this is a lot better than i thought it was going to be. good job dude. only thing i think you should do is focus more on how many syllables are in each line cause sometimes they differ too much making the song sound awkward and some lines go for too long to rhyme. not hating, just trying to give a bit of a tip if you want to use it. and i know i couldnt make better than this myself
Hey dude, for 13 you ain't that bad dude. You're actually better than 90% of other 13 year-old rapper saying they can rap. Haha, keep doing you're thing.
i think about 2000 views are from me!
ShaneLandProductions 4 weeks ago
this is good... really good man dope as fuck!
iloledyourcat 9 months ago
you sure need sum work
lopoploley 11 months ago
@lopoploley Hey cam, you gotta learn to stop eating
IDoThisFerU 8 months ago 6
wooo leon! (:
456grg 11 months ago
Well Leon, out of all of your many songs this is my Fav!
MrMineCrack 1 year ago
woo this is amazing, I don't like rap but this kind of rap is very good , kind of Eminem and stuff like that :)
MetallicRozze 1 year ago
Dont quit your day job.
mmachu12345 1 year ago
this is a lot better than i thought it was going to be. good job dude. only thing i think you should do is focus more on how many syllables are in each line cause sometimes they differ too much making the song sound awkward and some lines go for too long to rhyme. not hating, just trying to give a bit of a tip if you want to use it. and i know i couldnt make better than this myself
xLuminary 1 year ago
i dont like rap but this is good
spiro38 1 year ago
YEAH NARDO ;)
briannetdherridge97 1 year ago 13
woah this is really good. what did you use to make it?
thejesusfreak919 1 year ago
Hey dude, for 13 you ain't that bad dude. You're actually better than 90% of other 13 year-old rapper saying they can rap. Haha, keep doing you're thing.
BreatheCreativity 1 year ago
sick shit man, love how it changed from first person and talking about yourself in third person
jaydawkens 1 year ago
fuck this is the one i heard a while ago this is like the ill bill sounding shit sounds sorta like 2pac
jjjabberjaws 1 year ago 8
leonnnaarrdo ,. i dont like this,,, I love it !! >:)
TheJunie1111 1 year ago
Gettting better man
PeterChao41 1 year ago
Helllllla sick!
PeterChao41 1 year ago
hella tight
EmericaSkater66 1 year ago
this is sick bro
austinrox555 1 year ago