sad poem

[Katiebugg325]

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[xXdannyXx73]

What a great video man this made me cry :) well good job :)

[ToobaTheVisionary]

A breathtaking combination of sound and words. I love poetry, Check out mine and let me know what you think

[AngelWithAMustach]

WTF I was watching fat people falling how did I get here? But anyway good poem

[emocutie1522]

I Must know what the background music is called! Please tell me :D

[crazyteen001]

@emocutie1522 it's called Caitlyn's Song i found it online years ago

[crankygal1]

The background music sounds like a song from my school play "The Wizard of OZ"

[darkrhyme666]

@pehc90 really? I am a marine ROTC squadron leader. Ive been shot, stabbed, beaten, and seen my friends come back from shit nowhere dead

[capo200christian]

from then to now i wonder how it got this way back in the day you made me cry. And i wanted to die i wiped and i wiped but the pain and suffer would not go away. What did i do to make you hate me so? i kneed to know right here and now why do you despise me so these is wrong listen well these words are true heaven is hell when i am not with you.

[maddypatty222]

i hav and even better poem now(ah hem):

roses are red

violets are blue

oh wait! the flowers died!

2 bad

[bruce91250]

Love sucks

[escapedisaster]

this poem descrbies me so much. this guy i liked i did anything for i remembered what his fave candy was(skittles) when nobody else did. but he ditched me fo my best friend. :*(

[theDevil238]

This Is Beautiful And Emotional I Just Got Dumped So This Kinda Made Me Sad Even Though I Was Pissed So Thanks And Keep Up The Good Work

[thejesusfreak919]

Check out my new video, The Moon and the Sun (Edgar Allen Poe).

[GamingFreak8]

Im just doing some writing as a passtime to try and get better at it, I like doing it, so please check out my first video and tell me what you think :) but please try and be kind. its called if only

[battlefeild3airsoft]

I was the one that loved you...wasn't that enough Hannah?

[ABHansenWriter]

Impressive collaboration of words and feelings :)

[leopardprintlion]

i feel you pain man!

so sad!

check out my channel LeopardPrintLion

x

[darkrhyme666]

To the member Pehc90: I just got out of juvi for shooting a prick like you, I have no problem going back if I find you.

[Pehc90]

@darkrhyme666 if you're unlucky enough to find me, you're gonna wish your name was DON bon jovi. catfucker.

[Morbidiel]

ROFL nice poem, SOOO emotional and original! HAHAHAHAHAH! I've never seen ANYTHING like it!!! Funny!!! :D

[crazyteen001]

@Morbidiel well hey if this brought you some joy into your life then i'm glad it did have a great day :)



[Morbidiel]

@crazyteen001 Yeah, thanks! Human emotions are amusing :D

[poet132435]

@Morbidiel omg I am going through something like this right now and it's so hard! I also write when I am depressed and should post some stuff. Thanks

[poet132435]

omg I am going through something identical to this exept the guy she likes is one of my friends...

[Morbidiel]

@poet132435 FILTHY pickpocket!! What did you take!?

[poet132435]

@Morbidiel nothing

[poet132435]

@poet132435 dude, calm down, I did'nt take anything

[Pehc90]

your poem sucks balls you fucking faggot I hope you get your face mashed by a car or something if it's not messed up already, I'd fucking punch your face is if I saw you fucking asshole

[crazyteen001]

@Pehc90 hope your day goes well too :)



[hikari015cute]

its so good

[LunaVampirexx]

I write poetry I love yours you seem to know how we feel :) very good

[MaddenJMF]

Good job. I never used to appreciate poetry that didn't rhyme but you pulled it off with a nice song too :D

[melle7peace]

tha guyy i like,likes my bestfriend:(

*HEART - BROKEN:(

[abee1998]

Really nice ' reminds me of my frend we were always toogether 24 7 but latley we hvent been talkin she bin hanging out wit another girl tht I didn't evn knew she like , I was always ther for her she was always ther for meh , but threw the roughest ... She is gone she is not here .,,,,,, wel keep writingg :D

[AMCM09]

First half of the song - I WILL = GOD. my friends weren't there for me when I complained or talked about my stupid problems or that guy I'm obsessed with. Gods always there. And he never plugs his ears and goes "lalala" or never tells me to shut up.

He's the best!

and that was some GREAT poetry :)

[crazyteen001]

@AMCM09 thanks that's encouraging to hear

[hefalumpkin]

@crazyteen001 Very nice, I just wrote my first poem about addiction during a sleepless night, could you check it out?

/watch?v=Na9faGO-OuU

[haider2662]

awsome work done with the poem

[Nejihyuga1234567890]

I... I miss my girl I'm crying

[artmartin100]

Guilt...

[Riddle814]

this is an amazing poem!!!!! im going through the same thing i dated this girl and found out she was cheating on me i still love her (dont ask me why) but ya it suck so thnx i know im not alone :D

[melle7peace]

im feel dat pain bcuz i like diz guy n dat guy is goin out with mah best frnd!!i always cry 4 him!!!i lov him so MUCH!!so thx 4 dis ASOM poem!!

[crazyteen001]

@MegaFreakyChick i used windows movie maker

[slamminscreendoor]

beautiful poem i am so favoriting this!

[lheene72]

nice....



[xdMsmaggiexd]

wow !! wUt a nice poem . Kip It Up !!

[DarkNinjaChick13]

I like ur poem its pretty good. I like writing poems when im down too. It makes me feel good cuz I can let my feelings out by writing them down on a peace of paper. =)

[HayleyJane8396]

that was a really good poem, i related to it hahaha.

[FFXpokemonFan]

whats the song in it? btw good poem

[crazyteen001]

@FFXpokemonFan its a song i found on the internet

[comsian999]

@crazyteen001

very very very very very very very very nice poemm.... its my storyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy­yyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy­yyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy :(

[comsian999]

very very very very very very very very nice poemm.... its my storyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy­yyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy­yyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy :(

[shirotayuri611]

god....it does hurting me...deep down inside.......no way to keep it after watching this video.....

[maruumo]

i hate my life...i hate to cry...so i always pretend smile n laugh like a crazy..

i am cruel right? do my life like this.. suck... i don't know what to do anymore..except....

CRYING UNTIL MY EYES GONNA BLIND....maybe. xD

[gunpowder661]

Catie it's truely amazing!

[xl0vex97x]

D= so touching

[PurpleIsForThugs]

Dude, all of your poems remind me of this chick. Thank you. She didn't just brake my heart, she pummeled it into the depths of hell. I like how in one of your poems your go on to say "Atleast those two will be happy.."

[lang411franco]

O devine moon that shines, Down upon thy beauty, As i look at the blind, My heart goes still, Far in the distance see, A flower comes to bloom, Pedals now dance in glee, Watch in full moon, 4 love has made it grow, Pedals r thoughts of u, Flower the one that show, From me to u... A poem i wrote i like ur poem 5 thumbs up =3

[angelous121]

when love is no where to find..when all ur hopes and dreamz...turn to frown...when you sacrifice ur life for the 1 you love and then she turns you back down...then what happenes??ive givin everythin ive had for this.....this girl i love..and all i got was pain and sorrow.....but thats just me....nice poem my friend...i feel you within..i truely do....keep writing..someday..some1 will notice how much special you are:D

[xl0vex97x]

aww

[TurkFTW1AfghanxD]

DONT LET ANYBODY BREAK YOUR HEART! this is sad, someone you love, breaks your heart, ruins your life? maybe even makes you kill yourself... just forget about the past! find a new person! im sure there would be a better person for you! ive seen many people split, and 2 people today in my class split up! so dont let anybody break your heart <3 (From Berke)

[crazyteen001]

@TurkFTW1AfghanxD well im still waiting for someone but ill keep my hopes up thanks

[crazyteen001]

anytime

[crazyteen001]

its called "caitlyn's song" some guy wrote it

[CRACKHUNTER219]

Hard to live 2nd in a heart

[coolteens911]

I LOVED THE POEM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! it made me think about the guy i like. It touched my heart! I think it was awesome and u should write more poems and post them on you tube! :) amazing

[1xXxEMOBOYxXx4]

i love it dude. so sad. :/

[Tiffany9881616]

word of advice..

if you do what you've always done,

you'll get what you've always got

[slipknotizawesomeful]

idk bout u guyz but i liked it :D

[BboySensoku]

i liked the poem but if that story is real i have to tell u that u shouldnt always be the play by play. if she is hurt then u cant always go to u bcuz she is in need of something that someone else wont give her and that that is all ur gonna be. she only goes to u becuz u would be the only one that would listen. so im telling you dont put ur hopes up becuz the samething will happen again!!!

[RattzoRazor]

I liked your poem. It got me a little bit. However I think your vocabulary was a little too simple. Maybe it's just me that like big words :D I also write stuff and sometimes I forget what it means and it changes the meaning when I re read it lol

[crazyteen001]

i want people to b respectful not jst straight out say o this is not poetry...if u dont lik it ok but must u b so deconstructive bout it? i think not...i listen to ur opinion if u show some respect...neither one of u show me any and i will show none in return...and who said life was a joke?...if he or u wants to giv an honest opinion then gr8 go 4 it but try and b kind bout it

[MrArcangel50]

what a nice and depresing poem

[withoutamartyr]

You are remiss to call this poetry. It is, rather, self-servient drivel, especially when each line begins with 'I was'. Now, I agree it is healthy (especially for someone of your age) to write stuff like this, but poetry speaks to the sadness in all of us, and seeks to invoke basest emotion from reader and writer alike; calling this a poem is a great disservice to poetry.

[crazyteen001]

wow big words congrats...call it wat u want, its how i feel either way...plus that kinda sadness deals wit alot of people u would kno if u read the comments this gets...in short it would be a nice thing to try and criticize wit some respect considering the time i put into this...o and by the way evry line doesnt begin wit i was :P

[christina46981]

yes but most of the sentences startes with i was the only thing that i find wierd about writing poems when your sad is letting everybody else know your sad and not getting back on your feet and forgeting about that personb even if your a teenager and young love hurts the most is just you not waiting for the right guy your just dreamin about this one person u dreamthat he will marry you but the chances are youll probably forget him by the time ur 30

[crazyteen001]

jst cause i wrote this doesnt mean i dwell on it...i hav gotten over it i jst lik the comments...by the way im a guy and im talkin bout a girl...and weird is spelled lik that not "wierd"...and God people r allowed to vent, it aint a crime

[BigLaloBLC]

If you dont enjoy it find another video. I thought it was innocent and heart felt. Sometimes its the beauty in simplicity that many people overlook. This poem brought me back to my adolescence. Thank you for sharing.

[frizzyfrizzo50]

@ withoutamartyr okay, may i ask you something? Do have any idea as to what you are talking about. More like an accusation than a question. Read the comments below and you shall see that this poem does speak to the sadness in most the people who see this. Including me. You could have SOME respect that the creater even had the courage to post this and spend time on this for others to see. You do not know everything, even when you try to make it seem like it in using words uncommonly used,

[DinahoftheRailroad]

Beautifully done, this describes me a bit. Lovely, your work is just lovely.

[crazyteen001]

thank u very much

[DinahoftheRailroad]

You're very welcome, darling. ^-^

[crazyteen001]

im fine...i jst found another girl who is twice as good as she was

[oliver9118]

good you are okey and you got you a new girlfriend who is better ;D My girl lied often and flirted with one of my friends, so i told her that i couldnt be with one who lied and was a bit loose if you know what i mean, but i think i finally maked a poem out of it

[crazyteen001]

those kind of relationships always hurt...i think writin is a good healthy way to vent so good job :)

[oliver9118]

is it a while ago?

[crazyteen001]

nope

[oliver9118]

Makes me sad that it didnt work quite good between you and her :(

[crazyteen001]

doesnt bother me at all anymore

[oliver9118]

Im trying to make a poem, but its so hard. i really love the girl, but i know i did something right to break up with her.

Really nice poems btw :D

[crazyteen001]

i kno exactly wat u mean...i did that to another girl and i knew it was rite l8tr on...thanx

[oliver9118]

wana share why she didnt work for you?

[crazyteen001]

basically i think she liked the idea of a bf but not me and was obssessed and it was jst horrible

[sarahcassie13]

wow this is so familiar 2 me...thanks 4 making this =)

[crazyteen001]

anytime :)

[AlanaBabey]

lahved iyt;<3

[crazyteen001]

thank ya so much

[crazyteen001]

lol thanx much

[crazyteen001]

i can try and think of one lol

[crazyteen001]

um idk like a new poem u mean?

[crazyteen001]

i hav no idea wat u asked me but thanx for the comment

[Hawxi3]

Sometimes girls just cant understand

dont accuse ppl when u havent bin in the same sittuation

[claireglory]

can i hug you?

[Hawxi3]

AAwwh come here u big kuddly bear ill hug ye :P

[Hawxi3]

Thnx Im here for u 2 babe

[Hawxi3]

XD bit arrogont but wtvr thats not wat im like

[Meisjj14]

it's not arrogant :) I know how you are and we will be friends forever. And thank you for always be there for me!

[Hawxi3]

The words hit home better than a bullet could

Life sux sometimes right guys

[Meisjj14]

yea but you know I will be there for you

forever&Always! <3

[Hawxi3]

Dam u hit close to the truth

[crazyteen001]

thanx that was i was tryin 4

[ali20360]

yeah,,,,

[ali20360]

i realy hope to meet you. i heard there is a place in england some where

where fun is free and people play fair.

i you feel bad neighbours care, the air smells green crisp and clean,

[crazyteen001]

o cool

[TTjyk]

Really good :) wish for you to be with him as soon.

[crazyteen001]

thanx and its a her :)

[ali20360]

if you could live any where in the world,where could you live? can you tell

[crazyteen001]

England y

[ali20360]

somethings i can say ////

[crazyteen001]

bummer

[thebillyramey]

amazing<3

[crazyteen001]

thanx

[sweetorange123454321]

its really good :) i wish some cared about me like that

[crazyteen001]

mayb some1 does or prob will

[jkcrystal2]

wow i love this alot can u please tell me what is the name of this song ? and how is bye too thank u &_&

[crazyteen001]

i found it online its called kaitlyns song i think...how is wat?

[KoaNguyen]

this song made me cry so bad :(

i miss my ex gf :(

[TheSparrow002]

same hear but my ex killed her self idk wat happen to u ut i hope u have a good life

[LuvForChocolate]

aww.. you kinda took all the words i wish i could say right out of my mouth.. :') i loved it

[crazyteen001]

aww thanx so much

[sasha446]

omg i love ur poem it makes me cry i mis my boyfriend

[crazyteen001]

where ur bf?

[candyisyummy95]

he is in nova scotia:( miss him so much:(i wont see him for another 2 weeks:(

[crazyteen001]

wow that is far im sry

[candyisyummy95]

Its ok... I am going away anyways.. so i will see him in a few weeks:( I just miss his smile, and hig hugs.. :( and his carres lips:( but its ok...

[candyisyummy95]

Omg.. :'( my bf went away for a few weeks, and omg i miss him, and i am crying to everything... I loved your poem, mine was almost exactly like that for english class..

[crazyteen001]

aww im totally sry...thanx and cool

[crazyteen001]

thank ya very much

[crazyteen001]

aww aint that sweet u care bout me so much that u would actually go out of ur way to ruin my day...i think u brought a tear to my eye... :P WAT!!!! haha

[fallen2nothing]

i know how u feel....hope it works out between u 2

[crazyteen001]

it didnt but its ok i found someone better

[HESHbutFRESH1]

OMG

im  crying!!!

i do, talk to my friend all about..now i just wonder if thats how he feels???

[crazyteen001]

wow rly?... well he mite

[ImaFreakinFREAK]

wow that is so me

[crazyteen001]

im sry ur goin thru this

[proudalgerian16]

my friend i created an account just to tell you that a broken heart is like a broken mirror you better leave it broken and use the pieces than try to fix it ....! just got to learn how

good luck mate and nice poem btw

[crazyteen001]

i lik it and thanx

[roselover411]

this was very beautiful, especially because it was written from your heart. continue writing, cuz i'm sure many people will be happy and learn something because of them.

[crazyteen001]

thank u so much and i do try to write often

[mexichick1028]

dude i love this poem im abseesd

[crazyteen001]

thanx

[Lesperance1423]

man i write poems all the time nvr really felt this way but this poem is jus exellent

maybe 1 day we can share ideas lol jk but nice 1 5 stars

[crazyteen001]

hey thank ya id love to hear ur ideas

[XXxamberXXxsorry]

=] ive got a huge book of poems like this ='[

[crazyteen001]

rly? cool i think jk lol

[areyoumybuddy]

(bitter laugh) you don't even know how close to home this hits..........

[crazyteen001]

im pretty sure id hav a good idea

[areyoumybuddy]

it really sucks hu?

[crazyteen001]

yea it does

[areyoumybuddy]

i went through this not to long ago.........

[crazyteen001]

yea i hated it

[areyoumybuddy]

it really cuts you deep

[crazyteen001]

tell me bout it

[areyoumybuddy]

beautiful poem by the way

[crazyteen001]

lol thanx

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