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  • Aww.. I LOVE reading on FanFiction and to find out you deleted it, such a shame, you could have at least left it there to read :'(

    If any of y'all is interested try my stories, not as good but will suffice..

    ~LilyCullenSalvatore96

  • Why is it read? I wanted it gone so bad ;(

  • I had this on my TBR list but wasn't really interested in the story, so I didn't put reading it as a priority. I heard it got deleted and wasn't really bothered. I've just watched this and now I really want to read it. Sigh.

  • To this day it is still the greatest fanfic I have ever read:)

  • My friends all told me how amazing this fanfic was and i was so excited to read it but looking for it now and it's gone? I'm broken hearted trying to find a copy and if anyone knows where there's one i'd be mad grateful..

  • @LuigiCarey Yes, it is gone. I can't provide deleted fics. I know there are copies available on deleted fic list in the fandom or you could try emailing the author.

  • @Alitriona She deleted it...she didn't want to write fanfictions anymore :/

  • why is it gone i want to read it so bad

  • aw i really wanted to read it but it's gone! :(

  • Why is it gone!? i wanted to read it so bad...

  • WHY IS IT GONE. WHY. WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY!?

  • why isn't it on Fanfiction anymore?!!? ahhh!! i really want to read this story!!!! pkease put it back up or something!

  • i want to read this story! please. do you have a copy? i swear it's for personal use only. i just find it interesting. is it an E/B story?@Alitriona

  • I loved this story! Shame that it's no longer on FF.net

  • I woulda loved to read this story, its a shame its no longer on FF.net xx

  • NOOOO! i can't find this story....

  • Love love love this!!! Recently read the story and then found this...you did amazing at effectively portraying everything!!! Brava!!! Went to go look at her other stories and they were gone though ;(

  • I cried all four times i read this story and i will awlways cry. But I also felt like i was there laughing when they laughed and there when as they were remembering . I just want to say keep up the good work and you are my favorite writer out there. Love ya brattyvamp

  • **SPOILER!! Don't read this if you havn't read the fanfiction**

    I have read 'The Best Man' and OMG it was SO great! I litterally cried for hours when Jasper and Alice died!! Omg it's SOOOO well written and the whole relationship between Jasper and Bella is just so sweet! <3

    And I love that Edward and Bella get a son and name him Jasper! Awww, this is really the BEST fanfiction I have ever read!!

    And this video... Is just perfect. I cried again. So beautifull!

    (Sorry for my bad english...)

  • Im glad you used My Girl. I LOVED that movie made me cry

  • THIS IS FUNNY (( NOT THE VID)) I READ THIS STORY & SAW THIS VID AWHILE BACK & FOR MONTHS I LOOKED AROUND TRYING TO FIND IT AGAIN BUT HAD NO LUCK DUE TO MY FORGETFULNESS OF NOT FAVORING IT IN EITHER YT OR FF WELL I HAPPEN TO STUMBLE UPON IT NOW SO JUST WANTED TO SAY I LOVE IT!! GOOD JOB...

  • I absolutely loved this story. No joke, I felt as though my own best friends died when Jasper and Alice did. But I was watching The Hitcher last night, and I had noo idea the shower scene you used was from that movie. I literally jumped up and down. Hahah (:

    Keep on the great work. Your stories are amazing.

  • @likecloudsthatfly I think I'm in the minority when I say I prefer the new Hitcher to the original. lol. I think Sean Bean makes a great baddy.

  • I just finished reading "The Best Man" and I cried so hard! Such a wonderfully written story! I've been telling all my friends that read fanfic's to check out your story & I've even tweeted about it, lol. This video made me cry just as hard as the story did. You should be proud of writing such a wonderful, emotioned fueled story. It really was amazing!! I loved the closness Bella and Jazz shared. When we're lucky enough to find a friend like that we try to hold on with everything we have. Bravo!

  • @michelleroberson2700 Thank you for your lovely comments. The writer is Bratty-Vamp and she writes wonderful stories. Every one is a joy to read.

  • omg ive read the best man and i loved that story it made me cry so much i think it is one of the best stories to read i mean i even read it more than once because it was so great but its really sad and i love ur video its great to and it made me cry ur video is actually what got me to read the best man because ur video made it look like such a great story and it really is even though alice and jasper died i loved the ending of it when they had a kid and named him jasper it was so cute and sad :)

  • what is the song in this video? :)

    and I wanna read this fanfiction.

  • That was great! Hey check out my story! I To Be Or Not To Be. My profile is twilightcullen21 =) REVIEW PLEASE

  • That was great! Hey check out my story! I To Be Or Not To Be. My profile is twilightcullen21 =) REVIEW PLEASE

  • This is one of the best Fanfictions that i have ever read. It made me cry so much. Well done you did a good job with the story! :)

  • what call the song its on wideo??

  • OMG this was amazing i remeber seeing this video oon my homepage i didn't watch it at first but now i'm soo glad i watched it i got to watch an amazing video and read an amazing story :)

  • This is one of the best fanfictions I've ever read. It made me cry so much, yet I couldn't get mad at the ending because it was such a beautiful story. Your video is perfect in every way and I wouldn't change a thing. When I saw the quote at the end I almost started to cry again. ♥

  • OMG I love your video!!!!! The song was PERFECT & you captured the important scenes beautifully!!!! I just read this fic & it's already one of my favorites!!!!!!

  • saw your video then read the best man I love this video My girl used to be my fav movie when i was younger

  • Loved your video, cannot wait to read your fanfic story!!! I am a true fan of the awesome stories you all write!!! I have subbed, and am looking forward's to falling deeply in to your novel... ; )

  • OH MY GOD! I read this a few months ago and I loved it, got mad and cried a lot, it burned inside of me, and this video just about says it all, if you haven't read it go NOW and do it, you wont regret it!

  • This is one of the best fics and one of the best video's that I have seen , I loved it and made me cry right along with the story that goes with it.....great job!!!!!

  • i've just finished reading the story...and sure as hell, i've like a baby.

    the video is great!!1

  • wow. just wow.. i just finished the story earlier today and i absolutely loved it..and then seeing this i teared up again. a truly amazing video to represent the story. amazing.. wow!

  • Looks interesting!! I think I'll take a look at it. =)

  • I just finished this story a few nights ago & I cried like a baby reading! This video also made me cry, I can't believe how well everything seemed to fit together in this. You did an amazing job & I shall be sharing this with anyone I know who reads fanfic and has read this story!! Thank you for sharing with us!!

  • I just finished reading "The Best Man" didn't know anything about the story until I came across you video. With the spoiler alert on you video, I decided to read the story before I watched. I am so glad I did...the story is the first fanfic that made me cry and it was so cool to see you video after I read the story. It was neat to see all the different things that happened in the story in your video...Loved it! Great job!

  • I just got to basketball chapter. It's so funny & sweet. Hope it's got a HEA

  • I agree with everyone else here. The story had me sobbing and now here I am crying again. My husband came home and thought that someone in my family had died the way I was crying and when I finally got out the words Jasper and Alice, he said, WHO? :-)

    Now I'm sure he'll look over again and wonder why I'm crying again

    You really captured the story perfectly. Great music.

  • I read 'The Best Man' a few months ago and I cried like almost never before... You're video made me cry again. You did a fantastic job and can be really proud of yourself. But I do have one question. Where is the shower scene clip from. It was such an heart wrenching moment in the story and the couple in the clip looks just like I imagined E & B in that scene.

  • @Andelin The shower scene is from the new version of the Hitcher with Sean Bean. Thanks you for your kind comments.

  • @Andelin I cried all over agian to i love this series and it makes cry everytime i read it or watch the trailer

  • @Andelin I cryed when i read like a baby and this is really good video for the trailer. I love this series and Jasper and alice will live on awlways

  • Oh man, i have to go back and read the story again! I laughed, I cried, I cried, I felt some angst when I read the story... and just stumbling upon this is making me want to read it again!

  • I finished this story today and from the moment I read Alice & Jasper had died until the very end I was in tears. Literally blawing my eyes out!

    The memories chapter was the worst for me. It got to the point where I couldn't see the words and needed to calm down before I could carry on. And when Bella goes to her room and pretend's J is there. It broke my heart.

    A Fanfic hasn't touched me this way in a long time and I think it has to do with the face I lost some who was 24 so it touched home!

  • wounderfull video for a such wounderfull fic. i'm just finesh reed and i'm still crying. beautifull. congrats!

  • this story was just the right mix or happiness drama and twists it made me cry like a baby and it was amazing the trailer matched up with it almost perfectly great job you rock!!!

    -Amanda

  • One of my favorite fanfics. This video was perfectly done!

  • , oh my gosh it was such a good story, it made me snot sob though

  • This story was the first and only twilight fanfiction that really made me full on cry! It was just an unexpected event, but thats what made it so heartbreaking because thats how real life is. having lost a best friend myself because of an accident it just really hit home, and this video was definitely a great companion to that story. You did a great job in putting it together.

  • @silverwingedwitch Very sorry to hear about your loss, thank you for still taking the time to come and watch, and comment on the video.

  • It s so amazing!!! i read this fanfiction earlier n it s cool))))tnx for the trailer and the fanfiction))) love u xxx

  • Loved the Story, made me cry, and then the video to go with it made it even better....love it

  • JUST PERFECTION... just read ch.21 .. *sobs*

  • What movie is this scene --> 4:37 from?

    thanks.

  • I bawled like a baby when I read the fan fiction and again when I watched the video...well done

  • A fantastic film for a fantastic story! I read this because of the story and you're video is a perfect representation of the story. You should be proud of your work and so should the author of this beautiful and emotionally charged story. :)

  • @luvyahunx Thank, as I say all the time, it remains one of my all time favorite stories.

  • The scene 2:12 what movie is it from?

  • @skandargeorgiefan The messengers.

  • @Alitriona I meant the paintball scene

  • @skandargeorgiefan Ahh, sorry, that's from Failure to Launch.

  • @Alitriona It's okay, thanks=)

  • I just finished reading this story and it was amazing! It made me laugh and bawl my eyes out. Seriously great writing by the author.

  • one of the best fanfics I have read. Video is awesome and fits the story so well.

  • wow I'm intrigued! good story! and I guess you should start working about this seriously! you shoud make the movie!

  • is this a bella and edward story????.......why is jackson rathbone there?????/

  • I only read this story once, I loved it but I don't want to read it again. It was too sad for me :(

  • what is 2:07 from

  • I think this video goes great with the story!! I love what I have read so far!.. In fact this video is the whole reason I started reading the story! Wonderful trailer!! Wonderful story!!

  • i read the story before n one day said omg there might be fanfiction trailers and this was the first one popped up. i clicked on it right away and i was like woooh that is so freaking like the book :D you got some mad skillz girl it was like reading it but seeing it if you get what i mean

  • I've actually watch the entire thing in a 9 hour span. I couldn't pull away from it. It was beautifully written and an emotional roller coaster. I love it and I will proudly admit that I blubbered like a baby at the saddest part. I'm not going to give anything away in case others want to read it. I would definitely recommend it.

  • GAH!! This story made me cry at the end. I love this story!!

  • I just finished reading TBM and was so moved by it. Amazing story and so well written! Wonderful video!!!

  • Amazing video :)

    Whats the 2:16 clip from?

  • @DarkRoseST The clip is from Failure to Launch. :-)

  • I have just finished reading the best man it has ti be one of my favourite storys to read then i come accross this video its amazing!!! the song is perfect & made me cry some more if thats possible lol!!!

  • I just finished reading TBM just then. I loved it. And this video is amazing.

  • I just finished reading The Best Man and I don't think a FanFic has ever made me cry so much. It is a wonderful story. Amazing!!!!

  • I don´t know why I keep watching this video, it´s so powerfull and true to the story.. my heart aches everytime.. for the love of God! Bella and Edward´s pain is soooo strong I can feel it... The Best Man is in my Top 5 fanfics. Bratty is amazing.

  • Just finished reading "the best man" a few minutes ago. I have honestly never been moved that much by a fanfic story, but I was bawling from the end of chapter 21 all the way to the end.

  • wow. I loved this video. It's just perfect! It has everything in it. I loved it. Thanks for that. I just finished reading the best man and thought I would come check this out. I'm still crying because those last few chapters are a killer! gawd but it was so worth it. Loved this video and loved the story!

  • I love The Best Man..soo far! :)

    You have to read it!!

  • @MnK100pro I've read it, it is one of my favorite stories ever. Bratty is an amazing writer.

  • Great video- you did an awesome job =D

  • I really like this video it fits the story so perfect!

  • great video it fits the story very well :]

  • i promised im going to read it and i read it. its one of the BEST fanfictions i EVER read in my WHOLE life. thank you to the author and the videomaker here <3 thank you so much.

  • Really, this by far is one of the best vidoes done for a twilight fanfic. I've watched it several times over the past few months. It certainly helps that this is STILL one of my all time favorite stories on there. Touches my heart every time. No lie! Great job on this trailer!!

  • I love love LOVE this story

  • going to read it yay <3

  • OMG! This brings back memories. I absolutely loved The Best Man. I bawled my eyes out. It was one of the best stories I've read.

  • great video.... so i have to read it now. i already added it to my favorites on ff'n. i cheated and i skimmed... i cried...great story i cant wait to read all of it!!

  • i think am gonna read

  • I only watched the trailer and I was bawlin'!

  • That as brilliant. Captures the story brilliantly. Well done

  • Great trailer, I cried like a baby when I read this fic and your video brought all the emotion right back to the surface. Awesome job.

  • I read this fic ages ago, I really need to read it again.

    Great Video!

  • 5*'s!!

    Really great vid!

    I've read the story before and absolutely loved it!! All i can say is your editing of the clips and song choice beautifully captured the story.

    :)

  • You did an AMAZING job with this trailer. I read this fic ages ago and I still love it. This really brought the whole story out in a beautiful way! Wonderful wonderful job!!

  • I just finished this wonderful story and you have created a beautiful depiction of it....really brings it to life.

  • when i saw the video i didn't have read the story and i didn't understand so much so i decided to read the book and it was amazing and it had much laugh!!i saw again the video and i understand every scenes!!!love it!!

  • omg i read this its amazing and so accurate good job

  • you depressed me when the funural happend :*(

  • who singing this song?

    It's sounds familiar, but i don't remember it

  • Edwin McCain - I'll be. It's mentioned in the begining chapters of the fiction.

  • this is a really good trailer!! you can actually see old next door neighbors when they were little. My Girl was a good movie to get clips from!!

  • i loved this story really.. but it's so depressing! this really makes me want to cry

  • OMG! This was so freaking great. I just finished the story, which completely ripped my heart out, and now after watching this video it's been ripped out all over again.

    Really great job!

  • Oh WOWW......

    That was amazing, and DAMMIT I did ruin it for myself! I have not read the entire story yet.....oh well, I still love this video though!!

    GREAT JOB! ^_^

  • Amazing. You really did a great job capturing the story. <3

  • Wow, wonderful vid. You brought justice to the story. Amazing job.

  • I just finished reading it and I was literally in tears. I love the video. Its brilliant.

    Amanda =]

  • this was unbelievably amazing.

    i cried, its a truley great story

  • Oh, this is just so perfect! I so cried!!

    And can you tell me what's the title of the song? Thank you.

  • wow, that's a great video!! bratty-vamp is one of my favorite fanfic writers....and the best man was a great fic. thanks for creating and sharing this video! :)

  • im like all the other commenters i finshed the story last night and watched the video this afternoon now im cry happy tear for edward and bella and also sobbing because of poor alice and jasper!

    im bestfriends with a boy so this really hit me hard but he has no hot brother like edward :(

    awsome video ! 5 stars and straight into my favs!

  • Awesome (BestMan) story, very funny and sad, I can't stop crying. I'm so glad it has a happy ending or else I would be so depress.

  • I saw this video first (then I kicked myself cause of the spoilers...I can only blame myself) but I loved the story. Awesome job,.

  • what a great compliment to the story, well done

  • read all books ? umm nice

    but i dont get what its about

    but good

  • Ahh! I can't stop crying! Dang it! I just finished the story last night and watched this video this AM and am crying all over again! Amazing job on the video. You got all of the great parts of the story.

  • LOVED IT!!!!

    i just finished reading the story, .......and WOW

    it was absolutely wonderful, i cried sooo hard when i read it,....and i cried again when i saw the video.

    GREAT STORY!!!

  • great story and video...

  • really, really awesome job! the fic is one of my all time favorites, and you really did it justice with your video!

  • this vid is amazing

    I'm looking for that song!!!

  • AWESOME video!!! I loved that fanfic!! its definately one of my favs! I just got done reading it for the first time and I cried like a baby! then I saw that you had made a video for it, and now I'm crying all over again! lol Great job!

  • I love that fanfic. Absolutely amazing Jasper!

  • Best fanfic I've ever read and will ever read. it made me cry so much, and so did this! you're soo good! lol :) xx

  • God I actually started getting teary thru this! This was made so brilliantly!

  • i just got finished reading this fanfic. it was amazing!

  • this is such a good fanfiction

    i really enjoyed reading it ^_^

  • I adored this ff, this works perfectly with it, fab job Mrs...

  • That was adorable! I loved the story and the video goes so well with it. It was really well made, I wish I could do that.

  • Oh and the MY GIRL clios worked so beautifully! Ironic how they have the same ending though.

  • Man! That was beyond perfect! You are very good at this.

  • this was wicked!!! it was very well put together!! just like the story!

  • this was wicked!!! it was very well put together!! just like the story!

  • Wow! that was really good I read the story and I think that you did an awesome job-- I especially liked how u had a scene in there with jasper playing the guitar

  • you captured the story perfectly, this is incredible. thank you.

  • I don't get it... is it Edward/Bella, or Jasper/Bella?

  • Edward/ Bella. Her and Jasper are just best friends.

  • Aww, this was perfect! It fit exactly with the story. Man, I am emotional all over again. GREAT JOB!!!

  • This is just Perfect

    Fits the actual story perfectly

    i was wondering if you like make vids for other people aswell,..

    TheMaskedDreamer

  • I love that Story and this just made it even better. your very talented

    x

    I actually think i cried at it...

  • AWESOME, bb. Perfect. You have great talent.

  • I love this story! It was so shocking, and I cried through part of it -- but loved all of it. You did a great job on the video!

  • Freaking outstanding! OMG!!! I read this fanfic in a day and ran over here as soon as I was done!! Amazing! <3333

  • Where is the shower scene at 4:37 from!?!?!

  • holy shit...that was soooo friggin good..I bawled like a baby reading the fanfic and I bawled like a baby watching this video. the editing was beyond beautiful and just wow!

  • Told you I would be back! well a cried like a baby at the story and just cried again at the vid - oh the story was great and you have vidded it to perfection - you must take ages scouring for clips they always fit to the story just rite! Amazing - off to watch again! lol xx

  • oh my god, i loved it! I read this fic a while back and cried like a baby because of the ending. u did a great job at making a vid for it. amazing!

  • i love this video *---* veryyyyyyyy ;D

    5 stars ;D

    cheek my on videos from edward e bella? please ;D add to my friend ;D

    i want to see more yoours videos ;]

    xoxo ~~

  • okk - its killling me not to watch this vid - so i'm off to read like blazes - not fun when hungover and needin sleep but I'll be back to watch this very soon! xx

  • PERFECT!!!! Wow....you are such a rockstar for making this vid! EXCELLENT!

    pssst....ever thought of doing one for AIC? If you've read it before, that is :)

  • This was amazing! It made me cry, just like the fic. Great job!

  • love this fic sfm!!! GReat vid :D

  • the airport scence was the best moment of that fic,

  • OMG this was so amazing! I read this story and the video is perfect translation of it. Nice job!