for one i loved the part where you recived the video of your house, i thought the was complete genuis, but i would of had it of a video of you coming home from school or something that day. and another, i liked what you were doing with the movie, but i felt the ending with the gun was a big disapointment, and the first half was way better, messeage me sometime dude i make movies to , im working on a new channel, but im using this one till i get my new one, hit me up.
You were almost on to sumpthin', coulda been Hella creepy had the killer saw you at your computer in the video and killed you then. Maybe it's just me but I find the typical serial killer with no impending sense of paranormal doom very tiresome indeed.
Scripting got quite unrealistic at one point too.
Don't let my lust for enormously high standards of scary freakitude put you off though, some promising ideas nonetheless.
Don't show the killer until the guy with the "Summer Knights" shirt sees him. Maintain continuity of Point of View: We identify with the main character, see the story from his p.o.v., so we should not see the killer until main character opens the door and sees him. Good switch to color at the end. Good storytelling & suspense
Good Job!! better than my movies i ever make :)
SuperKayDee14 9 months ago
you gotta be careful online thats the point of the movie right? cus they could really kill you thats scary man thanks for making this man
yourXDoom 1 year ago
scary but true you dont know who yu are talking to online its scary good vid man
yourXDoom 1 year ago
You know the Saw 1 song at the end, (Hello Zep) which part of the movie is it from? I haven't seen it in AGESSSSS :) Sorry, just wanna know :P
xolozziibaybee 1 year ago
NICELY DONE!
hardcore2148 2 years ago
talented
DARTAN09 2 years ago
quite nice clean smooth film, keep up the good work
95bradders95 2 years ago
i quite enjoyed this haha
darcyfox 2 years ago
very creative with the plot ideas.. my horror movie could be summed up as " guy gets chased through woods by person in white sheet"
ethanman101 2 years ago
Any one who put's his CREATIVITY, together enough to
actually follow through and make a movie is a
WINNER,excellent! ...wow!..the joy of Halloween. .A Haunted house experience
is the best!...if you are into it, Definately check this out!
it's a movie on you tube called, ENTER DOMAIN HOUSE .
it's a must see,creepy and scary,as well as haunting.
"SEE FOR YOURSELF!"...{a ghost}
joelglopez 2 years ago
TO MUCH MUSIC it would have been good if.... just if...
chloweful 2 years ago
Terrible. Very crappy, and not well done.
Now of course, your probably delete this comment. Because you can't stand criticism like a little kid.
Better luck next time...
Ryan33451234 2 years ago
Hi all this is a nice video!
watch my own made horror movie trailer.
Rendezvous with death: trailer
L3ctronik 2 years ago
yo i liked your creativty of camera angles it kinda inspired me to film a video similar. Not trying to copy you bro
but i posted a response to this videos of your insperation 4 me
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Pup3t33r 2 years ago
This was actually entertaining, most home made movies aren't.
4/5
Sometimes i could not see most of the words on msn.Great Video!
bc0wful 2 years ago
did he shoot him in his penius?
kkkiiizzz778 2 years ago
OK this video was just Pure genius. I was a little confused at the end and the quality sucked but still i like the vid.
xshipx999 2 years ago
had me hook from beginning to end, I like it alot, and I'm not a big fan of stuff like this. So 10/10 good job!
thesuperstarjtr8162 2 years ago
Alrite dude 2 things, ..
for one i loved the part where you recived the video of your house, i thought the was complete genuis, but i would of had it of a video of you coming home from school or something that day. and another, i liked what you were doing with the movie, but i felt the ending with the gun was a big disapointment, and the first half was way better, messeage me sometime dude i make movies to , im working on a new channel, but im using this one till i get my new one, hit me up.
newfie742 2 years ago
hahah i´ve got the same sox like you
PokerFaceDumbass 2 years ago
good job jusy when you sent them messages on MSN it was hard to see what they said Overall 8/10
supertechn9ne 2 years ago
I was kind of lost in the beginning, but as I watched I wanted to see more ! Good job !
lawrence1522 2 years ago
6:58 and 7:20 lol the look on ur face:)
qwerty123104 2 years ago
FUCKIN KOOL MAN
Freerunningpimp 3 years ago
tha was sooo coll lol ...... from rainbowsandfriends .....xxxx
rainbowsandfriends 3 years ago
This movie is fucking cool mate!
askwhatyouwant 3 years ago
You were almost on to sumpthin', coulda been Hella creepy had the killer saw you at your computer in the video and killed you then. Maybe it's just me but I find the typical serial killer with no impending sense of paranormal doom very tiresome indeed.
Scripting got quite unrealistic at one point too.
Don't let my lust for enormously high standards of scary freakitude put you off though, some promising ideas nonetheless.
And Manson ain't scary by the way.
ThePerm 3 years ago
Haha okay. But I didn't have a script. I didn't have a crew. I filmed myself at a computer for a weekened.
snipenater 3 years ago
really good i liked it (favored)
GooglyEyeProductions 3 years ago
i have that airsoft gun...:)
RxWxTxFxx6xx6 3 years ago
nice movie!!love it. it was intense, suspeseful...
adidasDC 3 years ago
What was the creepy song at the end called?
KrispyFriedChildren 3 years ago
As I recall that was "Hello Zep," from the first Saw movie.
Jesus I was fat in that movie
snipenater 3 years ago
@snipenater lol you werent fat
ThePupellafashion 1 year ago
saw 3 theme
Riizy 3 years ago
marilyn manson sings that:D... nice concept:D
soloboy1991 3 years ago 2
i think it was good
tyman4443 3 years ago 2
Yes, it's ver good, but i wouldn't have added any music to the background, but then again that's me.
usteeler81 3 years ago
Lol.
Ermm twas funny
twas quite good but
his display picture on msn was blates not his body! jeese.
Funny not scary but good effort...=]
chickenellie 3 years ago
Very well done
theflowrocks 3 years ago 4
That was intense!
Great job!
baileymercredi 3 years ago 4
AWESOME MAN!
BEST HOME MADE EVER!
+Fav
cheatsbr 4 years ago 4
i realy felt like the character, great job with the movie.
mihaispinoche 4 years ago 4
This is a really nice piece of work, The music is really fluent and smooth. I give it 5 stars!
moktook 4 years ago 3
That Was Great For A home Made Movie!
5 Star.
flippit08 4 years ago 3
dude, that was tight
Dakotizza 4 years ago 2
Don't show the killer until the guy with the "Summer Knights" shirt sees him. Maintain continuity of Point of View: We identify with the main character, see the story from his p.o.v., so we should not see the killer until main character opens the door and sees him. Good switch to color at the end. Good storytelling & suspense
petrocollapse 4 years ago 2