I like your readings, but sometime am not so big a fan of the writing... diseased voice? tip to all writers, adding grotesque sounding words doesn't work on subjects they make no sense applied to. Diseased voice, for example, does nothing for the story, it does nothing to paint the scene. Is a diseased voice throaty?raspy?croaking? I don't mean to pick on this one, but I keep hearing things like that and it annoys me. You're not writing a paper, you don't need as many words as possible. Clarity.
@montblanc1 What annoyed me was "had overtook" rather than "had overtaken." Some of these writers have great imaginations and creepy, effective imagery, but it would be made so much better if they proofread their work.
ONE TIME I BOUGHT A GAME. IT WAS CALLED "THE GAME". I STARTED PLAYING, BUT IT WAS JUST STATIC. I SMASHED IT BECAUSE IT WAS HAUNTED. LATER THAT NIGHT I SAW STATIC STARING AT ME THROUGH THE WINDOW. NOW I AM ONE WITH THE STATIC.
I have a sudden urge, when making music, to leave little trace parts of whispering that are barely audible, to go along with this story..<3 thank you..for the idea
@Narryaque I do, not exactly, but similarly. Its as if i'm experiencing the commotion of tones of people speaking, but I hear nothing, like the body is reacting to something I don't really hear.
@Narryaque Yes. I asked my phycatrist about it and he said it's normal and just because the brain isn't fully awake yet. He said I should only worry about it if I heard it when I was fully awake.
isnt this the story line of "WHITE NOISE"????
taktikal26 1 day ago in playlist Nightmare Fuel
Ahh crap! D: IM LISTENING TO THIS THROUGH HEADPHONES!
HJtheminer 1 week ago
@HJtheminer ME TOO
jea1999 5 days ago in playlist Nightmare Fuel
xD it's interesting having a top comment lol people still reply to me after a year! But it's cool! =)
Narryaque 1 week ago
What is everyone seeing at the end?
WildHunt25 1 week ago
it was cool until the part where the dood came out of the T.V., i like subtle creepiness more than just blunt HERE I AM
daedra9806 1 week ago
1:59 *just went to see if the wireless headphones he has plugged into his tv were on charge*
gamer1330 2 weeks ago
Mother of god, listening to this with surround-sound speakers is freaking terrifying....
TheDeathBegins 2 weeks ago in playlist Nightmare Fuel
I like your readings, but sometime am not so big a fan of the writing... diseased voice? tip to all writers, adding grotesque sounding words doesn't work on subjects they make no sense applied to. Diseased voice, for example, does nothing for the story, it does nothing to paint the scene. Is a diseased voice throaty?raspy?croaking? I don't mean to pick on this one, but I keep hearing things like that and it annoys me. You're not writing a paper, you don't need as many words as possible. Clarity.
montblanc1 2 weeks ago
@montblanc1 What annoyed me was "had overtook" rather than "had overtaken." Some of these writers have great imaginations and creepy, effective imagery, but it would be made so much better if they proofread their work.
oedipusrexsophocles 5 days ago
MrCreepyPasta you are so good at making things scary you could probably make me afraid of snagging my girlfriend. Fuckin talent!:D
elitagge 3 weeks ago
Well, that's ok.
Sleep is for the weak. -_-
MrsCarmelWhitworth 3 weeks ago in playlist Nightmare Fuel
mmm....My head phones with broken wires that static up everynow and then are now double the scary. The fear has been doubled!
chcobothegamer 3 weeks ago in playlist Nightmare Fuel
@chcobothegamer waht about the fun? :D
santoys98 3 weeks ago
@santoys98 They both have been doubled my dear pony.
chcobothegamer 3 weeks ago
@chcobothegamer both at once? why,why thats amazing!
santoys98 3 weeks ago
@santoys98 That's just the magic of ponies.
chcobothegamer 1 week ago
@chcobothegamer waht about the fun? :D
santoys98 3 weeks ago
Wtf static?
TheSkyeKnight 3 weeks ago in playlist Nightmare Fuel
oh gawd! i shat myself at the end! Good story, i love your work. you do a very good job with the atmosphear and the visuals and stuff, kepp it up! ;)
animebetch95 4 weeks ago in playlist Favorite videos
please write books
splintercellchicken 1 month ago
maybe i would hear these voices if my dad were to TURN DOWN THE VOLUME ON THE FUCKING TELEVISION.
>:[
ohaidare 1 month ago
YOU'RE DAMN RIGHT I NOTICED YOU!
WHAT!?WANNA GO??
redneckdipper1337 1 month ago 4
@redneckdipper1337 CAME AT ME, BRO!
RamoneHoffman 1 month ago in playlist Mr Creepypasta
My heart skipped a beat at the very end. I was like O_O
TheThunderDragoon 1 month ago
at 3:37 I thought it was my stomach growling :D
bobbythecoolest 1 month ago
D: I'm an "it"?
iwannabeavampire1013 1 month ago
SLeep is overrated anyway.
tlaroche38 1 month ago in playlist Nightmare Fuel
THE LOST GAME.
ONE TIME I BOUGHT A GAME. IT WAS CALLED "THE GAME". I STARTED PLAYING, BUT IT WAS JUST STATIC. I SMASHED IT BECAUSE IT WAS HAUNTED. LATER THAT NIGHT I SAW STATIC STARING AT ME THROUGH THE WINDOW. NOW I AM ONE WITH THE STATIC.
siemka321 2 months ago 3
@Smiletehk I agree
libertycityteen 2 months ago
Moonlight sonata would be good with this video :3
smiletehk 2 months ago
wow why did you put that episode of candle cove as the video?
UltimateMiketron 2 months ago
damn, that was one of my favorite classical piece. x(
Mykittyisaninja 2 months ago in playlist Nightmare Fuel
i expected a screamer at the end but ur ending sent chills down my spine :D also iv noticed that my computer ticks when theres no sounds being played
Tulsi950 2 months ago
thumbs up if you saw a frog!
girlEgirldrugnerd 2 months ago in playlist More videos from MrCreepyPasta
I have a sudden urge, when making music, to leave little trace parts of whispering that are barely audible, to go along with this story..<3 thank you..for the idea
BassGuitard 2 months ago
hey, shut the fuck up i'm trying to listen to music.
it noticed us...
viking977 2 months ago
i noticed you...
UMADBRO?
ToxicFishMovies 2 months ago
this has been the most awesome story in the world
ENERGYFATE 2 months ago
I was listening to this with headphones you bastard.
666lilnickY 2 months ago
well, no sleep for me tonight...
LittleMissHell1 2 months ago in playlist Nightmare Fuel
I didn't know that Silent Hill had internet, let alone eBay...
jellywillreturn 3 months ago
The random braps in your voice make this all the more eerie
doods91 3 months ago
OH THANK GOD I HARDLY FINISHED BECAUSE YOUR TALKING ABOUT LOOKING OR LISTENING TOO CLOSE AND THE STATIC CAME ON SO I ALMOST TURNED IT OFF GOOD ONE
HORNETSINMYPANTS 4 months ago in playlist Nightmare Fuel
I remember hearing another tale about listening too closely. Good stuff.
GA5MA5K88 4 months ago in playlist More videos from MrCreepyPasta
i noticed you allright lowl
devilkirby164 4 months ago
Lol. This doesn't bother me that much.
SkullyHippie 5 months ago
Does anyone else hear voices like that, like a crowded room, when they're between awake and sleep?
Narryaque 5 months ago 46
@Narryaque That's completely normal. Trust me.
ChaosTheory0 4 months ago
@Narryaque I do, not exactly, but similarly. Its as if i'm experiencing the commotion of tones of people speaking, but I hear nothing, like the body is reacting to something I don't really hear.
matthewtop 2 months ago
@matthewtop yeah, it's a weird, yet fascinating thing to me.
Narryaque 1 month ago
@Narryaque its from candle cove if you watch the candle cove ep he made he says in the comments that he put candle cove stuff in here
SuperZombiesAreGone 1 month ago
@SuperZombiesAreGone hey, you're right! o-o that's cool.
Narryaque 1 month ago
@Narryaque Yes. I asked my phycatrist about it and he said it's normal and just because the brain isn't fully awake yet. He said I should only worry about it if I heard it when I was fully awake.
misspinkpunkykat 1 month ago
@misspinkpunkykat good point. it's just kinda fascinating to me.
Narryaque 1 month ago
@Narryaque when im between asleep and awake i just feel like my bed is like, NOOOO STAY IN ME YOU KNOW U WANT TO!!!!
daedra9806 1 week ago
@daedra9806 exactly! xD
Narryaque 1 week ago
I was waiting for like, some freaky face or a moment of ear rape at the end XD Another good one!
MountainEyesEntProd 5 months ago
It wont play!!!! Urrrrggghhhh... I wanna watch the video damn it!
SkullyHippie 6 months ago
o_o
Excuse me while I go call my therapist.
TheElectricDreamer93 8 months ago 30
the rapist.
randomboostsuperguy 6 months ago in playlist Nightmare Fuel
@randomboostsuperguy therapist
mariofana 3 months ago
the rapist
randomboostsuperguy 3 months ago
@TheElectricDreamer93 therapist= the rapist
vetajoy1 2 months ago
@vetajoy1 Mind rapist.
smiletehk 2 months ago
Man i wish i can get comments on my clothes and my music by stuff like that.
smiletehk 2 months ago
I think it is safe to say I just shit my pants, good job. ^^
kingbelail 9 months ago