Very nice. My wife said "Too languorous" but that's just the way it is. Cute the way the refrain is just mentioned at the end - I thought maybe you'd skip the refrain entirely; although (it being a rock cliche) I was wondering if there was something different to be done with it.
Very nice. My wife said "Too languorous" but that's just the way it is. Cute the way the refrain is just mentioned at the end - I thought maybe you'd skip the refrain entirely; although (it being a rock cliche) I was wondering if there was something different to be done with it.
blueyedboymrdeath 10 months ago