You Broke My Heart - A Justin Bieber Love Story Episode 11

[airizarry67]

wheres ep. 12??

[SonnyandChad]

@airizarry67 twitlonger(dot)com/show/7agqp4 episode 12

[ibelive03]

FREAKIN AMAZIN!

[marga4051]

awww AMAZING!!!

[322sweetie]

where is episode 12 at ??

[inarss777]

STOP MAKING ME CRY I AM VERY SENCEITIVE ON SAD THINGS ON um OH YEA COMPUTERS!

[KYRA5682]

awwwwww sooo sad!

[maddiemat97]

Where is #1?!?!\

Did you delete it

[JbiebsJasmineV]

were is the next episode............!!!???!!

[JbiebsJasmineV]

im looking for episode 12 if you already uploaded it.....

[07xol]

where the next chap?



[07xol]

where the next chap?

[SiindyBiieber]

NEXT

[CyrusBearFurshion5]

lol at one point where they break up you should make jasmine and justin sees her on the news i loved it

[ashorty101]

Awsome. i loved it.

[doggielover78]

awesome!!!

[vanessademijoe]

NiMine? JasNick? LOL :D Could you pretty please enter Miley? Hahahahhaha!

[wildgurl13]

OMB! :O I Hope They Get Back Together Then Again Nick And Jasmine Sounds Cute ;) Lol Well Whatever Happens Happens :D More Please!!!

[jenaycm09]

I know what's going on in the story and everything, and it's sad. It really is. But, you have to get better in your writting skills.

1.)You're telling a story (in POV's, but that doesnt matter), so you should be writting in past-tense. Example: "I cry into his chest as I cuddle into his chest." - Better - "We cuddled, and I cried into his chest." It's just proper grammer, you know?

2.) " *hugs you* " ~ He huged ME? -Better- *He hugged me, and said*.

I'm just trying to help, okay?

:D

[Iluvjbiebs321485]

you referred to Jasmine as Natalie in one part lol (:

[Aushie14]

loved it!!!! love da new intro!!! moreeeeee!!!