wow i loved this, always loved this poem and i was hypnotised by the image and the vocal, i dont think the pronunciation is bad at all, adds a new dimension
this is horrible. the pronunciation is bad, not that much poetic as expected. there's too much concentration on the effort at faking an emotion here. its more annoying than it is "magical"
i disagree. I think the pronunciation is what makes it so striking, you have to listen closely to her voice to catch and understand every word, it is hypnotizing. As for faking emotion, I didn't get that from this at all. I love the soft sweetness of her voice and how much it contrast from the poem. An awesome video.
I will defend this video. It is actually a pretty good reading. She reads slowly; the way you are supposed to. Also, her tone makes you listen more closely to the words, which of course is crucial in poetry. The images are also good - - abstract. It is better than videos which try to match the words with images or dramatize a poem.
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This rendition is irritating. The whole video concentrates on her voice (which is sweet, but sickly so; passionless). There is no Sylvia Plath in this video at all, just words smeared with almost inaudible, sticky pronunciation.
i have to disagree, this is a horrible reading of this poem. the voice is hesitant to say the words and ends up swallowing them, im not saying its bad to hesitate but you are losing the words and poetry is all about choise of words so dont ruin the poets intention by making them inaudible. you need to pronounce them clearer. your accent is beautiful but dont let the words get lost.
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Please never take this video down. I've been going back to it off and on for three years now. It always brings chills to my spine. Thanks for that
saffiewaffey 8 months ago
wow i loved this, always loved this poem and i was hypnotised by the image and the vocal, i dont think the pronunciation is bad at all, adds a new dimension
dolescum79 1 year ago
you sicken me.
123ijah 1 year ago
creepy....i enjoyed the reading, a bit of a different take on the poem
starsandsuch 2 years ago 2
this is horrible. the pronunciation is bad, not that much poetic as expected. there's too much concentration on the effort at faking an emotion here. its more annoying than it is "magical"
kikizstud69 2 years ago
i disagree. I think the pronunciation is what makes it so striking, you have to listen closely to her voice to catch and understand every word, it is hypnotizing. As for faking emotion, I didn't get that from this at all. I love the soft sweetness of her voice and how much it contrast from the poem. An awesome video.
saffiewaffey 1 year ago
mmm. i love your video, this voice it is so apacible, so magical, i liken
doryangray 3 years ago
I will defend this video. It is actually a pretty good reading. She reads slowly; the way you are supposed to. Also, her tone makes you listen more closely to the words, which of course is crucial in poetry. The images are also good - - abstract. It is better than videos which try to match the words with images or dramatize a poem.
killianRZ 3 years ago 2
sick in a bad way
ninawillams 3 years ago
how bad is it?
iwentang 3 years ago
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rebonding 3 years ago
i love this poem!
mmmmmabel 3 years ago
what is this poem really about?
FoOneFive 3 years ago
This rendition is irritating. The whole video concentrates on her voice (which is sweet, but sickly so; passionless). There is no Sylvia Plath in this video at all, just words smeared with almost inaudible, sticky pronunciation.
cuntraversial 3 years ago
i have to disagree, this is a horrible reading of this poem. the voice is hesitant to say the words and ends up swallowing them, im not saying its bad to hesitate but you are losing the words and poetry is all about choise of words so dont ruin the poets intention by making them inaudible. you need to pronounce them clearer. your accent is beautiful but dont let the words get lost.
stylesavant2 3 years ago 7
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rolee83 3 years ago
How did you make this video. Did you use a computer microphone, and upload it?
sunclov 3 years ago
a brilliant rendition. Hands down. That little voice.
lisaaflowers 4 years ago
Holy ... just wow. This is really great.
SpindriftPages 4 years ago
thank you
iwentang 4 years ago
how you use your voice as well as the changing image illustrate the poem so well. thank you for sharing this <3
moshflailspin 4 years ago
I love this very much. The voice is perfect. The stops, pauses, inflections...all. I am inspired. Thank you
honeynutpie 4 years ago
thank you!
iwentang 4 years ago
Iwentang, that was amazing. Your voice is like liquid pearls... you really give quite a life to this poem :).
carnationsoul 4 years ago
amazingly moving voice because of the innocence and youth it implies. the poem itself is amazing, so putting the two together is just....gorgeous.
itsaase 4 years ago
I'm so happy to see your words....it makes my day...thank you! ! !
iwentang 4 years ago
Wow! Speechless...
damuse11 4 years ago
this is superlative, so much of a feeling
gratiangaldau 4 years ago
I hope you also like the voice....
iwentang 4 years ago
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my1name1is1Lily 4 years ago
It's so nice to see your comment.
iwentang 4 years ago