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From: krissbliss33
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  • i like this story its cool but at the same time its kind of random no offence

    still i really do like the story

  • Kevin is awesome...and so is your fanfic!

  • o holy crap!

  • i love how they just met these people and are liek cudlling watching a movie lol

  • thats true

  • @LoveTheJoBros thats happened to me before lol me my two freinds invited are friends (notboyfriends yet lol) and we were watchin a scary movie and then when it was over everyone was cuddling lol

  • I like the series

  • please PLEASE don't tell me the screaming at the end was the creepy person/thing from The Eye crawling out of the tv... lol

  • this is GOOOOOOOOD

    i luv these things

    =)

  • thank you =)

  • You know what is a coincidencince? The beginning when joe said our bus broke down??? I literally day dream about that all the time... NNNOOOO JJJJJOOOOOKKKKEEE!!! I guess i'm not the only one!!!

  • wow your a good writer

  • whoa

  • Julie: Ahh! *throws popcorn up in the air**not like vomiting "throw up" but like throwing*

    thank you so very much for specifying :P

  • Rebecca: Julie I swear if you get any closer to Joe we will have to butter his clothes to get you off.

    Rebecca(to kevin): either they really like each other or they are having a really long staring contest

    Kevin and Rebecca:the first one

    rolfmao

  • didnt you say the power went out? if it did how are they watching a movie? still a good story though.

  • ummmm idk when the movie was over they were talking about how the storm had cleared up so I guess it had gotten better outside and the power came back.

  • thats whaat i was thinking but anyway the rest of the story was great:)

  • this is good so i hate to point out the fact that in the first chapter u said the power went out .... how are they watching a movie and popping pop corn haha sorry but its still awesome!!!!

  • awsome!!!

  • i cant wait to read the next one

    you are so good

    love it

  • good job

    i love your stories

    =]

    could you read mine sometime??? i only have one chapter so far though but i want to know what you think of it

  • i thought the lights were out..LOL

  • u r anawesome writer!!!!!

  • u r a really good writer!!!!!!!

  • woah..i really didn't see that coming...

    Good Job!

  • dun dun DUN!!!!! coolio!

  • DRAMA!!! Good job your great

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