Impressive, and you made a lot of good choices. Using outside natural light was very smart. Telling a familiar story made it easy to follow. The Wide-screen masking and Black and White style, I'm just going to have to steal that idea! So, as direction and DP. Full marks. I'll offer one suggestion for improvement. The Sound Track was not layered right, it had conflicting items in the same frequency space. Simplify or separate for more clarity (minor but will make a difference).
Nicely done. What model Handycam did you use?
AvantGardeGuy2 1 year ago
nice video...
a fresh view on a popular story
i really like the dark feel...
i like the no crowd feel
erichnobody 2 years ago
Impressive, and you made a lot of good choices. Using outside natural light was very smart. Telling a familiar story made it easy to follow. The Wide-screen masking and Black and White style, I'm just going to have to steal that idea! So, as direction and DP. Full marks. I'll offer one suggestion for improvement. The Sound Track was not layered right, it had conflicting items in the same frequency space. Simplify or separate for more clarity (minor but will make a difference).
WOW!
Robin Edwards
robinleeedwards 3 years ago