Is this a cool riff or not?

[xXblackXx15]

ok?

[FarNorthGuitars]

u suck



[alternateblues]

I could try to pick lots of wholes in this as lots of people seem to enjoy doing on youtube but at the end of the day you are creating original music and that alone is worth a huge amount keep it up bro. much respect to a fellow guitarist.

[502deth]

ok, it started out shit, but did start getting a little better. didnt make it to the :49 mark though, as i stopped watching when i saw the obama sticker.

[WorkHardDreamHarder]

very nice, lol i feel bad for your strings tho, they must be in pain. great job man

[coldfanx195]

it is a cool riff!

[Kavorkable]

im a musician from the pnw - and personally i think its pretty rad. what matters most is if YOU think its cool

[wesbroadway]

@MrNickGir thanks for the thoughts man, really appreciate it! hit me up with a link if you get a chance to post any vids of yourself making music. rock!

[Myuzishin]

Riff's pretty good, actually. You're right hand is gonna cause you trouble if you continue to play like that, tho. You put too much tension on the bottom of your wrist by keeping your forearm on the body, keep your wrist straight and move your fingers. See how far from the strings you fingers are when they're not pluckng? Wayyy too much distance, you're doin 4 times more work than you should be. Odd that your thumb folds in half backwards like that too. It probably shouldn't. Looks kinda...ugh.

[wesbroadway]

@Myuzishin hah lots of people have pointed out my weird right-thumb. thanks much for the wisdom, that's definitely something i need to improve on. happy pluckin', homeslice... :)

[eliteinventor]

Original

[astroboirap]

sounds like fuckin super mario on a jamacian ghostrain

[looksik]

write some crazy lyrycs like syd barrett

[wesbroadway]

@looksik wish i had better skillz there my friend. feel free to post some ideas here though, i'd love to hear anything you got!

[looksik]

i liked , make a great psychedelelic song

[AnfaengerGitarrist]

Pretty funky. That will sound cool with a band.

[hoot48]

Huh

[Blown4v]

love it, pimp sh1t

[Tyguy80s]

I like it! I also noticed you've got a unique left hand posture, you taught yourself that?

[ijustwanttogeton]

denied...bad primus/sublime...

[booksol]

not



[TheCrandallman]

I liked it.

[wesbroadway]

@TheCrandallman that's 'cuz you're a connoisseur, good sir.

[pghg022]

this demands some lyrics

[wesbroadway]

@pghg022 hah i wrote some, but they were highly inappropriate :) definitely taking suggestions though!

[tommysheffield1992]

nice guitar Rift . i was moving my head back and fourh haha nie

[Jeteso2009]

to much repetitive...

but after 0:49 is a cool riff..

[337camo]

it sounds awesome at :50 and on. sounds reggaeish....

[chinguidinsky]

I liked it, it inspires me.

[ShaySaysHi]

flea on guitar...

[cheekz920]

hahaha i love it

[IndecentActZJT]

you need a thumb pick!

[emerem]

i've learnt this riff and been practicing since a while. keep up the good work dude.

[nightcestor]

Cool but is your picking hand having a seizure? Lolol

[hinata1god]

ur hands look weird when u play like that

[TheTrolllollol]

Are your hands retarded

[digitalfreak123]

0:49 is EPIC!!!!!

[toadallyscuba]

I like this man \m/ nice :D

[thumbfacenot]

ya man rasta. i dig what da man play.

[rythemnblues44]

NEXT.............



[Regmank13]

You're plucking those strings too hard man. I feel for you're guitar

[aPandorasboxofmusic]

Cool riff man. :)

[fokedarb420]

Nice bassline. Make more reggae vids

[Sayanora53]

I like it quite a lot! Quirky in the best way possible :)

[anewpebble11]

dude its you be agressive about it believe in your music its yours and no one elses I think its spectacular its rythm and blues baby sweet!!!

[fnkrkr]

pretty catchy...hey if it rocks you, than rock on!

[khtuwailla]

not

[khtuwailla]

not

[ShredCorpse]

Cool Riff

[DAI2iiAS1996]

Wow look at your thumb how can u do that

[MrJudaspriester]

oohh my god! You are the guitarkiller!

[shyunseentalents]

theme song right here

[Cheeseheadedbeanboy]

rofl get a pick brah.

[MrSoto55]

@Cheeseheadedbeanboy Brah its called finger picking brah

[TheLeapingPie]

awesoem :D

like you say it does get a bit better later on ;)

nice work dude :D

[lijpo4762962]

it would be a cool theme for a cartoon character ^

holy shit.. how do u bend ur thumb so farrrr :O

[lijpo4762962]

it would be a cool theme for a cartoon character ^^

[keiththeshell]

sucks ass

[23poony]

thats gotta be the gayest riff ya queef

[jesper1101]

do you have polio an you hand

[TheLedSubmarine]

reggae blues. bleggae man lol

[Kerwente]

nice its sounds funny ant from the 0:50 it starts tosoung like reggea/ska haha nice

[DarthNader11]

I think you just compared yourself to a classical guitarist...

[wesbroadway]

@DarthNader11 pretty shameful of me - dirty strings, likening myself to someone who actually practices the craft... :)

[JunkieeMann]

hopefully by now you know how to place your hands on a guitar.

[rustyplaysguitar]

nope.

[ZarkDragon]

thats a really cool riff :)

[DIGOOOO1]

DOES PICK EXIST ?!

[Carlos85461]

thats pretty bad ass!!

[TheSlevaslava]

i have a friend that play like u he smokes weed do u

[parkourer100]

did your string snap on you after the vid?

[goraness]

Doode Go Blow yourself :D:D:D

[roberrules]

Very catchy. Try to find a better ending instead of slowing down. I do that sometimes with my Heavy metal songs, but for this riff you can change the ending by a lot and make it sound so much better.

[TheTrolllollol]

@roberrules you prob suckat guitar that was the worst feedback ever

[TRANZCLOWNoMORPH]

sombody doesnt care about his strings

[wesbroadway]

@TRANZCLOWNoMORPH busted. 100%

[MrJoebro36]

gets good at 52 sec. weird into

[0choke]

yes this is a kewl tune XD

[tomgswdsdf]

i was really bored and was going to post a bad comment untill i got to about 50secs then its really gets good

[enmac500]

yeah, i agree

[PsytranceMan777]

Play it in power chords at 80 b.p.m. on a highly distorted electric guitar, and voila you have a badass vamp! :)

[joefreakhouse1]

yeah i like that! id love to write a bass guitar part to it!

[omega5256]

alright in the begining. very good later on

[wesbroadway]

that's about what i think. the bit of hinting at the theme in the beginning gets old. but it's pretty fun when that main riff drops in at :50

thx all for the comments!

[lukinha543]

aa not bad

[boondawgle]

Nice

[deathtouch100]

kinda slow at first, but I admit it got pretty catchy, sounded like more of a bluesy riff.YOu was getting some body language into that, thought you were going to fall off the chair,lol. Good job man.

[thirdstone3]

Nice job man. I like how the riff evolves and then toward the end you have the whole thing happening!

[gahu101]

dude is there a way you could just give tabs of the main riff/E string :O thats so cool man very ska'ish

[wesbroadway]

i'd be doing us both a disservice, my friend. follow your eyes and ears, young grasshoper! glad you like it!

[gahu101]

sorta got it now, thanks tho man this videos awesome :D reminds me of ska

[zeroskater07]

not bad