Cuz everytime we touch, i get this feeling and everytime we kiss,(which has not happened for them) I swear I can fly.cant u feel my heart beat fast i want this to last, need u by my side.
This is what i thought when i saw the end ssweet moment. :D
Okay so maybe a long comment will make you post? Okay so starting from the first part on the very first sentance to this part on the very last sentace I was on the edge of my seat. Im amazingly okay with just friends. Them being just friends gives mre to the story and doesnt make them rush into stuff. I love that!!!! I hate it when in stories they make the people get together on the 3rd chapter and then without a second glance thier already saying "I love you". You took your time and that shows-
@peaches0201 (Continued.) amazing writing skills. The way Joe was gonna call the cops was LMAO big time! I never say LMAO so that shows you it really was LMAO. I said LMAO a lot in this comment. (: Anyways I absolutly positively LOVE this story. like I need more. Now. If you dont you better be at my funeral laying a hand written copy of every episode on my grave from the minute I die till the day this story is overunderstood? o_O Was that creepy? Probably! (: SO POST! Pwetty pwease with-
oh my goshhhhhhhhhnessssssssssssss you dont understand how much i love this story you have to HAVE to post like NOWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!! GAWHHHHHHHHHHH PLEASE!!! you really dont understand how much i love the whole "cant control the feelings i have for this guy who's supposed to just be a friend" dynamic i love this story sooooooooooooooooooooooooooo muchhhh!! please just post? I'll post too!! .]
Joe!! After all that, how could you nottake him back!!! I Mean, once my boyfriend andi were in the mall, and some girl kissed him, then it took him a sec to pull awway. I was pissed at him. After like a month ofme going out of my way ignoring him, he came to my doog (Didnt tackle me) But did what Nick did. (I even calledd the cops, this brought back SOO many memeries!)
Cuz everytime we touch, i get this feeling and everytime we kiss,(which has not happened for them) I swear I can fly.cant u feel my heart beat fast i want this to last, need u by my side.
This is what i thought when i saw the end ssweet moment. :D
MrsJickLover 8 months ago
Okay so maybe a long comment will make you post? Okay so starting from the first part on the very first sentance to this part on the very last sentace I was on the edge of my seat. Im amazingly okay with just friends. Them being just friends gives mre to the story and doesnt make them rush into stuff. I love that!!!! I hate it when in stories they make the people get together on the 3rd chapter and then without a second glance thier already saying "I love you". You took your time and that shows-
peaches0201 1 year ago
@peaches0201 (Continued.) amazing writing skills. The way Joe was gonna call the cops was LMAO big time! I never say LMAO so that shows you it really was LMAO. I said LMAO a lot in this comment. (: Anyways I absolutly positively LOVE this story. like I need more. Now. If you dont you better be at my funeral laying a hand written copy of every episode on my grave from the minute I die till the day this story is overunderstood? o_O Was that creepy? Probably! (: SO POST! Pwetty pwease with-
peaches0201 1 year ago
@peaches0201 (Continued 2) mushrooms on top? Ewww... But I like mushrooms so YUM! Anyways PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE?! Thank yew!
peaches0201 1 year ago
First paragraph=Suspense beyond comprehension! Seriously, I got a stomach ache because of it!
"It was so fake that it might as well have been plastic." Beautiful! I'm stealing it! :b
"...and I watched as the resentment literally dissolved like cotton candy." Perfect simile!
"Like magnets. We just... fit together." Astounding metaphor/simile as well.
And the rest goes on and on, especially ESPECIALLY the last paragraph!
Perfection! <3 Absolute perfection!
ParaJonasLeafFan 1 year ago
Haha i didn't think he would actually call! Post! The are soosososososp cute!:)
jessygirl12125 1 year ago
oh my goshhhhhhhhhnessssssssssssss you dont understand how much i love this story you have to HAVE to post like NOWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!! GAWHHHHHHHHHHH PLEASE!!! you really dont understand how much i love the whole "cant control the feelings i have for this guy who's supposed to just be a friend" dynamic i love this story sooooooooooooooooooooooooooo muchhhh!! please just post? I'll post too!! .]
themelodyinmyhead 1 year ago
NOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Joe!! After all that, how could you nottake him back!!! I Mean, once my boyfriend andi were in the mall, and some girl kissed him, then it took him a sec to pull awway. I was pissed at him. After like a month ofme going out of my way ignoring him, he came to my doog (Didnt tackle me) But did what Nick did. (I even calledd the cops, this brought back SOO many memeries!)
ppllmmkk13 1 year ago
Im still not satisfied. More please! (:
And noooo, Joick! Not friends. Lovers x]
ohmypoynter 1 year ago
Aw, not "friends"!
Well, not for long at least. I hope. =]
Todaydawg21 1 year ago