Re: God, Inc - Episode 3

[intheknowledge]

wow....Mr. Personality!

[futbolking]

hey if anything stokes should run his episode to LGC before releasing it, to catch an flaws like the forementioned.

[tribidemp]

Watch out, your cat is going to attack you.

[BennyBlanquito]

This is a great analysis. Don't fault a guy for thinking critically. Is the danger thinking too deeply, or not deep enough? Kudos!

[IvoryDoll]

Must reply to the last addition to your reply...

"Fire and Brimstone" as you so eliquently refered to her as, being God's assistant is only human, which I found fitting that she seemed to not know after our culpret pleads his lie. In the end, her act of breathing down his neck caused His lunch to "show up." A well played example of "God's plan"? Either way, the story put together the way it was, worked well.

[simonmorawetz]

the problem with your 'critical error' is that in this sort of office the directors can get away with saying "well god knows anyway". like with adam and eve eating the apple, god didnt have to ask if they did it he bloody well knew but asked anyway as a test. same here, god knows already who did it, god's just seeing if the dude will own up. after he puts the recreated lunch in the fridge, he looks up as if to say 'just us two ok?'

[LetsGetCritical]

Ah, but the director has already spoken! Please review the 1st comment...

[MegaruRyuuji]

Uh, this CRITICAL FLAW isn't so critical. And seriously dude, when you're reviewing something, you should have notes, but don't read it straight off the paper. Try to make your voice at least a little bit shyed away from monotone.

[matto195]

Wow do you seriously spend your off time writing reviews for youtube videos? LOL GET LAID IDIOT!!! HAHA You need to seriously get a life. You write down what you are going to say and then you wear a suit LOL I hope you slip and hit your head and snap out of the boring life style you have to judge peoples videos on youtube. DUMBASS

[elvismilk]

matto are you out of high school yet?

[fishbolt]

Five stars. As funny as the show itself.

[sweet17t]

Wow! this guy is so serious he even makes me shiver. Wanna-be movie reviewer ought to practice a joke with his cat abit more (like I do!).

[EarlYthymes]

Nice analysis, I agree 3 is the height so far. We did hear your point #2. Paige says a temp put the lunch in the wrong fridge. I think we can infer from the beginning of episode 4 that Lottie is Piper's secretary, her nervousness in episode 4 a secretarial inferiority complex?

[bloodypudding]

You kids need to go back to bed. Youtube is public, and the only reason you're not embarrassing yourselves is cause there isn't a 'Adults Only' section you can get kicked from. Nice critique.

[LetsGetCritical]

huh? (that is, for everything except the 'Nice critique' part...which I think I get...unless you were being sarcastic)

[bloodypudding]

Basically, nice job, don't mind the 10 - 12 year olds. :)

[GaryHurd]

Howdy Andy,

You are very observant. I missed your error referrence. It is also possible that someone else might have taken Owen's lunch (I know that the line was he always had cup of noodles but would Paige know that)?

If we can't take silly seriously how can we deal with reality which is seriously silly?

GH

[fairfairy1994]

o.0 how many times did you watch God Inc?

[SirIsaacFan]

The cat on the stairs is the best part...he's waiting for the right moment to attack. My prayers will be offered to God (in swahili) to help the cat in his plans.

[stormguy110]

Hey what kind of person you are? Are you stupid or something. Man I can't believe that there are people like you who actually think day and night about movies, celeberties... Don't you have a job?

Also which god do you believe in? DUMBASS!!

[walsh1916]

wow this guy is worse than steve carell in 40 year old virgin

[NickD7]

I had to use the Lord's name in vain commenting on a show about God, but Jesus-Titty F*cking-Christ! Who the hell gets that into a youtube show. God Damn, seriously get a life. I'll admit, I enjoyed watching "God, Inc." more than most little web series, but people watch these things to be mildly entertained, not to ruin the experience by analyzing minor flaws that i can assure you NOBODY else would have ever noticed. I truly pity you.

[ourgreylove]

You feel better now?

[blnkswim]

dude youre seriously a homo...get a life

[LetsGetCritical]

Francis,

It is an honor to have received your attention! God, Inc is one of the few worthwhile offerings on Youtube. I am grateful for all of your work.

[francisstokesdotcom]

Hm... My only response to the critical flaw is that Paige works on a different floor and doesn't really know any of these characters personally; she doesn't normally mingle with the worker bees. Thanks so much for a great, thoughtful critique! Sorry you lost sleep!