AMERICAN IDOL SONGWRITING CONTEST(CAROUSEL(ORIGINAL)

[makinluv100]

i loved the song :)

[grumpgus]

I love it! YEAH! the bar chord queen rocks the house, ( I happen to enjoy bar chords)

[JohnEFJr]

This is a good catchy song... you are right about rock songs being 3 chords... if you know E A D chords you can play 100s or 1000s of rock songs...

anyway... I like it. :)

[StackeyB2]

JohnEFJr -

Thank you for listening to it.

I am glad you enjoyed it. That means more to me than anything.

[xthantos]

A song like this wouldnt be considered becuase its incomplete. Its just a repetitive verse. It needs a Catchy chorus different from the verse and a bridge. Otherwise, the human ear gets bored of the same sound after 30 seconds or so.

[StackeyB2]

First off let me start by saying that your opinion doesn't matter to me. I don't think you make much sense . I never claimed to be a guitar player so if you don't like the 3 chords of ALMOST EVERY ROCK SONG WRITTEN, then you should try listening to rap or disco. I write music . If you look at my channel, I am a singer songwriter. NOT an instrumentalist. So if you are going to comment on my writing, please feel free , if not keep your rude comments to yourself . HAVE A GREAT DAY! :)

[skaterA20]

its one of the best songs ive heard good job man

[StackeyB2]

Thanks glad you liked it!!! :)

[asocietyred]

work on your bababas and throw some full bar chords in there , you also need a change, i'm sure the judges look for big builds. also try not to look at your guitar. don't get me wrong its great. i like to think of my self as a professional so discard the pretentious know it all attitude.

[JBaz777]

I'm REALLY in love with you. I find myself lgging on everyday so i can watch and listen to your music. I really enjoy it!!!!

[StackeyB2]

WOW. Thank you so much JBaz777. I have not uploaded in a while and it means so much to me to hear you say that! I am glad I can make you smile! Click away !!!! LOL I need those views.

:)

[brandonvarnell]

wow that was amazing! you got CHEATED! :(

[StackeyB2]

Awe brandonvarnell, that was sweet. I feel that way sometimes but with the thousands of entries I guess some have to be overlooked. I will resubmit it again to AI this year.

[luvKAYLAluv]

ur song should of won

[StackeyB2]

luvKaylAluv~ thank you so so much. I will resubmit it again. Hey you never know!!!

[NBlakeLX]

That shit was jamming. I listen to every kind of music, and out of all the videos posted on here that says they entered into the contest that was the best. I don't think it's corny enough to be played on American Idol, but it was hot. That's a commercial song. That shit was jamming.....

[StackeyB2]

Thank you very much!!!I am so glad you enjoyed it!!! Means a lot to hear feed back!!!

[XshattereddreeamsX]

writing* woops!

[StackeyB2]

writing smiting..lol

it's all good. Thanks again!

[XshattereddreeamsX]

wow, im surprised... it sounds like something david cook would sing :)

sorry for losing the competion, congrats for righting a great song!

[StackeyB2]

Thank you so much. I really hope one day he just pops on and says , WOW , I could totally sing that!!! Really appreciate it!!

[robby63]

You were robbed, girl! Believe it or not I can't watch American Idol..I last only about 2 mins then I get bored..now if your song was on there..I would have watched all the way through...

Robby

[StackeyB2]

Robby thank you so much . I am sorry I haven't been on my dog is ill. I will talk to you soon and be by when I get some time. All my love you both!!!! thank you again

[robby63]

aww..I hope your dog is better soon..love back to you...Robby & Ricardo

[songtruth]

this is much better than the crap that won!!! great job!

[StackeyB2]

songtruth, thank you for saying that. I hoped it might get more consideration than it did but I will resubmit it again. You never know right??

thank you again

[ASCHI179]

awesome !!!!

[StackeyB2]

THANK YOU Aschi179

[xmuffinxfacex]

I loved it,very catchy.

they definatly missed out by not picking your song,I'd sing it anyday!

[StackeyB2]

xmuffinfacex Thank you very very much.

So nice to hear. :)

[JCproductions93]

thats awesomeeeee!

[StackeyB2]

JCproductions93, thank you very much!!!

[mettanc]

i had no idea AI had a songwriting contest....how was that? did u send them a video?

are u a performer full time?

who needs AI anyways, they r on ther elast leg.

michael

[StackeyB2]

You are so funny. I am not a performer full time. I wish I was. I have not performed in front of a live crowd in about 14 years. This is as live as it has been for me. I need to put my self out there more.Once I get an album together I will go on a a small north eastern tour but that is so far off like a thought more then a plan..lol

[mettanc]

i hear yeah.....ppl. from utube are always telling me to get a band together and do gigs or go to vegas.....sounds cool, but man, that is so much work, and frankly i am lazy.

btw. i have glimpseafterglimpse channel too....just chat stuff.

michael

[StackeyB2]

I am one of those people who , if it's meant to be it will happen types. I will post and if it happens it happens. Lazy is my middle name.lol

You would do well in Vegas though..lol

So many boyz so little time..lol You'd be in a tizzy with all the new faces.

[iotz89]

Awesome work 5*

[StackeyB2]

thank you very much!! iotz89

[hotsexynaughty]

Oh, i loves this song so much!!!

[StackeyB2]

thankyou very much hotsexynaughty..lol

felt dirty just typing that..lol sorry.

Thanks for listening!

[hotsexynaughty]

LOL,

Ha, well me and my two other bestfriends have nicknames mine is hot one of my friends is sexy and the other one is naughty ha,

:D

well anyway ill keep on listening

[StackeyB2]

that's really fun!! Thanks for that... I'll have a few new ones up soon!

[gl1200phil]

Back for more! My Stacey Fave!!! Love you girl!!! PEACE an old hippie great emotional feel. nice scatting!!!

[StackeyB2]

THANKS FOR LISTENING PHIL!!!! Hope your having a great week!!! :)

[Skatesisters]

Wow Thats really good

keep writing

[StackeyB2]

Thank you very much!!! I if the feeling strikes I always have a pen.

[dwggydwg]

Sorry guy,I have to agree with the comment below, Not Bad! but not good enough for American idol.I think its the guitar sound more than your voice, maybe mic the guitar, use a little distortion . Keep posting though!

[StackeyB2]

ok well this wasn't an audition for Idol. This was a songwriting contest . It would be nice if commented on the song itself since to get your song ON IDOL you don't have to sing well at all!!!

[bcrumpty]

i dunno dude...not that good

[StackeyB2]

wow first bad comment . No prob can please everyone!!! thanks for listening!!

[Dukie1010171]

I Lov the song and ur voice...

Keep Writing

[StackeyB2]

Dukie1010171 thank you so much , I will!! Please keep listening!!! :)

[jdjustice72]

hey i enjoyed this very much! and you definitely do have a good voice -- very soulful!! cheers and see you soon!

[StackeyB2]

Jd thanks so much for that!! see you soon!!

[peacejustme]

Nice, I like it!! 5** peace

[StackeyB2]

thanks peacejustme!!! so very much

[ejworthy]

I like it...

[StackeyB2]

why thank you EJ

[djmacca2008]

this is a beautiful tune loved it alot DJ Macca

[StackeyB2]

Hey thanks for checkin out another one!! Thank you very much for the great compliment!!!

[DsmB2007]

Such a cool song..Would have loved to have heard this on AI!!!! =)

[StackeyB2]

See now I'm not sure who makes who smile more ????Thank you Daniel!!!

[Vyn2007]

wow this is great!!! 5/5 have a great day kind regards=), Vyn^^

[StackeyB2]

thank you so much . Glad you like it and thanks for following me back!!!! You are terrific.

[ASCHI179]

gr8 voice !!!!

nice

[StackeyB2]

Thanks I'm glad you like my sound!!!:)

[albertdorfman]

this should have won instead of the other crappy song

[StackeyB2]

Thank you so very much !!! :)

[erockj530]

Wow you should of won

[StackeyB2]

Thank you very much. Too bad I did'nt re submit it David Cook would have rocked out on this without a doubt!!!!

[Gummmmy]

/m\ solid big guy, sweet ending haha *****

[StackeyB2]

Thanks man, now, I am big, but I am woman , just in case you missed that on my channel page. LOL

thanks for the compiment

[DebbieVicari]

kewel Inever heard of he american idol songwriting contest. Good song.

[StackeyB2]

Thanks a lot. Really appreciate it!!

[aminmet]

you made playin guitar,composing song and singing looks so simple.nice

[StackeyB2]

Thank you so so much , wow such a nice compliment. :)

[softtailteen]

I love this. You have rocking chords and vocals. I love the way you use Bar Chords. I wish I could play them :( But anyway, you were great!

[StackeyB2]

aww really thank you. You can play them too not hard to learn. Thanks again softailteen. :)

[sirgalaha]

wow! great job! great voice!!

[StackeyB2]

thank you so very much sirgalaha

[CorneliusRandom]

The Barre Chord Queen?! The Melody Queen!

[StackeyB2]

lol

I meant that I play a lot of bar chords.. HEHEhe

your funny , thank you so very much Cornelius

[CorneliusRandom]

Don't forget to put up that link Stacey, so we can all vote for you. Is this your fave song Stacey?

[StackeyB2]

I will I have to get back into my account I lost the password I will get the link. I only put up this one song. This is one of my favorites I had a lot of fun with this.

[kharmstrong]

I'm not surprised you didn't win this is actually good. Great job! I'm visualizing it with drums, bass and some screaming lead guitar.

Great song man! Keep up the good work.

[StackeyB2]

thank you very much. I really appreciate that. Yea I hear that too..lol

[flamingmunki9]

Listen to those pipes!!! Your voice kicks ass and i love the song, i wanna hear a band crack the tune and have you letting it rip full volume :D

[StackeyB2]

thank you so much. That would be cool too if I had a band behind me. YEa Im feeling that.

glad you liked

[CindyPeress]

I hate contests and really things cannot be judged against each other because everything is unique. 5 stars!!

[StackeyB2]

Its ok the contests are over for me.

I so appreciate you stopping by to listen. Thank you so very much

[deborahdcook]

u go girl

[StackeyB2]

thanks Deb :)

[abestowe]

Real nice grooves in this song. I like your voice too.

[StackeyB2]

abestowe thank you so much. Glad your feelin it!! thank you for the compliment!!!

[Missybear4u]

I think you should enter it again next year too!!!

[shelbyann821]

cool chickie....very cool

[StackeyB2]

thanks shel, glad you came by, thankyou!!!

[Stasialanpheare]

Love this. No offense to American Idol but the songs they pick are always a little "safe" and cheesy!! I love the uptempo song. Keep writing. You are great.

[StackeyB2]

thank you very much Stasialanpheare!!!

[deimosianrocks]

subbing your wonderful song writing skills

[StackeyB2]

thank you so very much . So glad you enjoyed it!!!

[StackeyB2]

thank you so very much for coming to listen and for the sub!!!!

[pili2255]

Great SONG!! Bravo!!! Very Cool!!

[StackeyB2]

wow thank you so so much

[glenncelliott]

great song, I really like this one 5*s and a fav!

glenn

[StackeyB2]

GLenn thank you so much really appreciate the time you took to come and listen. FAVED , wow thanks so much. Glad you liked it that much!!!

[effects69]

another great song! got yaself a new subby :D

[StackeyB2]

effects69 thank you so much . Really appreciate the sub too!!!!

[MaryAsinger]

Very cool song my friend!

Love it!

*****

You sound awesome ;-))

Love Mary

[StackeyB2]

Mary Thanks you so very much!!!

[inuyashanaruto188]

wow you have an amazing voice and i think it so cool you wrote the song XD

[StackeyB2]

really , thank you inuyahsunaruto

[hoffmann9471]

Wow, that was GREAT !!!! Danke. P. 5*****

[hoffmann9471]

Wow, that was GREAT !!!! Danke. P.  5*****

[StackeyB2]

Thanks so so much. really hoffmann

[DsmB2007]

A+ Cream of the Crop, Top of the heap...oh wait different song..LOL

but still same accolades!! =)

[StackeyB2]

Daniel always my pleasure to have the handsomest ITALIAN GUY IN BOSTON checkin out my stuff!!!!

Thanks so so much . Your funny...hehehe

[smileyemma100]

great lyrics and its very catchy! 5* from me!!!

[StackeyB2]

Smileyemma100 thank you very much!!!

[XXbflyXX]

great lyrics. you diserve 5 stars. the lyrics express alot of emotions. you can sing nice too. can u check out my vids?

[StackeyB2]

Why thank you and yes I will!!

[martyg3469]

very nice i liked it :D

[StackeyB2]

SO glad you did Marty

Thankyou

[deboeahshasha]

yea this is great loved it love to yaa wee deborah shasha xoxoireland

[StackeyB2]

Well tank de very much der in IRELAND!!!!

Thanks Deborah Shasha

[StackeyB2]

Well tank de very much der in IRELAND!!!!

Thanks Deborah Shasha

[bizzarkreations]

Oh this is great , Love to hear music sang from the heart.

Love and Light

Cheryl

Thank you celebbb for sharing this talented Being.

[StackeyB2]

Thank you so much Cheryl. and CELEBB TOO for sharing!!!

[bizzarkreations]

My pleasure dear

[komusoumetal]

cool~♪

[StackeyB2]

thanks Komusoumetal

[ChristopherDavidTV]

Thought this was brilliant, be great done with a band 5*****

[StackeyB2]

Many thanks. I really need to get a band together.

[amaliatox]

Just...Awesome 5.

Amalia

[StackeyB2]

Thanks Amalia!!!

[mudman14]

you should record a cd and put it on itunes

you would make some serious money

[StackeyB2]

hmmmm , ya know , I never really thought anyone would pay to hear me sing...lol WOW

thanks so so much

[LouddrummerO]

Very cool! 5/5

[StackeyB2]

Thanks so much DrummerO

[dionsansoucie]

awesome!!!!!!!!u just got 5ed!!

[StackeyB2]

:) thank you Dion

[SimbasGuardWT]

Wonderful performance.

[StackeyB2]

really, thanks so much Simbas

[SimbasGuardWT]

You are very welcome.

[laneyjune62]

Pretty Awsome!!!!!

Laney

[StackeyB2]

thanks so much Laney

[gwithadream]

That's pretty good!

[StackeyB2]

:) Y  thank you

[gwithadream]

You're very welcome! :)

[Rustypoole]

Good tune , Rock the Nation,5*****

[StackeyB2]

glad your feelin it!!!!Thank you

[MoonwalkerPJ]

this is great! i love listening to what people are coming up with and this sounded like great inspiration here :) best of success to you!!!

[StackeyB2]

Thanks coming from you means so much

[tinkerbellsnowdrop]

Brilliant 5/5

[StackeyB2]

Thank you so so much

[rachaelstewartmusic]

fantastic stacey hugz rachael :)

[PETEM4]

VERY GOOD !

[StackeyB2]

thank you so much

[Celebbb]

StackeyB2:so much energy here, you wrote this,whaaa..should have won...hea, you can make that guitar talk, luving this, i play myself but not near that level..

your voice tone is great..an your note range is awesome stuff.

we cannot give you enough stars. your ontop of the pile lookin down

sincere:

meriah[ i c o E

[StackeyB2]

You are blowin me away. Really , thank you so so much , I can't even believe you think I play well. Thank you so much. I call myself a bar chord queen cause above that I don't know too too many chords, I am a rhythm guitarist. I hear harmonies to the chords which become melodies in my head...I am really blown away by your comments. Thank you so so much

[hinafan01]

hehe... im starting to think you played quiter because of what i said... ehe ^-^; but really, this didnt win??? you are SUCH a great songwriter!!! i made a new song, ill send you the lyrics!!

[StackeyB2]

heheh thanks !!! Ok send um I'll see what I come up with.

[StackeyB2]

heheh thanks !!! Ok send um I'll see what I come up with.

[cybervisionstar]

It's a good song. you got it girl. keep it up .don't waste the years espeacially from those closest to you that do not agree with you. ignore them. You are what you think. but don't be too hard on yourself. you ROCK!

[tinkermusic]

Nice song. Hopefully you'll have better luck this year. I too have an entry and hope you'll take a listen.

[StackeyB2]

Thank you  good luck to you , I will have to get over there when I'm feeling a better. GOOD LUCK!!!

[AtomicUs5000]

I watched this about 50 times Stacey. I never commented, Stacey because it was in that stream. Anyways, this is great.. I love it. I've listened to the other 2 you added to that stream about 50 times also.

[StackeyB2]

!!REALLY!! thank you . Wow you liked it that much, (((blushing))) I am still so sick ...ugh...sigh..talk to Both soon..:)

Thank you so much

[onemon22]

The voice is dynamic, the guitar could add some electrification, not that I am an expert. I give it a five star for YT and an 8 from singing with the stars. Guitar and singing are always favorite's in my heart.

[StackeyB2]

Thank you very much, yea Im gonna have to get a new amp for my electric. Thanks so much for the great compliment I really appreciate it!!

[onemon22]

Modernoracle sent us your way. I also like Leopardjoy.

[derekeverett]

If I was a rich guy with a record label I think I would pay you lots of money and see if we couldn't put a record out.

But I'm not...

So 5 stars will have to do

Sorry...

:)

[StackeyB2]

aww thank you so much , that was really sweet of you to say. I'll take the 5*...lol

Don't be sorry...:)

[auntCA07]

I can't really see this on American Idol, mostly because it actually really good.I'd like to see what you could do with it if you had the resources, like some keys, and maybe didn't have to play so fast. I listened to it twice because I was distracted by the strumming. Why did you have to point that out?

[StackeyB2]

you a pip, glad you liked it . Whn I see you your getting shmack...lol

talk to you later.

[auntCA07]

who says "pip"? doofus. and do you disagree?

[StackeyB2]

Hey my grandparents raised me , what do you expect

[auntCA07]

You're not going to smack me. are you?

[StackeyB2]

no....hehehe

[StackeyB2]

:) thanks for the second view!!!

[dreaminglad]

you got a good jam there, great voice, song has lots of soul,only thing i could see that could make it any better is playing it with the cords

might fill out the sound more.*****

[StackeyB2]

I was doing it on purpose because I wanted people to hear me really sing and not be drowned out by the guitar. I will redo it one day when I get sound equipment. For now Im stuck with the mic on my laptop

really appreciate the compliment so so much. thank you!!!

[ASCHI179]

very good !!!

[Clobberbob55]

Sounds like singin' to ME!

[StackeyB2]

Thank you. THank you very much.

:)