MJ Fantasy: " The Man Next Door " Part 27

[michaeljackson2581]

pleaze make it moble so i can watch it

[candace23800]

please i cant wait please next part .this

[MsRoneagle]

where is part 28?????? i need the next part i cant believe that ana gave in

[makenart]

Hurry back girl, cuz It's been a while, and I really luv this story a lot! Please say you're going to do another pt. to this story soon, cuz I miss it!

[97MJKiyah]

please dont let this be the end

[mustang5230]

Hope the next part is coming soon. I'll never read ahead again. While reading chapter 15, i skipped to chapter 24, thinking he was abusive to her. He only lied on one part, it was a BIG lie, but I know she will forgive him. I just hope the baby doesn't get taken away.

[WifeofJackson]

This was soooo cute! Aww, Michael's being a good daddy.

[OldSchoolSweetheart]

Hey guys I hope you all can read this. I know it's almost been 2 weeks. I am so sorry =( I am trying to work as fast as I can but work is really taking a toll. Plz remain to be patient ok my loves. I will be back soon.

[PAIDIA1]

@OldSchoolSweetheart I'm here and I'm not going anywhere..Take your time and do your magic..

[LilMsShy100]

@OldSchoolSweetheart no need to apologise im sitting here waiting patiently x] <3 take your time hun ^^

[ThePYT1991]

@OldSchoolSweetheart It's all good hun, don't worry.

[VanillaTwilight56]

i love youer channel i love mj too

[MJFanMegaStar]

moible please

love your fantasys

[xTheTrueKingMJx]

AMAZING!!!!!

When will the nxt part be uppp???

SOOON PLZZZ! Geez...you're absolutely INCREDIBLE! <333

[MyDude1995]

mobile please

[virgomoonbeam]

Oh that was wonderful,my heart melted too when Michael was talking to the baby,that feeling of overwhelming love.I'm so happy that Michael and Ana are together :) x x

[MsRenjen]

thank you darren ............ oooooooh they're back together *dancing and smiling and oh yeah laughing *

[MJslibrariangirl]

FINALLY :)

[snickerz345]

You dont have to apologize that this being a long chapter. I LOVE LONG ONES!!! You made me smile the whole time I was reading this and when Ana said she miss Michael too I just screamed and went out of control. Now im sitting here waiting for part 28. I cant wait to see what happens next.

[MyDude1995]

Mobile please

[OldSchoolSweetheart]

@MyDude1995 done sweetie =)

[lovepeacemusic777]

i'm crying my eyes out......no lie T_T beautiful,ur simply the best!

[TullerJackson]

YAAAAY!

[PAIDIA1]

omg..Im crying like a baby..finally together...Michael is so sweet and love her so DAMN much.And girl WE LOVE LONG CHAPTERS...

[KraziiGcmGirl]

FINALLY!

Omgee im so excited that they kissed progress is in the making cant wait to.nexy part boo

[ThePYT1991]

YYYEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!

[xuSmileyface]

OH MY NARSH!!!!!! What's gonna happen now!?!?!?! SHE JUST GAVE IN!!!! O.o

oh well, AMAZING FUCKING STORY!!!!! I sit on my iPod all damn day waiting for the next chapter to pop up! Gosh I'm just in love with it!!! It needs to be a book!!!!! Lots of love... Love you lots!

[cutup4488]

Johanna, I couldn't stop smiling the whole time I was reading this...the way you wrote it....it's simply magical...heartfelt...beautifu­l. It made my heart sing, imagining him singing to his son. I can't gush enough over your talent. I love you, chica....so much. I hope you can find a few minutes to read my story. I really would like your feedback, sweetie! L.O.V.E! xx Sara

[DaizyfreeAG]

LMAO.

THE MICROWAVE?!

Thats so ghetto.

XD! LMAO!!!

No harm intended.

[MsChemicalEngineer]

OMG Johanna, this was great and of course, Michael would have had me if he kissed me like that...I'd have broken down a lot sooner. I've never seen one of your stories be too long!! You know I love it!! Please take care of you and of course my grandbaby!!!

[DaizyfreeAG]

STOP APOLOGIZING FOR THESE LONG CHAPTERS! HELL, I WISH YOU'D MAKE A CHAPTER THATS AN HOUR LONG. I LIIIIIKE LONG!

[OldSchoolSweetheart]

@DaizyfreeAG damn girl u my top commenter!! go ahead now hahaha =p and using the microwave is not getto PUNK! lol.

[DaizyfreeAG]

@OldSchoolSweetheart XD!

Lmao, I don't know, hell. My mom says thats just lazy, and the bottle can explode, when my nephew was drinking formula.

x)!

[MononokeRose91]

awww girl hang in there with the job:), gosh i really really really loved this chapter, it was so very sweet, & i'm not so fond of babies, but i'm really not fond of children being neglected:(, this chapter had me at tears , i loved how this child slowly made them sort of fall in love all over again, & awww that cliff hanger!!!! &don't u apologize for it either! lol , Ana had to give in she couldn't stay away from him forever&same for Mike, gosh can't wait for more great work as always:)

[DaizyfreeAG]

Oh I love you.

So much Johanna.

[mjgoonmusic]

soo sweet, I loved it! I´m happy now MICHAEL held his little son in his arms, so sweet and he loves him and wants to be a good father, wonderful.

And of course I´m happy Michael and Ana kissed again yay, it looks all good now for them!!!

[mjismyhubby]

I don't care if it's long! Make the next chapter this long girl this is amazing!!

[TheMiissCB]

awwwww :) finally

[mjswife100]

Aaaaaaawwwwwww so sweet! :)

[bigmjfan1]

Yay theyre kissing

[smileycurtis]

Oh he'll yes this was simply amazing congratulations johanna you did the damn thing you have really out done yourself please next part :)!

[MJluv4allTIME]

Ohhhh man each chapter is always magical...no chapter is boring or dull!!!! It's incredible........ Next part soon!! Xoxo

[candace23800]

oh wow,i just love this chapter so much.

[inventinglondon]

amazing ♥

[MsCavalia]

Ohhhhhh, this is so beautiful, I'm in tears

[MONIELUVSMJ]

ugghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh­hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh i'm mad you stopped right here. girl this chapter was soooooo heartfelt. i felt every moment, the moment with the baby was even better because i felt my eyes well up with water. it reminds me sooo much of my baby niece...man i lovveedd this. and i can't wait for the next partttttttttttttt ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh­hhhhhhhh!!! :D

[MichaelJacksonsLove2]

Omg, I'm crying! That was soooo sweet! Michael's so good with his baby, and the end just about killed me, lol, my mom's even laughing at me cuz I'm so emotional over this! You are too awesome, girl!! <3

[makenart]

Also it made me tear up, and I admired Mike even more so when he was singing, and caring for his lil one. I like that in a man, cuz it shows responsibility, and great character

[makenart]

Ooooh girl! This was sooo GOOD, I absolutely LOVED it. Mikey is really SORRY, and I'm so glad she finally gave in to him. I want them together. Can't wait 4 the next part girl.

[SuperBasketball4eva]

Awww that was a sweet moment between Michael and his son!! OMG this story is one of my favorites!!! I love it can't wait for the next part!!!

[jkool20]

fjkfjvfq[pjhmoybamflgo!!!! I have no words to describe how I'm feeling right now! Omg this story is the best I have EVER READ!!!

I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT PART!!!!!!! -- but take your time on writing it! I know life is so busy!

Mwah! Love you!

[xxxangel777]

awww...this was making me melt ;-) so awesome and beautiful. i really can´t wait what´s coming next ;-) i´m sooo looking forward to this  ;-)))

[iEsHaNjAyDeN09]

Oh HELL YEA! Lol I'll start reading now

[SwagLikeParisJay]

OMG! FINALLY!!!! YOU write the most best #1 MJ-Fantasies in thw whole world!!!!

Come on please don't let Ana go on distance again! Mikey is sooo sorry and he really loves her!!Please, we wanna see LOVE again :)

CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT PART!!!

Please don't EVER stop writing! <3333

[LilMsShy100]

YAY! lol finally :] but i think i'll keep my happiness for them to the minimum x] anything can happen :o I luv this so much <3

[23LiberianGirl]

Wow!!! They finally kissed again! I've been waiting for this moment for a very long time!

Here's a very good chapter again Johanna! The moment when Michael was caring his son was very touching! Never stop writing girl, you're amazing <3

[MJfanMega]

YAYAYAYAY!!! FINALLY! OMG!!!! Johanna YOU ARE BRILLIANT!!!

Another AMAZING chapter :)

Mike is sooo cute when he's soo nervous about the baby, awww :)

And when he said:"I'm scared that I'll drop him..Ana.." Bhahha!!! I was literally ROFL! OMG! soooo cuteee! Haha :D

Ur INCREDIBLE!!!! <3333

[kelbellmjslover]

Oh Johanna I know what ya mean by Work and killing me.But this right here wa awesome

[MJfanMega]

Alright, I LIKED!!!

....And now I'm gonna read it! :DDD

I'll tell u how it was then :)

LYSM <333