TECHNICAL: very good use of close up shots. the mild panning shot was smooth. still framed shot(view from OUTside the bathroom shot) was very sharp. Nicely done. Great composition. Music was also alluring.
STORY: too abstract. the idea is too simple, does not have any plot or character arc.
overall; this guy has VISUAL, talent. But needs work on story concepts, Perhaps get help from other people. Keep trying...you mos def have talent ;)
Really? This came from my country? Is this supposed to be art?
"look! I can take out-of-focus and odd angled camera shots of some malnourished guy on the can... Behold ART!! and also magnets!... cue irritating music..."
You really need to go to film school..At least then your pretension will be justifiable.
Visually very powerful, the idea is very deep as a short, I like the music....however I wish you used more of industrial sonic youth, Missing foundation kinda music instead of a song or even some computer music. Your power lies in the visuals and I think that is the best. It would be nice if you could add a few facial impression shots as well. I hope my suggestions please you. All the best with the rest of the works.
ammata!!! yakoooo!!! meke monada adu??? maxa camera work! seamless edit! awesome colors!!! classic shots! and yes bo..good music! xD i love this!!!! :) keep up the good work guys!!! ^^
this looks like a movie about poop.
DAILEYericCaryUSA 4 weeks ago
TECHNICAL: very good use of close up shots. the mild panning shot was smooth. still framed shot(view from OUTside the bathroom shot) was very sharp. Nicely done. Great composition. Music was also alluring.
STORY: too abstract. the idea is too simple, does not have any plot or character arc.
overall; this guy has VISUAL, talent. But needs work on story concepts, Perhaps get help from other people. Keep trying...you mos def have talent ;)
pieries 1 year ago 2
dude dont listen to discouraging idiots...
you do your thing... i LOVE your work..
please continue exploring your passions and keep doing your thing..
peace
J
jonathanluchow 1 year ago
two cool magnets and how their polarity can be used as a metaphor for the attractions between the sexes and their complications.
a good theme for a poem? maybe
A theme for a short film? unfortunately, no
Its just a guy playing with magnets, EVEN if he can S**t with his undies on with The ever so international Radiohead in the background!
Remember, even Radiohead can be pop if the majority play it,
and in the artsy crowd, the majority DO play it!
So why not try for something REALLY creative?
lymphnodeswell 1 year ago
This is cute :) but also sad...
mark072 1 year ago
Really? This came from my country? Is this supposed to be art?
"look! I can take out-of-focus and odd angled camera shots of some malnourished guy on the can... Behold ART!! and also magnets!... cue irritating music..."
You really need to go to film school..At least then your pretension will be justifiable.
arbiteronline 1 year ago
@arbiteronline dude, the message behind the short movie was the true art....
mark072 1 year ago
perfct camera angles and Conceptual work...and philosophically ppl can get sometng about their experiences and their ideas ..superb...
visalvkp 1 year ago
Visually very powerful, the idea is very deep as a short, I like the music....however I wish you used more of industrial sonic youth, Missing foundation kinda music instead of a song or even some computer music. Your power lies in the visuals and I think that is the best. It would be nice if you could add a few facial impression shots as well. I hope my suggestions please you. All the best with the rest of the works.
buddhikadee 1 year ago
Woah!!!!!!!!!!
Awsm Work Maann!!!!
Lankawe Huththalata Honda Paadama!!!
Thawa karapan!!!!!
Best!!!!!
peace!!!
Dharklionz 1 year ago
Awesome!! I have got lot of inspirations... so, what is the camera setup u used?
pls let us know...good luck!!!
chinthakasri 1 year ago
Gud shit mchangzz...all da bezt...keep it up :)
Ludakon1234567890 1 year ago
FUCKIN INSANE!!!! I got a lot to say about this but i don't think i cay say it using 500 characters in this small box!
Brilliant job guys!!!!! *two thumbs up*
Ruwendra 1 year ago
Ammata udu elama kiri ban. Big fan!!!!
gappiya 1 year ago
I like this :D
Pinkvenom09 1 year ago
ok.. i'm second then...
gjkid1988 1 year ago
ammata!!! yakoooo!!! meke monada adu??? maxa camera work! seamless edit! awesome colors!!! classic shots! and yes bo..good music! xD i love this!!!! :) keep up the good work guys!!! ^^
ruwan591 1 year ago
FIRST!!!! yayyyyyyy!!!
ruwan591 1 year ago 3