Too slow. Trying to hard to make it flow but it's not working. Sorry bro.
ps. Not tryin to rhyme either
LeadLead 1 year ago
@LeadLead lol its all good man..i did that bout a year ago. ive improved. but thanx for coming by and checkin it out. 1
daroundhero 1 year ago
@daroundhero No worries - still checkin out your other stuff. Keep it up and thanks for positive reply. Haha better than the usual "stfu haterz" bs. Good man.
@LeadLead no doubt. i dont take anything offensive if u have a reasoning behind it...
now if u just came here "u wack, u suck, stop rapping" then id be an asswhole but u had contructive criticism so thank you sir
i dont feel it.
TheKingofNubs 2 years ago
@TheKingofNubs thanx for coming thru though
daroundhero 2 years ago
dude im feeling this....
jairod88 2 years ago 2
That's Was Clean I Had To Play It Back Twice....Nice [Lol I Wasn't Trying To Rhyme]
AddressinAllProblems 2 years ago
thanx for coming thru man...
thanx for the support
subscribe and check out my two new tracks that just came out today
shits smooth my nig
darealyoungtrip 2 years ago
thanx man
This has been flagged as spam show
no problem check my tracks out and let me know what you think
Good shit man
MikeI3low 2 years ago
thanx yo
Imo you're the front runner from what I have seen.
Best of luck to u
thanx X 2...
i just wanted to put some truth out there....majority want to just spit a fast verse and make it sound cool...its gotta mean something right?
Yea man all my favorite rappers make you think its a must!
It was sick my man. Good message. There's more to life than what your hands can grasp!
willisdaillest 2 years ago
thanx for checkin it dude
killed it with the metaphors!
check out mine.
YoungProfessionalz 2 years ago
thanx homie!
ill shit man keep it up
dl111190 2 years ago
thanx bro
2Deep
Respect Holmes
TheWarkid187 2 years ago
thanx man...hopefully its good enuff to at least be recognized
hey this is good shit man. your lyrics have meaning, and a lesson, plus it rhymes well with some nice inners and you got nice flow.
ProBinderSpinner 2 years ago
thanx yo! i dont usually do acapella...so i had to come with sumtin to say instead of how i say it..u kno?
thanx for coming by...and go check my otha stuffffffs subcribe and good stuff
duuuuuude that was sick and when i saw on dah vid i got a lil confused with u and mj lol peace out
SiLvErUnIt911 2 years ago
thanx homie...and uh haha yea sum people say that too
looked a lil nervous in the beginning but damn u blew that shit up man foreal
dpaosd 2 years ago
yea i dont really know how to act on camera...so i just let my lyrics do tha damn thing haha
Dawg. this is good! no joke! lol
Check mine out! fa real
Phajpahee50 2 years ago
thanx man...i'll go check it out in a lil bit
This was nice, keep it up!
VersatilePoetiq 2 years ago
thanx dude
I like this man, looked a little nervous on cam at first but opened up really hot lyrically. Peep my video if you got a minute..
DTK
JoshDTK 2 years ago
haha yea i didnt really know what to say at the beggining and i dont usually video record myself....
but thanx for coming thru and checkn...i'll give yos a look in a lil bit
That was sick man, freestyle?
The1Benji 2 years ago
nah im an aight freestyle...im not all great at it...
lyrics were on point, flow was on point, one of my favorites for sure!
check mine out when you get the chance
peace
lypse14 2 years ago
thanx yo!
i'll give it a look in a lil
good shit i liked how yu broke it down
chitodaillest 2 years ago
thanx homie
no trollin
i got some competition 4 ya bro
MangaKaChakku 2 years ago
not lookin for competition but good luck lol
thanx for comin thru
see im compacted with and interact with
actors that wear an onyx mask and want pac to quit
-one of the greatest lines i've heard in this competition!! props man, tight lyrics and best of luck
btw, check me out on this contest sometime, peace!
pkgermay 2 years ago
thanx homie!
i was just puting all heart in it...
ill roll by yours and see whats up...
and check out my new vids and clik dat yellow button haha
check out universe his verse is up check my channel
ThaUnknownUniverse 2 years ago
fa sho...but what you think of mine?
That was dope...some real intelligent shit...check mines out
GotchaFilms 2 years ago
thanx dude i will in a lil bit
I've been watching a lot of these a capella things. Yours is one of the better ones, even though you took it nice n slow.
quintopia 2 years ago
thanx man...
i wanted it slower so everyone can hear what i say instead of them having to read it...u know?
and plus my accent will kick in and it'll become difficult lol
thanx for coming thru and get to clickin that yellow button...lol i got more coming
Ya Shits Tighter Than A Virgin In Skinny Jeanss..
DFLEXONDABLOCK 2 years ago
lol thanx man
thats was ill bro
410MaXiMuS 2 years ago
thanx man...subscribe and check out my otha trax and vids
Shits Sick Broey..
...Hope mine Compares To Yoors..!!
M00MDADDY 2 years ago
thanx dude..i'll go check yours out
daz was nice STRONG lyrics
did i mention that u
were
HOTTT!!!
Sexiless 2 years ago
thanx mama!...
check out my otha ish and subsribe
sick stuff bro like all youre stuff keep it up man
mex3017 2 years ago
thanx bro
that was ill and nice delivery
niftyneek 2 years ago
thanx for the support
It was cool you had a straight flow through out, packed a message and what not, 5 Stars for ya bruh 'n yo, Check my drop for tha contest
DaKidAwMe 2 years ago
thanx man...i'll go give it a look in a minute
haters gon hate...your lyrics were on point.
KwikRhymes 2 years ago
thanx homie...
good shit, check mine out i put it up as well
905NOBODY 2 years ago
EPIC FAIL
ITZTRAG 2 years ago
thanx for viewing anyways
why you goin to everyones video for the contest sayin epic fail?.. sounds like someones jealous of all the people who actually have skill..lol
DsMagic 2 years ago
This is what i do lol
Not bad man. I like the lyrics man. Good job.
5* bro.
-Already subscribed
LilHomie52 2 years ago
best energy so far,
and great message.
krillansavillan 2 years ago
you really think so??
thanx man that boosted my confidence right now cuz im in a shitty mood!
subscribe and what not
tis nice bruhh
jlopezmuzik 2 years ago
already did
Good shit good shit homie.
thanx homie...klick dat yellow button
this is tight mang...the lyrics r deep 2..im diggin it..
trakzproductionz 2 years ago
thanx bro!
i like dis..dope lyrics
Clasiq7 2 years ago
thanx man
its choppy, but the message out shines the flow. the flow might not be fire but you dropping bombs with the message. its good overall.
DmasterF 2 years ago
yea i wasnt really working on a flow...i just had sumtin to say...thanx for watching...
i wouldve freestyled it but im not that good at it yet...lol
tight
romeok2 2 years ago
thanx man!
thanx dude!
yo i saw dis beat that was made of a sonic sample i'll send u da link in a minute
that was quick, and still fire! good luck with the competition
toZuProductions 2 years ago
i just wanted to put sumtin out and what not...
Too slow. Trying to hard to make it flow but it's not working. Sorry bro.
ps. Not tryin to rhyme either
LeadLead 1 year ago
@LeadLead lol its all good man..i did that bout a year ago. ive improved. but thanx for coming by and checkin it out. 1
daroundhero 1 year ago
@daroundhero No worries - still checkin out your other stuff. Keep it up and thanks for positive reply. Haha better than the usual "stfu haterz" bs. Good man.
LeadLead 1 year ago
@LeadLead no doubt. i dont take anything offensive if u have a reasoning behind it...
now if u just came here "u wack, u suck, stop rapping" then id be an asswhole but u had contructive criticism so thank you sir
daroundhero 1 year ago
i dont feel it.
TheKingofNubs 2 years ago
@TheKingofNubs thanx for coming thru though
daroundhero 2 years ago
dude im feeling this....
jairod88 2 years ago 2
That's Was Clean I Had To Play It Back Twice....Nice [Lol I Wasn't Trying To Rhyme]
AddressinAllProblems 2 years ago
thanx for coming thru man...
thanx for the support
subscribe and check out my two new tracks that just came out today
daroundhero 2 years ago
shits smooth my nig
darealyoungtrip 2 years ago
thanx man
daroundhero 2 years ago
This has been flagged as spam show
no problem check my tracks out and let me know what you think
darealyoungtrip 2 years ago
Good shit man
MikeI3low 2 years ago
thanx yo
daroundhero 2 years ago
Imo you're the front runner from what I have seen.
Best of luck to u
MikeI3low 2 years ago
thanx X 2...
i just wanted to put some truth out there....majority want to just spit a fast verse and make it sound cool...its gotta mean something right?
daroundhero 2 years ago
Yea man all my favorite rappers make you think its a must!
MikeI3low 2 years ago
It was sick my man. Good message. There's more to life than what your hands can grasp!
willisdaillest 2 years ago
thanx for checkin it dude
daroundhero 2 years ago
killed it with the metaphors!
check out mine.
YoungProfessionalz 2 years ago
thanx homie!
daroundhero 2 years ago
ill shit man keep it up
dl111190 2 years ago
thanx bro
daroundhero 2 years ago
2Deep
Respect Holmes
TheWarkid187 2 years ago
thanx man...hopefully its good enuff to at least be recognized
daroundhero 2 years ago
hey this is good shit man. your lyrics have meaning, and a lesson, plus it rhymes well with some nice inners and you got nice flow.
ProBinderSpinner 2 years ago
thanx yo! i dont usually do acapella...so i had to come with sumtin to say instead of how i say it..u kno?
thanx for coming by...and go check my otha stuffffffs subcribe and good stuff
daroundhero 2 years ago
duuuuuude that was sick and when i saw on dah vid i got a lil confused with u and mj lol peace out
SiLvErUnIt911 2 years ago
thanx homie...and uh haha yea sum people say that too
daroundhero 2 years ago
looked a lil nervous in the beginning but damn u blew that shit up man foreal
dpaosd 2 years ago
yea i dont really know how to act on camera...so i just let my lyrics do tha damn thing haha
daroundhero 2 years ago
Dawg. this is good! no joke! lol
Check mine out! fa real
Phajpahee50 2 years ago
thanx man...i'll go check it out in a lil bit
daroundhero 2 years ago
This was nice, keep it up!
VersatilePoetiq 2 years ago
thanx dude
daroundhero 2 years ago
I like this man, looked a little nervous on cam at first but opened up really hot lyrically. Peep my video if you got a minute..
DTK
JoshDTK 2 years ago
haha yea i didnt really know what to say at the beggining and i dont usually video record myself....
but thanx for coming thru and checkn...i'll give yos a look in a lil bit
daroundhero 2 years ago
That was sick man, freestyle?
The1Benji 2 years ago
nah im an aight freestyle...im not all great at it...
daroundhero 2 years ago
lyrics were on point, flow was on point, one of my favorites for sure!
check mine out when you get the chance
peace
lypse14 2 years ago
thanx yo!
i'll give it a look in a lil
daroundhero 2 years ago
good shit i liked how yu broke it down
chitodaillest 2 years ago
thanx homie
daroundhero 2 years ago
no trollin
i got some competition 4 ya bro
MangaKaChakku 2 years ago
not lookin for competition but good luck lol
thanx for comin thru
daroundhero 2 years ago
see im compacted with and interact with
actors that wear an onyx mask and want pac to quit
-one of the greatest lines i've heard in this competition!! props man, tight lyrics and best of luck
btw, check me out on this contest sometime, peace!
pkgermay 2 years ago
thanx homie!
i was just puting all heart in it...
ill roll by yours and see whats up...
and check out my new vids and clik dat yellow button haha
daroundhero 2 years ago
check out universe his verse is up check my channel
ThaUnknownUniverse 2 years ago
fa sho...but what you think of mine?
daroundhero 2 years ago
That was dope...some real intelligent shit...check mines out
GotchaFilms 2 years ago
thanx dude i will in a lil bit
daroundhero 2 years ago
I've been watching a lot of these a capella things. Yours is one of the better ones, even though you took it nice n slow.
quintopia 2 years ago
thanx man...
i wanted it slower so everyone can hear what i say instead of them having to read it...u know?
and plus my accent will kick in and it'll become difficult lol
thanx for coming thru and get to clickin that yellow button...lol i got more coming
daroundhero 2 years ago
Ya Shits Tighter Than A Virgin In Skinny Jeanss..
DFLEXONDABLOCK 2 years ago
lol thanx man
daroundhero 2 years ago
thats was ill bro
410MaXiMuS 2 years ago
thanx man...subscribe and check out my otha trax and vids
daroundhero 2 years ago
Shits Sick Broey..
...Hope mine Compares To Yoors..!!
M00MDADDY 2 years ago
thanx dude..i'll go check yours out
daroundhero 2 years ago
daz was nice STRONG lyrics
did i mention that u
were
HOTTT!!!
Sexiless 2 years ago
thanx mama!...
check out my otha ish and subsribe
daroundhero 2 years ago
sick stuff bro like all youre stuff keep it up man
mex3017 2 years ago
thanx bro
daroundhero 2 years ago
that was ill and nice delivery
niftyneek 2 years ago
thanx for the support
daroundhero 2 years ago
It was cool you had a straight flow through out, packed a message and what not, 5 Stars for ya bruh 'n yo, Check my drop for tha contest
DaKidAwMe 2 years ago
thanx man...i'll go give it a look in a minute
daroundhero 2 years ago
haters gon hate...your lyrics were on point.
KwikRhymes 2 years ago
thanx homie...
daroundhero 2 years ago
good shit, check mine out i put it up as well
905NOBODY 2 years ago
EPIC FAIL
ITZTRAG 2 years ago
thanx for viewing anyways
daroundhero 2 years ago
why you goin to everyones video for the contest sayin epic fail?.. sounds like someones jealous of all the people who actually have skill..lol
DsMagic 2 years ago
This is what i do lol
ITZTRAG 2 years ago
Not bad man. I like the lyrics man. Good job.
5* bro.
-Already subscribed
LilHomie52 2 years ago
thanx man
daroundhero 2 years ago
best energy so far,
and great message.
krillansavillan 2 years ago
you really think so??
thanx man that boosted my confidence right now cuz im in a shitty mood!
subscribe and what not
daroundhero 2 years ago
tis nice bruhh
jlopezmuzik 2 years ago
thanx bro
daroundhero 2 years ago
already did
daroundhero 2 years ago
Good shit good shit homie.
KwikRhymes 2 years ago
thanx homie...klick dat yellow button
daroundhero 2 years ago
this is tight mang...the lyrics r deep 2..im diggin it..
trakzproductionz 2 years ago
thanx bro!
daroundhero 2 years ago
i like dis..dope lyrics
Clasiq7 2 years ago
thanx man
daroundhero 2 years ago
its choppy, but the message out shines the flow. the flow might not be fire but you dropping bombs with the message. its good overall.
DmasterF 2 years ago
yea i wasnt really working on a flow...i just had sumtin to say...thanx for watching...
daroundhero 2 years ago
i wouldve freestyled it but im not that good at it yet...lol
daroundhero 2 years ago
tight
romeok2 2 years ago
thanx man!
daroundhero 2 years ago
thanx dude!
yo i saw dis beat that was made of a sonic sample i'll send u da link in a minute
daroundhero 2 years ago
that was quick, and still fire! good luck with the competition
toZuProductions 2 years ago
thanx homie!
i just wanted to put sumtin out and what not...
daroundhero 2 years ago