Speech Improvement(Jian)

[rhoebt]

first, you have a very good speaking skills..pronunciation, enunciation, intonation, stress are all very good. I specifically like the way you pronounce and utter the word "God"..

second, the manner of the delievery of the speech appear very natural and spontaneous..typical of jian..i mean very jian..

third: facial expression matched the content..it does not require variation in emotion since you are simply declaring facts about yourself..

[rhoebt]

hey jian...

i was a bit disturbed by the mismatch of the audio and the video in your presentation..its in a way confusing to watch..

anyway.. as you said..this is just about technicalities in speech and not about the video in itself..so i will focus on the speech..