well made, but I would have preferred to see an ending where she died along with her alter ego. It's what I thought was gonna happen, but sadly not.

[cwaabaa]

that was so bad.

[mikeydubs78007]

I guess when your dying of something that you know WILL eventually kill you, you don't worry about something that MIGHT kill you....

[AutonoAnarch]

i love how she is fighting cancer and yet still smokes

[magnificentsensei]

Wow! That was a nice surprise!

[christo6969]

shit hhouse lol

[aeyrick]

Stellar!

[aknotinthecut]

if seeing a monkey have sex with a tiger gets your rock off, then you're in luck!

not for little kiddies

watch?v=DlKmbEdkEzM

[ClownFight]

It would have been perfect, without the smoking. A-

Now drop and give me twenty.

[brandonformosa]

Excellent, it looks like a #2 could be made, hmmm...

[stripesandskulls]

lol that was pretty awesome cute ending

[countryboy44555]

good job

[Ipwn477]

very nice, finally a quality movie on youtube.

you should be getting paid or something for stuff that's as good as this

[whitewaterbloke]

just amazing

i love it

sort of explanes my life. with out the cancer part.

[xLovexIsxRebornx]

that actress was amazing :)

really nice video

[CrimsonPillow]

I just quit smoking

[whitewaterbloke]

nice job

[Gabelleroux]

What kind of camrea you use

[mrocean468]

thank you for posting a quality film on youtube, there are so few of these

[FilmsWENT]

Nice. :-DDDDD

It's good enough that I could say it's like a real movie. :-D

[CorrettaSinger]

Great work! I wish there was a continuation!

why are they smoking?