Jazmine! That was incredible! You have sheer writing talent! gr8 stuff. Loved the music and pics in this. It was all put together really well. 20/10!!!
OMFG!! that wuz the BEST I HAVE EVER READ!!! LOL it scared me to death! lol but i knew he wuz gonna do that with his eyes at the end i just knew it! omg it wuz amazing!! i love it!!
LOL the ending was funny
Awesome Story
cooloster88 3 weeks ago
OK ITS AWESOME BUT TOOOOOO SCARY 4 ME TRY TO TAKE OUT THE PIC PLEASE? BUT ITS REALLY GOOD.
tuxsammy 7 months ago
i was sooo scared to watch it since i read the comments first haha!
guzel9 8 months ago in playlist more manips
You got 1000 views! But like 30 are from me, Lol.
Msmoviemakergirlify 8 months ago
AMAZING You're the best scary story writer!!! You should make this into a whole series, IT'S AWESOME...
MissSparkly21 9 months ago
when the fricken wolf poped out it scared the crap outa me!! haha great story!! :D
NickJonas4Ever121 1 year ago
@NickJonas4Ever121 I agree. I was just sitting in my chair, but when the wolf popped out, I literally jumped out of my chair. OMG Haha
MissSparkly21 9 months ago
@MissSparkly21 haha i had a drink in my hand at the time and it spilled all over me! i was lucky it didnt get it on my computer lol
NickJonas4Ever121 9 months ago
This is friggin awesome! Your an awesome writer!
Briellaglam 1 year ago
That was super good! It reminds me of MJ's thriller video! Awesome!
Msmoviemakergirlify 1 year ago
I loved it, Made me laugh
TheBookworm1234 1 year ago
Jazmine! That was incredible! You have sheer writing talent! gr8 stuff. Loved the music and pics in this. It was all put together really well. 20/10!!!
xxTonyzPlacexx 1 year ago
Im never going to go to sleep now thanks to you. LOL the ending was epic!! Loved it but hated the scariness XD Omg i make no sense.
taylenastoryriter 1 year ago
You scared me from the beginning!!! My goodness!!! I was hyperventilating!!! Itreminded meld Michael jackson's thriller vid!!!:) good stuff!
TheAzyBarcelon 1 year ago
GOD THAT SCARED THE HELL OUT OF ME!!!!NEVER DO AGAIN!!!Dx
i thought that wasn't a dream....god...now i'll have nightmares.I shouldn't have watched that but I'm attracted to scary stories.LOL
xzacefronobssessedx 1 year ago
it scared me soo much damn. oh god, but i loved it... im shaking now hahha. how im stupid but i really loved it.
TheWaveGirls 1 year ago
CRAP...that scared me..but love it ^^
KikiCrin 1 year ago
omg! lol it is so scary.
it is amazing.
good short story.
bunnymack31 1 year ago
OMG tthat scared meeh luved IT!!
taylorlautnerfan4ish 1 year ago
OMFG!! that wuz the BEST I HAVE EVER READ!!! LOL it scared me to death! lol but i knew he wuz gonna do that with his eyes at the end i just knew it! omg it wuz amazing!! i love it!!
5858boricua 1 year ago
@5858boricua LOL! Thanks sooo much!
CelebritySuperFan 1 year ago
@CelebritySuperFan lol ur welcome! this is really good haha
5858boricua 1 year ago
OMG, I Love It Please Make Some More And You Can Make A Whole Series On It (Just A Suggestion) :)
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stephaniiesweetiie 1 year ago
@stephaniiesweetiie Thanks! =D U know what, thats not a bad suggestion!
CelebritySuperFan 1 year ago
omg, that's so good!<3
blueberry654 1 year ago
@blueberry654 aww thank you! =D
CelebritySuperFan 1 year ago