carrie you are amazing you are original you are your own you tell the truth you are my hero you are the one i look up to im 12 your howeveyr youre my role model i wish my writing was like yours truthful about yourself deep felt every word you speak is a word to cherish upon the words you link together by a finely fdefined line you put poems together and make them flow easily like a paper flying through wind nver thought a 12 year old wuld write tht huh?
she is amazing i want to marry this girl. that much has been said.
the crowd is also amazing. whoever's screaming "don't be nice!" and "oooh sh-t!!" and "cmon, cmon!" really adds to the performance, like a piano adds to andrea gibson's.
she's a street smart sweet heart, speaking a sermon with a voice like shattered glass from the window she broke just to show us our souls.
and i feel bad even attempting to use imagery, it pales in comparison to her work.
Definitely sounds a little like Shira and Anis, but of course she's got her own thing going on. She can make me ache no one else, but it's a good ache.
I just cant get enough of your seducing poetry ... Stabbing ... gripping ... simple art .... LOVE LOVE LOVE
Kyson88 4 months ago
She is GREAT!!!!
Louisiana26 4 months ago in playlist poetry3
I think my soul is still cuming
TheDartfreedom 5 months ago
carrie you are amazing you are original you are your own you tell the truth you are my hero you are the one i look up to im 12 your howeveyr youre my role model i wish my writing was like yours truthful about yourself deep felt every word you speak is a word to cherish upon the words you link together by a finely fdefined line you put poems together and make them flow easily like a paper flying through wind nver thought a 12 year old wuld write tht huh?
YourLegitChick 10 months ago
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Poetree20 10 months ago
Well.... That gave me goosebumps. And yeah... I officially have a crush on this girl as well. Fuck my life.
Laviedusurrealisme 10 months ago
she is amazing i want to marry this girl. that much has been said.
the crowd is also amazing. whoever's screaming "don't be nice!" and "oooh sh-t!!" and "cmon, cmon!" really adds to the performance, like a piano adds to andrea gibson's.
she's a street smart sweet heart, speaking a sermon with a voice like shattered glass from the window she broke just to show us our souls.
and i feel bad even attempting to use imagery, it pales in comparison to her work.
the13thdance 11 months ago 3
is there anywhere where i can find the lyrics for this?
bandgeek12694 1 year ago
I think I can hear Carrie Rudzinski in her.....She original and sounds like herself.....amazing!
herrerasarenumberone 1 year ago
cold chills, wow
iWrite4Me 1 year ago
"i resorted to creating new memories with you by looking at new photographs and pretending that i was in them..." Damn been there...shit.
getfuzzy32 1 year ago
Its good...I hear Andrea Gibson in her
timidturtle88 2 years ago 6
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herrerasarenumberone 1 year ago
@timidturtle88 best show ever is if they were both there. i would die.
crashuhoh 1 year ago
I can't love this enough.
kidDissaster 2 years ago
I had chills for 3:39 straight.
irlolaturfaceplz 2 years ago
i hear smatterings of Sheila Erlichman, Anis Mojgani, and Allan Ginsberg in this. Just great.
musicguy1987 2 years ago
Definitely sounds a little like Shira and Anis, but of course she's got her own thing going on. She can make me ache no one else, but it's a good ache.
feaadfaerie 2 years ago 5
ungggh you get me every time judice
brendandavis 2 years ago
You are awesome Carrie!!! I am happy Tim showed me your video! I will proudly bring it back to Germany :o) Good luck!
Fannygoesohio 2 years ago
this is my sister! And she kicks as much ass in real life as she does on video.
mikerudz 2 years ago
I have a crush on this girl
whycontrol 2 years ago 40
@whycontrol ...me too haha. on both her, and her words
makeupcake 1 year ago
@whycontrol As do I.
shadowsandflame 1 year ago
@whycontrol Oh yeah! Saw her life tonight in Wellington, NZ. She's even sexier live. ;)
cottreau 6 months ago
oh Carrie...makes me cry.
tuphin3 2 years ago 2
If ya dont know..
Now ya know.
Please make your way down to Hawaii some time soon.
TravellerLaplace 3 years ago
there needs to be more of this in slam: attention to the craft of writing
honesty
ORIGINALITY
too much of slam is the same old same old, and hardly even really poetry.
thank you so much for this poem, ms rudzinski
onemansopinion001 3 years ago 18
You are so absolutely right.
turquoiseskull 2 years ago
There is SO much in this poem, Ive had to listen to it so many times just to get half of it.
retrospace19 3 years ago 2
I don't think she's even been mad ENOUGH delivering this
YesIwatchthis 3 years ago
I love this woman.
YoYoPunk 3 years ago
AMAZING!
KeysOnTheCeiling 3 years ago
wow...
shoelacesam 3 years ago