not bad for a first production. though some shots were a bit shaky. try not to use amateurish transitions like the star-shaped ones. some scenes didn't really understand though, like the walking down staircase one. but the scenery scenes and railway tracks are nice.
hmm... some shots are amazingly good... the one with ur face, the one with the railway tracks, the sunset with a guy in the foreground, even the waves coming in are good. but i felt the cut between every picture is too fast... and i can't feel a sense of rhythm in ur images actually...
and i will like to scold u for... PUTTING IN THAT CLICHE FIREWORKS!! omg...
not bad for a first production. though some shots were a bit shaky. try not to use amateurish transitions like the star-shaped ones. some scenes didn't really understand though, like the walking down staircase one. but the scenery scenes and railway tracks are nice.
wirelessed 4 years ago
very good song but i think the singer is not powerful enough to portray the feelings of the song
sbstransit0 4 years ago
nice song. =) Love the lyrics
sherylwmy 4 years ago
do u have the song in mp3 de
deviltek1988 4 years ago
i think its abit of repeating things too much ; like the girl covering her face and all.
blackglitz 5 years ago
Good but if u not the camera man than more good, as it will have more feeling...
johann90 5 years ago
hmm... some shots are amazingly good... the one with ur face, the one with the railway tracks, the sunset with a guy in the foreground, even the waves coming in are good. but i felt the cut between every picture is too fast... and i can't feel a sense of rhythm in ur images actually...
and i will like to scold u for... PUTTING IN THAT CLICHE FIREWORKS!! omg...
*being-very-critical*,
Johnzzon
jumbosale 5 years ago