to long for radio play kinda nice melody not the strongest verse to hook but your style is current and that;s inportant in today's music needs a tweek here and apull there but over all your doing good man keep crafting your skills you could put out a one hit in time ..best of luck
@timbov123 The point of the card were he saw her face, is because thats when he realizes that he made a mistake for gambiling and cheating on his wife, and realizes that she is the only girl in his heart.
@upcomingsongs I realize the point you were trying to make, its just that the metaphor is weak. Its reads too much like a literal statement. And when you analyze it, it doesn't make sense. "The picture on that card looked just like her face". There is no picture on a ace. How about "The best card you can pull, but all I saw was her face" Then it becomes a metaphor. The high of gambling juxtaposed against the low of losing your one and only.
@upcomingsongs No problem i find a lot of up and coming song writers and singers are better then the older one because they change the songs music and and words.
Nice song man, saw your comment on a brooks n dun video and figured I'd check it out, the only thing I would work on is maybe twanging up the singing a bit but otherwise great song man.
Damn good chorus, I highly suggest you try and get a following in Fort Worth. That's where some of the best Country singers are getting started these days.
@EmilyRose777 Mike Lusk is singing. I wrote all the words and music, Then sent the demo I made here in California to Nashville, and they made it sound radio ready.
@upcomingsongs OMG awesome!! Congrats!! Hmm, that is interesting because I have a lot of songs and I have been wanting to basically get them ready so that other singers can sing them, could you give me some info on how to do that? Just send in a demo?
you NEED to be on the radio your great
smokey0010 3 days ago
to long for radio play kinda nice melody not the strongest verse to hook but your style is current and that;s inportant in today's music needs a tweek here and apull there but over all your doing good man keep crafting your skills you could put out a one hit in time ..best of luck
divadoggy1234 2 weeks ago
<333 awesoem
Tortio875 2 weeks ago in playlist Fav Songs
@Tortio875 Thank you for the comment :)
~Songwriter Kevin~
upcomingsongs 2 weeks ago
Maybe I am playing with different cards than everyone else but I have never seen an ace that was a face card?
timbov123 3 weeks ago
@timbov123 The point of the card were he saw her face, is because thats when he realizes that he made a mistake for gambiling and cheating on his wife, and realizes that she is the only girl in his heart.
upcomingsongs 3 weeks ago
@upcomingsongs I realize the point you were trying to make, its just that the metaphor is weak. Its reads too much like a literal statement. And when you analyze it, it doesn't make sense. "The picture on that card looked just like her face". There is no picture on a ace. How about "The best card you can pull, but all I saw was her face" Then it becomes a metaphor. The high of gambling juxtaposed against the low of losing your one and only.
timbov123 3 weeks ago
This is such a good song!!!!!
SaltsprayRoses 1 month ago
@SaltsprayRoses Thanks for your comment :)
upcomingsongs 1 month ago
Sounds good!! A lot like brad paisley!!! Good job! Keep it up!
jamesrio95 1 month ago
Badass!
ShadowDAce1 1 month ago
@ShadowDAce1 lol
upcomingsongs 1 month ago
YESSS ITS FINALLY ON ITUNES
zork1955 2 months ago
@zork1955 Yes it is! :) and I have another song that will be posted on you tube in January of 2012
upcomingsongs 2 months ago
@upcomingsongs Even better more songs
zork1955 2 months ago
I LOVE THIS!
SuperZebracorn 2 months ago
@SuperZebracorn Thank you so much. Subbscribe or keep checking back I have another song on the way in about 3-4 weeks!!
upcomingsongs 2 months ago
This is sooo awesome! Thought I'd come back to it and listen again :) Good work, Kevin! I need to get my stuff to Nashville soon, lol.
BeccaMellottMusic 2 months ago
@BeccaMellottMusic Thanks Becca :) I appreciate it very much!!
upcomingsongs 2 months ago
the singer sounds just like jerrod neiman
NeilTyrrellCLE 2 months ago
@NeilTyrrellCLE Yeah he kinda does a little. The singer is Mike Lusk; who was the lead backup singer for Country singer Loretta Lynn.
upcomingsongs 2 months ago
awesome song keep up the good work
XxShadowSlayer5xX 2 months ago
Good country song!
TwangThang2010 3 months ago
@TwangThang2010 Thank You
upcomingsongs 3 months ago
Hey Kevin, great song! Who's the singer btw?
79danlive 3 months ago
@79danlive Thank you. The singer is Mike Lusk
upcomingsongs 3 months ago
You kinda sound like Brad Paisley. You are amazing!
torixx13 3 months ago
@torixx13 Oops sorry just the songwriter. But the lyrics are AMAZING!
torixx13 3 months ago
@torixx13 Thank you
upcomingsongs 3 months ago
@torixx13 I am just the songwriter
upcomingsongs 3 months ago
@torixx13 Yeah I am just the songwriter, Thank you so much
upcomingsongs 3 months ago
AWESOME SONG....love it!!!
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Sheri G
EDJGlup 3 months ago
AWESOME SONG....love it!!!
EDJGlup 3 months ago
@EDJGlup Thank you
upcomingsongs 3 months ago
Great job.
Brandondavidlyon 3 months ago
@Brandondavidlyon Thank you
upcomingsongs 3 months ago
ive had your song stuck in my head for two days now great job budd
MJonjock 3 months ago in playlist MJonjock's favorites
@MJonjock Thank you
upcomingsongs 3 months ago
I am impressed
xXMrSkimpyXx 3 months ago
@xXMrSkimpyXx Thank you so much. Please show your friends.
upcomingsongs 3 months ago
A very good song man good job!
evil1395 4 months ago
@evil1395 Thank you
upcomingsongs 4 months ago
this song is amazing I love Country Music :D
NelenaFan123456 4 months ago
@NelenaFan123456 Thank you
upcomingsongs 4 months ago
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It's a beautiful song.~ <3 Rain
ZoeyRedbirdHim 4 months ago
It's a beautiful song.~
ZoeyRedbirdHim 4 months ago
@ZoeyRedbirdHim Thank you so much rain!!! :)
upcomingsongs 4 months ago
absolutely love it:)
ohmylovelypancakes 4 months ago
@ohmylovelypancakes Thank you so much "Ohmylovelypancakes" Love your channel name
upcomingsongs 4 months ago
is there a way i can by this From itunes or something?
zork1955 4 months ago
@zork1955 Sorry no, its not on I tunes... I don't even know how to get it on I tunes lol
I'm taking that you must really like the song?
upcomingsongs 4 months ago
@upcomingsongs ya i think ive listened to it like 100 time because its differnet
zork1955 4 months ago
@zork1955 I'm taking that as you must like it.
upcomingsongs 4 months ago
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Great voice. I just uploaded a parody I wrote and sang on my channel... hope you check it out.
NevisWalker1 4 months ago
This is really good the singer and the song itself.
zork1955 4 months ago
@zork1955 Thank you so much
upcomingsongs 4 months ago
@upcomingsongs No problem i find a lot of up and coming song writers and singers are better then the older one because they change the songs music and and words.
zork1955 4 months ago
Is that you singing? I'm impressed! :) very talented and professional! Definitely subbing...hope you like my covers :D x
OonaghClarkeMusic 4 months ago
@OonaghClarkeMusic No I'm not the singer, I am just the songwriter. Mike Lusk is the singer
upcomingsongs 4 months ago
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This sounds similar to Blaine Larsen's version of the song Leavin
xxguitarhero48xx 5 months ago
This sounds similar to Blaine Larsen's version of the song Leavin'
xxguitarhero48xx 5 months ago
amazing song, you have a real talent:)
WatchTheKeys 5 months ago
@WatchTheKeys Thank you so much
upcomingsongs 5 months ago
I love the song and i bet Taylor Swift would love it
kellieluvella 5 months ago
@kellieluvella Thank you :)
upcomingsongs 5 months ago
Super gefällt mir...toll..
DilaraAlisha 5 months ago
Nice song man, saw your comment on a brooks n dun video and figured I'd check it out, the only thing I would work on is maybe twanging up the singing a bit but otherwise great song man.
Drfat4 5 months ago
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love it!!! awesome voice,song,lyrics!!!
ThePredatorzzz 5 months ago
love this song....great job kevin....you were made to write songs
RADOVICHY 5 months ago
@RADOVICHY Thank you so much.. That means alot to me..
upcomingsongs 5 months ago
It's a little cheesy but its good. I don't have that kind of talent. ;)
ThatLittleGinger 5 months ago
Damn good chorus, I highly suggest you try and get a following in Fort Worth. That's where some of the best Country singers are getting started these days.
stickywaffles024 5 months ago
im lovin' this song kevin :) good job! this song is amazingly good!!!
FunnyBunnyLovesYou 6 months ago
@FunnyBunnyLovesYou Thank you
upcomingsongs 6 months ago
JUST found out about you... I have to say.. I love this! (: Keep up the good work!
BlackandWhiteSpaces1 6 months ago
@BlackandWhiteSpaces1 Thank you so much :) I appreiate it
upcomingsongs 6 months ago
great song and voice
XXXXTheGhost 6 months ago
@XXXXTheGhost Thanks that was vocalist Mike Lusk
upcomingsongs 6 months ago
very cool song, Kevin!
Ali:)
AllisonBrustofski 6 months ago
That's amazing!!! <3
LOVE:)
denisehibbitts 7 months ago
@denisehibbitts Thank you
upcomingsongs 6 months ago
Is that you singing or who is that singing? LOL
EmilyRose777 7 months ago
@EmilyRose777 Mike Lusk is singing. I wrote all the words and music, Then sent the demo I made here in California to Nashville, and they made it sound radio ready.
upcomingsongs 7 months ago
@upcomingsongs OMG awesome!! Congrats!! Hmm, that is interesting because I have a lot of songs and I have been wanting to basically get them ready so that other singers can sing them, could you give me some info on how to do that? Just send in a demo?
EmilyRose777 7 months ago
@EmilyRose777 I just sent you a private message with the website of the compnay I used out of Nashville, TN
upcomingsongs 7 months ago
@upcomingsongs Thanks bud :)
EmilyRose777 7 months ago
amazing song(:
FunnyBunnyLovesYou 7 months ago
@FunnyBunnyLovesYou Thank you so much :)
upcomingsongs 7 months ago
Really good (:
BellaLove147 7 months ago
@BellaLove147 Thank you so much :)
upcomingsongs 7 months ago
pretty decent song!!!
1234imagination 7 months ago
@1234imagination Thank you
upcomingsongs 7 months ago
great song cuz
brittmartnz 8 months ago