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From: daroundhero
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  • Too slow. Trying to hard to make it flow but it's not working. Sorry bro.

    ps. Not tryin to rhyme either

  • @LeadLead lol its all good man..i did that bout a year ago. ive improved. but thanx for coming by and checkin it out. 1

  • @daroundhero No worries - still checkin out your other stuff. Keep it up and thanks for positive reply. Haha better than the usual "stfu haterz" bs. Good man.

  • @LeadLead no doubt. i dont take anything offensive if u have a reasoning behind it...

    now if u just came here "u wack, u suck, stop rapping" then id be an asswhole but u had contructive criticism so thank you sir

  • i dont feel it.

  • @TheKingofNubs thanx for coming thru though

  • dude im feeling this....

  • That's Was Clean I Had To Play It Back Twice....Nice [Lol I Wasn't Trying To Rhyme]

  • thanx for coming thru man...

    thanx for the support

    subscribe and check out my two new tracks that just came out today

  • shits smooth my nig

  • thanx man

  • Good shit man

  • thanx yo

  • Imo you're the front runner from what I have seen.

    Best of luck to u

  • thanx X 2...

    i just wanted to put some truth out there....majority want to just spit a fast verse and make it sound cool...its gotta mean something right?

  • Yea man all my favorite rappers make you think its a must!

  • It was sick my man. Good message. There's more to life than what your hands can grasp!

  • thanx for checkin it dude

  • killed it with the metaphors!

    check out mine.

  • thanx homie!

  • ill shit man keep it up

  • thanx bro

  • 2Deep

    Respect Holmes

  • thanx man...hopefully its good enuff to at least be recognized

  • hey this is good shit man. your lyrics have meaning, and a lesson, plus it rhymes well with some nice inners and you got nice flow.

  • thanx yo! i dont usually do acapella...so i had to come with sumtin to say instead of how i say it..u kno?

    thanx for coming by...and go check my otha stuffffffs subcribe and good stuff

  • duuuuuude that was sick and when i saw on dah vid i got a lil confused with u and mj lol peace out

  • thanx homie...and uh haha yea sum people say that too

  • looked a lil nervous in the beginning but damn u blew that shit up man foreal

  • yea i dont really know how to act on camera...so i just let my lyrics do tha damn thing haha

  • Dawg. this is good! no joke! lol

    Check mine out! fa real

  • thanx man...i'll go check it out in a lil bit

  • This was nice, keep it up!

  • thanx dude

  • I like this man, looked a little nervous on cam at first but opened up really hot lyrically. Peep my video if you got a minute..

    DTK

  • haha yea i didnt really know what to say at the beggining and i dont usually video record myself....

    but thanx for coming thru and checkn...i'll give yos a look in a lil bit

  • That was sick man, freestyle?

  • nah im an aight freestyle...im not all great at it...

  • lyrics were on point, flow was on point, one of my favorites for sure!

    check mine out when you get the chance

    peace

  • thanx yo!

    i'll give it a look in a lil

  • good shit i liked how yu broke it down

  • thanx homie

  • no trollin

    i got some competition 4 ya bro

  • not lookin for competition but good luck lol

    thanx for comin thru

  • see im compacted with and interact with

    actors that wear an onyx mask and want pac to quit

    -one of the greatest lines i've heard in this competition!! props man, tight lyrics and best of luck

    btw, check me out on this contest sometime, peace!

  • thanx homie!

    i was just puting all heart in it...

    ill roll by yours and see whats up...

    and check out my new vids and clik dat yellow button haha

  • check out universe his verse is up check my channel

  • fa sho...but what you think of mine?

  • That was dope...some real intelligent shit...check mines out

  • thanx dude i will in a lil bit

  • I've been watching a lot of these a capella things. Yours is one of the better ones, even though you took it nice n slow.

  • thanx man...

    i wanted it slower so everyone can hear what i say instead of them having to read it...u know?

    and plus my accent will kick in and it'll become difficult lol

    thanx for coming thru and get to clickin that yellow button...lol i got more coming

  • Ya Shits Tighter Than A Virgin In Skinny Jeanss..

  • lol thanx man

  • thats was ill bro

  • thanx man...subscribe and check out my otha trax and vids

  • Shits Sick Broey..

    ...Hope mine Compares To Yoors..!!

  • thanx dude..i'll go check yours out

  • daz was nice STRONG lyrics

    did i mention that u

    were

    HOTTT!!!

  • thanx mama!...

    check out my otha ish and subsribe

  • sick stuff bro like all youre stuff keep it up man

  • thanx bro

  • that was ill and nice delivery

  • thanx for the support

  • It was cool you had a straight flow through out, packed a message and what not, 5 Stars for ya bruh 'n yo, Check my drop for tha contest

  • thanx man...i'll go give it a look in a minute

  • haters gon hate...your lyrics were on point.

  • thanx homie...

  • good shit, check mine out i put it up as well

  • EPIC FAIL

  • thanx for viewing anyways

  • why you goin to everyones video for the contest sayin epic fail?.. sounds like someones jealous of all the people who actually have skill..lol

  • This is what i do lol

  • Not bad man. I like the lyrics man. Good job.

    5* bro.

    -Already subscribed

  • thanx man

  • best energy so far,

    and great message.

  • you really think so??

    thanx man that boosted my confidence right now cuz im in a shitty mood!

    subscribe and what not

  • tis nice bruhh

  • thanx bro

  • already did

  • Good shit good shit homie.

  • thanx homie...klick dat yellow button

  • this is tight mang...the lyrics r deep 2..im diggin it..

  • thanx bro!

  • i like dis..dope lyrics

  • thanx man

  • its choppy, but the message out shines the flow. the flow might not be fire but you dropping bombs with the message. its good overall.

  • yea i wasnt really working on a flow...i just had sumtin to say...thanx for watching...

  • i wouldve freestyled it but im not that good at it yet...lol

  • tight

  • thanx man!

  • thanx dude!

    yo i saw dis beat that was made of a sonic sample i'll send u da link in a minute

  • that was quick, and still fire! good luck with the competition

  • thanx homie!

    i just wanted to put sumtin out and what not...

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