You are very good at drawing, I can tell, but you need to work on the principles of animation, like easing, anticipation, spacing et.c.
Especially I'd recommend you to work on easing,a s right now your movements just seem to start and stop suddenly, which makes it seem amateur like. But foremost of all, keep going, your future is looking quite nice
No it wasnt this one. It was another cartoon but it fell through. Honestly I think they would have picked up In Game but I was just the animator for the other one, not the creator/writer.
@smyton4tw Well,I don't really think they'd pick up In Game just because @ the end where the guy gets stabbed..unless you're just showing it and it's not gonna be in it.But I hope you get accepted & goodluck!:)
smyton4tw very good project you have here, i believe you just have to work more on the anathomy of the chars because in some moves they look weird. example 0:24
But anyways i cant wait to see more of this series
Smyton is top best animator soon he will have a anime series on TV and i also reckon Vic Mignogna should be the voice of the main character on my opinion it fits him 100/5!!
I shoulda commented earlier, anyways you're show gives me the chills ^_^ I get all nostalgic thinkin about SB. If you need help with voices or ANYTHING let me know man . Xfire :P
Have I told you how hella awesome you are? I think I told you on one of your other vids,but in case I didn't: DUDE YOU'RE HELLA AWESOME! YOU F*CKING ROCK! Wishing you bundles of luck on your new series and just know when it becomes big anime and turns into a manga then live action, I'll be watching it. I'll be writing fanfiction on it probably! 5/5!
dude you are awesome at this.....i mean your naruto animations were cool but this is on a whole new level.....
E P I C
i have always (maybe not always) wanted to make my own show/anime thats kinda like this...except my dude has ice powers.....oops...this is a really long comment....anyway...keep it up
Wow! F*cking amazing! You know, I'd love to work with you on this, if you need any help, just hit me up. You know Shai (Artanis) right? If you do need me, just ask him for my msn. Outstanding work mate!
Sweet, I got the third view! I just saw your tutorial for CS4, and I am highly interested in making my own animation. I have been using MX Flash to little avail, but the ability to use Flash and Photoshop together helps infinitely. I wish you luck on your project. It's tough to compete with anime, but considering you're a one-man army, you've really out done yourself.
Plot is incredibly important, just don't overlook the little things. You want your climax to be climatic, you want your dialogue to be dynamic, and your characters to be heard. No one wants another voice actor croaking "Believe it" at us. XD
By the way, how long have you been working on this project? And if you don't mind me asking, how close to completion are you?
I personally think the story is entertaining. It's a mix of comedy, violence (and lots of it), and a little romance to make it all more real. Lol, dont worry, we wont have any "believe it" guys here :P
The episode is 10 minutes long roughly and I've got about 2 minutes of it. That doesn't sound like a lot but I'm animating the fight scenes first and they take up the most time. I'm hoping to release episode 1 in Jan.
Funny ending music thing *sword noise*
skate2741 1 year ago
dude, do you need voice actors for this?
RevolutionarySamurai 1 year ago
omg 0:37
father042 1 year ago
You are very good at drawing, I can tell, but you need to work on the principles of animation, like easing, anticipation, spacing et.c.
Especially I'd recommend you to work on easing,a s right now your movements just seem to start and stop suddenly, which makes it seem amateur like. But foremost of all, keep going, your future is looking quite nice
Jannto 1 year ago
I hope you get to release this soon. Do you know when you might be doing so?
theallseeingoracle 1 year ago
Name of song?:( itz awsesome
Widmouno 1 year ago
Wow. Truly, this is amazing. GREAT job. I really look forward to this :)
MisdermeanerJ 1 year ago
Whats the song called?
Darkever84 1 year ago
Honestly, I can't remember. I don't even have that song anymore :/
smyton4tw 1 year ago
Didn't you say you talked to CN about this?
momentaihenryxD 1 year ago
No it wasnt this one. It was another cartoon but it fell through. Honestly I think they would have picked up In Game but I was just the animator for the other one, not the creator/writer.
smyton4tw 1 year ago
@smyton4tw Well,I don't really think they'd pick up In Game just because @ the end where the guy gets stabbed..unless you're just showing it and it's not gonna be in it.But I hope you get accepted & goodluck!:)
momentaihenryxD 1 year ago
Looks great smyton, can't wait to see the whole thing
LoginServer 1 year ago
This looks cool I'll watch it when it comes out.
SuperMerlin100 1 year ago
smyton4tw very good project you have here, i believe you just have to work more on the anathomy of the chars because in some moves they look weird. example 0:24
But anyways i cant wait to see more of this series
HuRax 1 year ago
Hahaha they grey guy got pwned by the blonde dude
monkeyandmoose 1 year ago
when will it be released?
I cant wait!! XD
rene007wazhere 2 years ago
he said it would be need 3 months
redmizu 1 year ago
@redmizu
THATS ALOT!
but i guess i can wait :)
thanks!
rene007wazhere 1 year ago
as i always tell you u should post this to a anime publishing company!!! ;)
beyunit 2 years ago 2
i cant wait until this comes out it look sooo goood!!
beyunit 2 years ago
6/5 Cuz he impaled the guy through the chin, haha
ihnefee 2 years ago
whoa awesmonesss!!! and when he was throwing the explosives in the other guy's eyes, it looked like it was from a real show!!!
tobie821 2 years ago
So far this is what've figured:
1.The main character is the kid w/ brown hair.(Can you give us a name, please?)
2.He might be out for revenge.
3.Lokarn (blonde guy) is either a main or close supporting character.
4. Looks very actiony.
Anyone want to add something I missed?
videomaximum 2 years ago
k its 2010 i demand this now
cnetwoot 2 years ago
I got until Dec 31, 2010 to upload this >:D
smyton4tw 2 years ago
ah f that I demand it now. :P
cnetwoot 2 years ago
so does that mean you will upload the first episode wil be uploaded soon?
shamanfighter100 2 years ago
2-3 months. It's very high framed. I plan on making a new teaser though.
smyton4tw 2 years ago
i don't mind but could u release one by one by march
salbador101 1 year ago
Wish I could, buddy. It will be worth the wait though
smyton4tw 1 year ago
whoa you're making this? looks awesome
guibin 2 years ago
ending was hilarious. it looks great can't wait to see more.
impARTproduction 2 years ago
when will you upload the first episode?
shamanfighter100 2 years ago
nice job!!!
rockleefan2007 2 years ago
What is name of this song? I think I know but can't remember name. Btw nice one :)
SgtJohnnyS 2 years ago
what frames u used to do this?
ThePersona3lover 2 years ago
as i sed in ur other vid OMG UR SO AWSUM
it must of taken u hrs to do this like hrs and hrs.... i mean i take hrs and hrs just editing my vids -.- ~lol
nightwirexm 2 years ago
Dude u really have a high potential in animation!If u make a show on tv i'll watch it for sure!
alskdjfhglefkios 2 years ago 3
... :D awsome.... when and where will you be posting the first episode? :3
saskame 2 years ago
wow i say u were born to pleasure people with anime ;D
youwaisef 2 years ago
So what's the storyline of this? It looks great.
theallseeingoracle 2 years ago
Smyton is top best animator soon he will have a anime series on TV and i also reckon Vic Mignogna should be the voice of the main character on my opinion it fits him 100/5!!
TAnimatorT 2 years ago
Thanks! Actually I see Vic being Lokarn (blonde guy at the end). Hopefully this series has a bright future :D
smyton4tw 2 years ago
Awesome!!! Will It Be On Youtube Or On TV? :O I Cant Tell It Looks So Good!
wildmanoman 2 years ago
god damit i made a comment that almost went over the limit and it didnt work D:
pivfighter 2 years ago
Whoa your gonna make your own anime?
SWEET DUDE!
fizzymax555 2 years ago
WTF symton WHY HASN'T ANIME CREATORS PICKED YOU UP!......but seriously, you are gonna rock when you get picked up. NO JOKE!
uly2525 2 years ago
this is fantastic tottaly awesome...is this an anime?
samuelseigal13 2 years ago
yes
kelvind09 2 years ago
Yea, it's a series I'm working on.
smyton4tw 2 years ago
What's the song?
And what the hell is with that blonde guy?
ffspkzorz 2 years ago
Totally raped at 00:37.
foxninja007 2 years ago
Just wondering whats the song o.o
Great job with the new series too!
Jordayyee 2 years ago
cant wait for more animations of this smyton ^^ so i can make a better amv ^^
coolm3productionsXD 2 years ago 3
You'll be an amazing animator in 5 years if you keep doing stuff like this! 5/5
AzteKpr1de 2 years ago 5
Ehmmm... I..I think he is arleady.
UchihaAnimator 2 years ago
If you need a voice! let me know I can be the bruxa!
mhornmandiola 2 years ago 3
epic!
subpower1 2 years ago
thx for acceptig my amv symton4tw ^^
coolm3productionsXD 2 years ago
this is cool
antti00222 2 years ago
Do you make the soundtracks your self or do you borrow music?
Blackbeast123 2 years ago
This soundtrack is from an unlicensed track i bought a few years back. When the show comes out, it'll have music I and a friend created.
smyton4tw 2 years ago
Cool. If you need a song or 2 just ask. I can easily make something. (Not something supermegaawesome like masuda).
Blackbeast123 2 years ago
NICE backgrounds ^.^
M3talM4tt 2 years ago
smytonnnnnnnn!
YayoFace 2 years ago
Esta genial master
pintadohaz 2 years ago
so if this is not the CN show...2 questions....
1. Is "In-Game" gonna be a youtube series or something?
2. What is the CN show you've been working on?
NineTailedGates 2 years ago
In-game might be a Youtube series. That or it'll go in my website.
I can't give away any info on the CN project just yet.
smyton4tw 2 years ago
Ah, gotcha
NineTailedGates 2 years ago
BAD.
ASS.
Can't wait!! :3
TsumasakiIce 2 years ago 3
heey um..did you make up this cartoon or not?
luffyqaz 2 years ago
yes
smyton4tw 2 years ago
hey did the guy tht just died the red haired guy who took the black guy
creol4 2 years ago 2
No, the guy that died was some fodder
smyton4tw 2 years ago
hey please learn me how to animate like this i watch your tutorials but its hard to follow
animecool999 2 years ago 2
this is really good!! wow cant wait 4 the show
PyroKageFireMaster 2 years ago
awesome >:D dont send that to Cn they will fuck it up like they do most things like adult swim even sucks >:O but awesome dude
coolm3productionsXD 2 years ago 3
lol 0:37 owned!
darkgemxx 2 years ago 3
0:36 sick!!!!! awsome man , im looking forward ur anime,thats right im going to suscribe
nicolasgroskopf2008 2 years ago 3
awesome
NVSCorporations 2 years ago 2
LOL nice work again
kisnemes 2 years ago 2
Yeah, that's not going on Cartoon Network unless you censor the fuck out of it, which would ruin it.
This looks amazing, nice and violent, smooth animation, and just looks awesome. I can't wait! Keep up the amazing work!
Rasenganfan2Returns 2 years ago 4
this looks freakin awesome
iloveanimejkl 2 years ago 6
I shoulda commented earlier, anyways you're show gives me the chills ^_^ I get all nostalgic thinkin about SB. If you need help with voices or ANYTHING let me know man . Xfire :P
omegahunter9 2 years ago 2
i love this! I can't wait for it! although i can be pacient because pplz who keep asking "When is it coming on?" piss me off! weel nice job ^^
FluffyTheAwsomeBunny 2 years ago
ure fucking awesome!
Rancor879 2 years ago
Great teaser, hope to see more of your work in the future.
Darkwizzrobe 2 years ago 2
lol pwned...awsome vid i will soo watch it when you post it ;)
Tobifan4444 2 years ago
This looks awesome! Do you need any voice actors for it?
Diamonddeath 2 years ago
So do you write the story and animate it as well?
theallseeingoracle 2 years ago
lol, sword through head and i said PWNED
CraviaWriter 2 years ago
AWESOME!
fidzimreviews 2 years ago
your really talented with that software! ^_^ awesome vid
sarinax8 2 years ago
dude ur really making ur own show
youso64 2 years ago
YEEEEAH BABY!!!!!!!
Silverlight117 2 years ago
Nice Smyton, accept I didn't expect the sword through his head lol.
FinalJinchuuriki 2 years ago
lol he was smiling i thought he was gonna be like ,nice try man but he didnt.pretty good as usuall XD
neji000009 2 years ago
haha, it's why I put it in the teaser. It'll be unpredictable who lives and dies.
smyton4tw 2 years ago
you the best
neji000009 2 years ago
if you wanna make a site for this vid i'm your man ;)
ddwat 2 years ago 3
Kakashi gaiden?
dmon6 2 years ago
looks gud
revenantwings7 2 years ago
haha the ending with the sword going through the guys head. classic.
snake2243 2 years ago
That was so awesome! I cant wait!
britata348 2 years ago
very very very very VERY Nice!
nuglenugle 2 years ago
Ooooo, did you do taht all yourself?
bowen13 2 years ago
Have I told you how hella awesome you are? I think I told you on one of your other vids,but in case I didn't: DUDE YOU'RE HELLA AWESOME! YOU F*CKING ROCK! Wishing you bundles of luck on your new series and just know when it becomes big anime and turns into a manga then live action, I'll be watching it. I'll be writing fanfiction on it probably! 5/5!
Moon009 2 years ago
Holy shit...If there are any roles open, I want to audition dude! XD
RevolutionarySamurai 2 years ago
your only flaw is the hand drawing, theyre too small.
PikolUploader 2 years ago
You're right, they ARE rather small-like.. o.o
Koo254 2 years ago
oh shit. The SB backgrounds are back!
mcmilbc 2 years ago
its so awesome it kinda reminds me of afro samurai lolz
jjjamie12 2 years ago
lolz he just gets his head chopped off 0:37
SenceraStudios 2 years ago
Impaled*
:D..
Koo254 2 years ago
Wow, that looks really good!
Can't wait!
GreenThunder64 2 years ago
wow
greatace007 2 years ago
WICH PROGRAMS ARE YOU USING!!!?
9aOs3 2 years ago
LOOOOOOL i love the head piercing end!!!!
DoomRinnie 2 years ago
Damn, this looks like it's going to be amazing. Keep it up man.
vVvGamer 2 years ago
no!!!!! I have to wait untill 2010?!
D:
gamehero77 2 years ago
Naruto and Xmens combine!
theclownbaby 2 years ago
I must admit you have a good imagination.
AnMaLe89 2 years ago
That one where he stabbed him through the head was pretty creepy
but the rest of it was epic
I just hope it's not another anime where the main character wins every battle
olddiademmaster45 2 years ago
he reminded me of hein from darker than black lol
toenailclip3 2 years ago
LMAO at the end
rootofgood 2 years ago
i like the vid its awesome but the main characters clothing is kinda...plain
vermillionrasengan 2 years ago
LMFAOOOOOOOOOOOO
The end kinda' scared me, how he put the sword through his skull
Sei0124 2 years ago
what the way over top you hav reached lvl 100 animating congratalations your anime will now be on tv lol
mohan123555hi 2 years ago
dude you are awesome at this.....i mean your naruto animations were cool but this is on a whole new level.....
E P I C
i have always (maybe not always) wanted to make my own show/anime thats kinda like this...except my dude has ice powers.....oops...this is a really long comment....anyway...keep it up
NineTailedGates 2 years ago
Haha thanks man. Well there is a guy in this show that uses ice but he won't sho up till later :D
If you want to make your own anime, just start learning lie i did. A year ago "Shabane" was the best i could do.
smyton4tw 2 years ago
Shabane?
pice644 2 years ago
thanks man..i'll keep that in mind
i'm just not that good at animations
NineTailedGates 2 years ago
That is the Shiznit!! Awsome!!!!!
themninja 2 years ago
OH NOT THIS SONG. XD
I used it for a school project...
Also, there are spots where the proportions are waaaaay off, and it's not for angling effect. If you want I can point 'em out.
BizzarreProductions 2 years ago
wicked trailer dude!
Stormhound930 2 years ago
Amazing!
KakashisWatcher 2 years ago
Looks like a more serious version of your Shabane series,which was a damn good series.
thaneros 2 years ago
Awesome. Ending was crazy, straight in his head.
ArtieatsRamen 2 years ago
mmm...I think you need practising proportions, and a little of perspective(in characters)
francosj12 2 years ago
0:36 I Didnt Expect that!
Isn This More of Shabane?
Anyway Cant Wait!!!!!!
Awesome Dude!
MrSanderMJ 2 years ago
0:36 owned.
telmoesteves24 2 years ago
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that sux, i wanna see naruto
marcuslocatelli 2 years ago
OMG
thats fucking sweet dude.
i cant wait.
HellsingMaggot 2 years ago
Great job so far!
1ipstick 2 years ago
:3 :3
SoundmaniacX 2 years ago
waa xD
the move with the sword xD waaa awesum xD
GameDayYay 2 years ago
wow that looks great! keep up the great work and dont give up at it!!
3whil 2 years ago
Wow! F*cking amazing! You know, I'd love to work with you on this, if you need any help, just hit me up. You know Shai (Artanis) right? If you do need me, just ask him for my msn. Outstanding work mate!
VeggieXD 2 years ago
Great job with the vid! The story seems very intresting, it'll be fun to see what it looks like when it's finished :)
DarkMagicSeptember 2 years ago
love the ending xD if only other anime characters were that smart xD
NoWhere2G0 2 years ago
nice! this MUST be aired lol
ninja0gaiden 2 years ago
it looks really good smyton.can't wait for it.5/5
antonie15 2 years ago
nice
he has some cool powers and moves
yusukethebest 2 years ago
niiice !!
bleachnaruto1234 2 years ago
really awesome! =O
NobodyLessV2 2 years ago
love it.
drers25i 2 years ago
O_O
raikick 2 years ago
This has been flagged as spam show
good job 5*
warriorred90 2 years ago
Smyton i will become a fun of In Game for sure!
Pain422 2 years ago
fan*?
Pottzy2006 2 years ago
Yea , sorry :P Fan**
Pain422 2 years ago
How long does it take you to make an episode.
SachinProductions 2 years ago
great :] 5/5
patrunio11 2 years ago
oh god that shit was tight i wanna watch it again
blitz818 2 years ago
Smyton, you're awesome ^^"
watcher31lol 2 years ago
eh!! I dont wanna wait til 2010!!!
KornKartoons 2 years ago
wow! its really good
5iclozqxm0ef 2 years ago
sword pierces head :D
5/5
Pagatcha 2 years ago
Oh and faved.
ldjg1 2 years ago
Your welcome true I dislike things that can be too easy to prediict but I have faith in your ability. wishing you well luke.
ldjg1 2 years ago
can't wait ^~^
1angelscar1 2 years ago
looks interesting
KevmonDstudios 2 years ago
Dude that was freaking sweet great job 5 stars. wishing you well luke.
ldjg1 2 years ago
good job smyton!
rosepetallove 2 years ago
that...was amazing..
yugiohmasterownage 2 years ago
nice but the animation could be bit more fluent
hunteranubis 2 years ago
Sweet, I got the third view! I just saw your tutorial for CS4, and I am highly interested in making my own animation. I have been using MX Flash to little avail, but the ability to use Flash and Photoshop together helps infinitely. I wish you luck on your project. It's tough to compete with anime, but considering you're a one-man army, you've really out done yourself.
Hadriex 2 years ago
thanks. The way I see it, it's all about the plot. Animation is important too but we need a story to stay interested. Hopefully the plot delivers.
smyton4tw 2 years ago
Plot is incredibly important, just don't overlook the little things. You want your climax to be climatic, you want your dialogue to be dynamic, and your characters to be heard. No one wants another voice actor croaking "Believe it" at us. XD
By the way, how long have you been working on this project? And if you don't mind me asking, how close to completion are you?
Hadriex 2 years ago 2
I personally think the story is entertaining. It's a mix of comedy, violence (and lots of it), and a little romance to make it all more real. Lol, dont worry, we wont have any "believe it" guys here :P
The episode is 10 minutes long roughly and I've got about 2 minutes of it. That doesn't sound like a lot but I'm animating the fight scenes first and they take up the most time. I'm hoping to release episode 1 in Jan.
smyton4tw 2 years ago
good man really hope that you can make it
devilman656 2 years ago
cant wait for ithe episode X3
5iclozqxm0ef 2 years ago
need voice actors ^^?
bioblitzer 2 years ago 3