This is somewhat well done, but for constructive criticism, I have two comments. For one, you may want to spruce it up with some more bow movement. This will make the piece sound more emotional. The other criticism is that the piece needs to sound more sad, as it is in a D Minor key, not F major, as you would come to believe. Other than that, good note execution and finger placement, giving it a more accurate sound..
This is somewhat well done, but for constructive criticism, I have two comments. For one, you may want to spruce it up with some more bow movement. This will make the piece sound more emotional. The other criticism is that the piece needs to sound more sad, as it is in a D Minor key, not F major, as you would come to believe. Other than that, good note execution and finger placement, giving it a more accurate sound..
trevcat9 10 months ago
Nice Try! Get ur arms up more
Paulcho68 2 years ago
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dannydcfc 2 years ago
that is awesome. I didn't know there was so much talent floating around. way to go David!. from your cousin Dallin
wrestlerdude2000 2 years ago