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From: MrCreepyPasta
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  • isnt this the story line of "WHITE NOISE"????

  • Ahh crap! D: IM LISTENING TO THIS THROUGH HEADPHONES!

  • @HJtheminer ME TOO

  • xD it's interesting having a top comment lol people still reply to me after a year! But it's cool! =)

  • What is everyone seeing at the end?

  • it was cool until the part where the dood came out of the T.V., i like subtle creepiness more than just blunt HERE I AM

  • 1:59 *just went to see if the wireless headphones he has plugged into his tv were on charge*

  • Mother of god, listening to this with surround-sound speakers is freaking terrifying....

  • I like your readings, but sometime am not so big a fan of the writing... diseased voice? tip to all writers, adding grotesque sounding words doesn't work on subjects they make no sense applied to. Diseased voice, for example, does nothing for the story, it does nothing to paint the scene. Is a diseased voice throaty?raspy?croaking? I don't mean to pick on this one, but I keep hearing things like that and it annoys me. You're not writing a paper, you don't need as many words as possible. Clarity.

  • @montblanc1 What annoyed me was "had overtook" rather than "had overtaken." Some of these writers have great imaginations and creepy, effective imagery, but it would be made so much better if they proofread their work.

  • MrCreepyPasta you are so good at making things scary you could probably make me afraid of snagging my girlfriend. Fuckin talent!:D

  • Well, that's ok.

    Sleep is for the weak. -_-

  • mmm....My head phones with broken wires that static up everynow and then are now double the scary. The fear has been doubled!

  • @chcobothegamer waht about the fun? :D

  • @santoys98 They both have been doubled my dear pony.

  • @chcobothegamer both at once? why,why thats amazing!

  • @santoys98 That's just the magic of ponies.

  • @chcobothegamer waht about the fun? :D

  • Wtf static?

  • oh gawd! i shat myself at the end! Good story, i love your work. you do a very good job with the atmosphear and the visuals and stuff, kepp it up! ;)

  • please write books

  • maybe i would hear these voices if my dad were to TURN DOWN THE VOLUME ON THE FUCKING TELEVISION.

    >:[

  • YOU'RE DAMN RIGHT I NOTICED YOU!

    WHAT!?WANNA GO??

  • @redneckdipper1337 CAME AT ME, BRO!

  • My heart skipped a beat at the very end. I was like O_O

  • at 3:37 I thought it was my stomach growling :D

  • D: I'm an "it"?

  • SLeep is overrated anyway.

  • THE LOST GAME.

    ONE TIME I BOUGHT A GAME. IT WAS CALLED "THE GAME". I STARTED PLAYING, BUT IT WAS JUST STATIC. I SMASHED IT BECAUSE IT WAS HAUNTED. LATER THAT NIGHT I SAW STATIC STARING AT ME THROUGH THE WINDOW. NOW I AM ONE WITH THE STATIC.

  • @Smiletehk I agree

  • Moonlight sonata would be good with this video :3

  • wow why did you put that episode of candle cove as the video?

  • damn, that was one of my favorite classical piece. x(

  • i expected a screamer at the end but ur ending sent chills down my spine :D also iv noticed that my computer ticks when theres no sounds being played

  • thumbs up if you saw a frog!

  • I have a sudden urge, when making music, to leave little trace parts of whispering that are barely audible, to go along with this story..<3 thank you..for the idea

  • hey, shut the fuck up i'm trying to listen to music.

    it noticed us...

  • i noticed you...

    UMADBRO?

  • this has been the most awesome story in the world

  • I was listening to this with headphones you bastard.

  • well, no sleep for me tonight...

  • I didn't know that Silent Hill had internet, let alone eBay...

  • The random braps in your voice make this all the more eerie

  • OH THANK GOD I HARDLY FINISHED BECAUSE YOUR TALKING ABOUT LOOKING OR LISTENING TOO CLOSE AND THE STATIC CAME ON SO I ALMOST TURNED IT OFF GOOD ONE

  • I remember hearing another tale about listening too closely. Good stuff.

  • i noticed you allright lowl

  • Lol. This doesn't bother me that much.

  • Does anyone else hear voices like that, like a crowded room, when they're between awake and sleep?

  • @Narryaque That's completely normal. Trust me.

  • @Narryaque I do, not exactly, but similarly. Its as if i'm experiencing the commotion of tones of people speaking, but I hear nothing, like the body is reacting to something I don't really hear.

  • @matthewtop yeah, it's a weird, yet fascinating thing to me.

  • @Narryaque its from candle cove if you watch the candle cove ep he made he says in the comments that he put candle cove stuff in here

  • @SuperZombiesAreGone hey, you're right! o-o that's cool.

  • @Narryaque Yes. I asked my phycatrist about it and he said it's normal and just because the brain isn't fully awake yet. He said I should only worry about it if I heard it when I was fully awake.

  • @misspinkpunkykat good point. it's just kinda fascinating to me.

  • @Narryaque when im between asleep and awake i just feel like my bed is like, NOOOO STAY IN ME YOU KNOW U WANT TO!!!!

  • @daedra9806 exactly! xD

  • I was waiting for like, some freaky face or a moment of ear rape at the end XD Another good one!

  • It wont play!!!! Urrrrggghhhh... I wanna watch the video damn it!

  • o_o

    Excuse me while I go call my therapist.

  • the rapist.

  • @randomboostsuperguy therapist

  • the rapist

  • @TheElectricDreamer93  therapist= the rapist

  • @vetajoy1 Mind rapist.

  • Man i wish i can get comments on my clothes and my music by stuff like that.

  • I think it is safe to say I just shit my pants, good job. ^^

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