I don't really like an overuse of slow motion unless it's used in a sequence where normal playback would be too difficult to watch, that's not the case here in fact I think the action should be faster in most cases. You should also work on making your camera angles a bit more interesting, the shot at 0:27 is too far away from the action, it feels detached. Try to have more tracking shots as well, refer to real films to get a better understanding of the shots they use, research is very important
I don't really like an overuse of slow motion unless it's used in a sequence where normal playback would be too difficult to watch, that's not the case here in fact I think the action should be faster in most cases. You should also work on making your camera angles a bit more interesting, the shot at 0:27 is too far away from the action, it feels detached. Try to have more tracking shots as well, refer to real films to get a better understanding of the shots they use, research is very important
mynamedosntmatter 11 months ago