Break Up - Monologue

[MegaDreamer88]

OMG THAT WAS SO SHORT YET SO GOOD!!! IT'S OBVIOUS YOU ARE TALENTED!! THANKS FOR SHARING!

[dialfordisaster]

@MegaDreamer88 thank you for watching and thank you for the compliments :) much appreciated!

[KayKay114]

To me, you look like your showing how your "supposed" to be feeling, rather than just trying to be in the moment. How much work did you put into this? Maybe you should find more justification for why your saying the things your saying. I mean, it seems like your heart should be breaking, but you seem rather mundane about it.

[dialfordisaster]

@KayKay114 fair enough. this was my first monologue performance. i did this many years ago when i was still a little green. but i appreciate your feedback.

[blastedd4]

move on already that was the worst thing ive ever seen just kidding but you shoulda looked at the camera

[dialfordisaster]

@blastedd4 uhm, i'm sorry... but first of all its a monologue. it's fake. i was acting.

second of all, you don't always have to look at the camera's for a monologue. in fact, when do you ever see actors in movies looking at the camera when performing their lines? close to never. so please mind your buisness unless you know what you are talking about.

[babyboostatus]

eep your hair out of your face over all good job

[VVButterFlyAway]

Wow ur Good!! Maybe a little faster would be better but ur Really good !!! it sounds real and i liked it!! keep it up :D

[MyGreenCrystals]

Very nice, the only thing is your eyemovement (when you "stare him in the eyes" and then for a split second look in a different direction, then back at "him"). People that lie do that moviement in their eyes, because they are afraid of eyecontact. So by doing that, that slight movement makes your acting pretty fake. I had that issue before but then I practiced in the mirror and then got it. U should try that or else your acting will seem like a lie.

[phillyvinilli]

Can you do the scene from Titanic where they on the board and Rose is goin. NO Jack, Dont go Jack or whatever.

I think you'd do that well

Thanks

[dialfordisaster]

haha that would be interesting. i'll give it a try :)

[ActYourButtOff]

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[StarActing123]

Very, good.

But you're talking to Jake, not to the floor.

Look at who you're talking to.

Keep eye contact with the person (or space)

[IloveCupcakesandTea]

that was soooo goood

[dialfordisaster]

not my personal favorite hehe

but thank you! :)

[estrella563]

jeje nice acting

where u 4rm??

[dialfordisaster]

thanks, i'm from toronto :)

[loverae26]

buuuuuuurrrrrnnnnnnnnnn ; jakee is sooo madd lol noo but really you`ree good .

[dialfordisaster]

hahah. thanks :D

[OhHotDamnBiatch]

ure really really great .

[dialfordisaster]

thank you so much :)

[MattSaucee24]

we can be acting partners....i love doing break up scenes

[KillafoREAL]

LOL ur funny

how do u do that byurself and be serious

[dialfordisaster]

lol its called acting :)

[xotori34]

amazing!

[sugershoe1215]

wonderfuuuullllllll!

[dialfordisaster]

thank you :D

[CallieLovesTrevor]

this is really good i really belived there was a guy in the room

[dialfordisaster]

thanks, means a lot :)

[CallieLovesTrevor]

your really really good.

[peppermintgrl]

that is really good :)

[dialfordisaster]

thank you very much!

be sure to check out my other videos if you get the chance :)

[xoGorilla]

that was good!! you should try one looking in to the camera because for most auditions they would ask for that.

[dialfordisaster]

oh ya i know :)

i actually have some posted like that

this was done before training

but thanks for the tip, appreciate it.

[jeanqueen3]

i think you took too long to say wat u had 2 say but it wuz really good

[dialfordisaster]

ya i agree haha

this isn't my best performance

but thank you :)

[jeanqueen3]

yea and i really lyk it i wanna use dat monologue 4 mself lol

[dialfordisaster]

hah thanks

i made it up kind of on the spot

but feel free :)

[lurkerrekrul]

Contrary to popular belief, most people don't have their monitors turned on their sides. I know it sounds crazy, but for some strange reason, most people actually have their monitors sitting right-side up. Go figure...

[Michyyy28]

That was greatt :]

[dialfordisaster]

thank you :)

[babyphat233971127]

i know you wanted to laugh

[dialfordisaster]

haha no actually :P

[ILive4JonasBrothers]

Absolutley Fantastic!

[dialfordisaster]

thank you

and thanks for watching! :)

[BoiLight]

check out my page with monologues!

and good job.

[TatianaLatrece]

That was really good

[dialfordisaster]

thanks :)

[lillyDILLYwho]

what the hell are bangs??

that was really good tho!

nice job!

[dialfordisaster]

thanksss :)

haha and bangs are the part of my hair

in front of my face that i kept touching.

[kelseymack15]

umm constructive critisism...

Stop playing with your bangs, and moving your head to get them out of your face. Put them up and mabey play with a bit of your longer hair, but not your bangs. Make sure that you are really feeling what you want to say. But it is really good!

[dialfordisaster]

thanks. ya i noticed that too, the bangs are distracting. thanks for the tip.

[FMA4evah06]

Pull the camera out so we can see more of you- your facial expressions are alright (more feeling may benifit) and some more hand gestures would be good. Maybe swipe your hair back with one hand, bite a nail, some business. It's good, but that doesn't mean it can't be great. Good luck!

[xxxpurplepantsx]

this is really good

[dialfordisaster]

thank you :)

[babi2321girl]

Do u have to being a Monologue or do they give u one ?

[RegineCecilia101]

You did Really gudd !!!!

[dialfordisaster]

thanks!

[1actingangel]

aww that was awesome!

[dialfordisaster]

thank you so much :)

[mattmoliterni]

i thought it was pretty good. not incredible, but not bad either. i think you'd benefit from having someone else film you. half of every performance is in the camera work. if you had a slow zoom in on your face itd be more dramatic.

[rtoob]

youre really good. by the way, if you were skinnier(no offense, im not trying to be mean), then youd look exactly like vanessa hudgens.

[dialfordisaster]

lol i've been told that before :P

for some reason i don't see it

but thanks

[joenasjerzeegirl]

this was really good! but i think it would be better if it was right side up and like you set the scene like with a guy and you were at a table and such