I LOVE IT! this was really cute and emo, and the picture on the fridge made it seem like it was her, i just loved it! great story guys.. keep it up.. and i know you guys had limited time on it, but try your hardest to keep it cleaner than this.. and i'm 100% sure you guys will make it bigger than you think
I have only liked 10 videos on youtube, something about the like button on facebook and everyone reply to anything you say being "Like" has made me dispise it. On the other hand this is video 11 on my like list. It has a ton of flaws with acting, camera work, sound, story issues; but it also has something that caught me. Maybe the concept more then anything, that snag of originality you put into a simple cliche story. The middle dinner and ending made my day.
I actually just uploaded a short film I made in school, it's on my channel. It's my first one. It would be cool if I could get some comments and views to know how to improve next time or what I did good
You tell me yes Love" But why is it i get she was slutty ? Girls just don,t get laid like that Specially if the man got morals.I at lest wait 3 dates ; ) most of the time.
To be honest, I'm not the kind of person to fall into a love story's plot so quickly, but this kind of showed a more bleak, harsh side to things. And for that, I give yoiu guys props, this was something more than just a love story.
This is an amazing short video... it's heartfelt and at the same time leaves a hole in your heart for the character and how it's affected him... great depth perception :)
dude...I'm trying so hard to finish watching it..but the "emo" factor is overwhelming...I mean some azn guy under a tree singing Elliot smith songs.. bleh
okay, this was a great story line.... i was a bit confused about the casting. i think it may have been more clear if one of the girls had been a blonde, that way i wouldn't have confused them. or, was that the intention? i am not sure. good film tho. good acting
wow! such good acting from both actors. Interesting, real, vulnerable - just perfect. If you guys (actors, director, crew etc) turned the production up a notch now e.g. - hire/borrow a d.p to shoot on a better camera, get a good sound man and just get a little higher production value so your films look totally profesh - tight edit, good colour grade too (all very achievable with final cut and a knowledgeable off/online editor) then you'll be 'up there'. What u already have 'can't' be bought.
It almost reminds me of Eternal Sunshine of the Spotless Mind, in a way...I love this. It's heartfelt, emotional, with great acting, and it's beautiful. True art, in my opinion.
I like to search and watch new short films all the time, and here's another really good short film I found: Write "Goodbye Brian Short Film" in search engine.
OK...Where to begin. On a whole, it was adequate: the camera work was sub par at times, the direction was OK. Positives: The acting was quite strong, as was the dialogue - at times. There were however some very good lines and the connection between the leads was believable. Kudos there. The ending...superb. Adorable, well-written tale. You should all be very proud of yourselves.
I like to search and watch new short films all the time, and here's another really good short film I found: Write "Goodbye Brian Short Film" in search engine.
Adorable movie! The unexpected ending is well done, because it's always a truble with this. The plot itself is brilliant. But there could be less long shots, to see the feelings, and the acting needed improvement, I'm afraid. Work hard and try new movies! Good luck! :-))))))
....hmm.... you'll have a better chance if you get people to sit down and watch it in front of you. You'll see in their expressions where it gets too slow and where the acting is too bad. You can edit those parts out. You'd do well to re-cut it anyway because right now the actors faces are stretched horizontally. Good luck with Cannes!
Also, if you're interested, my latest short "Bullet Theory is online now! Check it out on my channel. Comments and ratings would be really appreciated!
This is really good, i love it. I love the photo ending thing and everything, and the actors are really good considering theyre just ammature:) 10 out of 10:)
oh how it reminds me of how it feels like to run into or go to places that reminded you of the life you once had with another..can be sucky at times..i guess, somehow, past loves can never really leave you, a part of them will just sit in u..somewhere..
How close the camera is to the characters almost makes me uncomfortable but i think its really cute. I love the dinner scene, the black background is so artistic i love it
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i know that feel
peterpourier 1 month ago
I LOVE IT! this was really cute and emo, and the picture on the fridge made it seem like it was her, i just loved it! great story guys.. keep it up.. and i know you guys had limited time on it, but try your hardest to keep it cleaner than this.. and i'm 100% sure you guys will make it bigger than you think
aseptic37 1 month ago
This is the best love story I've ever seen on Youtube so far. But now I wonder if the guy is truly happy without that other girl in his life?
SardonicFilms 1 month ago
this was really a great love story but also very sad.
MsMJ627 3 months ago in playlist Films
OH my GOD. AS IF this would ever happen to anyone :/
Well its a good movie. <3
katybug202 4 months ago
Once upon a Time in Raval
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Short film
psycomedia 5 months ago
sooo emooo.....-___-
Sonicku 5 months ago
sad... love it.
MrROUGHROAD 5 months ago
i absolutely loved this. compared to all the other short love films out there, this BY FAR the best one i saw. great job and keep up the good work~
shakedatash 5 months ago
I have only liked 10 videos on youtube, something about the like button on facebook and everyone reply to anything you say being "Like" has made me dispise it. On the other hand this is video 11 on my like list. It has a ton of flaws with acting, camera work, sound, story issues; but it also has something that caught me. Maybe the concept more then anything, that snag of originality you put into a simple cliche story. The middle dinner and ending made my day.
cardfreak25 5 months ago
Great job! I didn't think i'd like it but .....
Dazedoasis 6 months ago
i like this :)
Kapikatis 6 months ago
blehhh the guy's hairdo and overly emotional character sorta got on my nerves. story is very good though, hahaha
knoxrox167 6 months ago
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NevandOtis 7 months ago
aaawwww.... ;( this is... different.. sad story..
919angelique 7 months ago
memories are something which we cant forget in our lyf time and dis is wonderful shown in dis movie.....awesum work truely appreciable
siddarthagautham 7 months ago
I enjoyed the whole film. I'm not going to pick on the camera work or acting. I LOVED the ending and I'd like to see what else you can come up with.
SupDaz 8 months ago
Pictures really ARE worth a thousand words.
Absolutely incredible.
:D
gabie203 8 months ago
How can anyone dislike this video. I cry everytime i watch it. <3
shybutnotreally95 8 months ago
it is so bad that people use the "i love you" without really knowing what it really means.
roboticmehdi 8 months ago 2
@roboticmehdi yeah! When she was like "i love you" i was like WHAT?! no you don't!
hollyhollywood92 7 months ago
wow, this caused such a stir inside of me. loved it!
Ladleladleladle 8 months ago
Truly an extraordinary film. Very original! Beautiful.
MoonlitEpiphany 9 months ago
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freakrabbit 10 months ago
soo cute...
feveroo7 11 months ago
Awww omg how sad!
MiszLovelyMariah 11 months ago
Simply amazing....sad but amazing....
laleciocci 1 year ago
D: i cried at the enddd :[
i couldnt really understand it till the very end when it showed her in the background :'[
i've been in a similar sit and i know it hurts :( so i guess i really just put myself in thier shoes
this is ahmayzing it should be a real movie so then it could be in a dvd case on top of my tv ^^
christaXcancer 1 year ago
i wanna cry..
DarkPrincessJazy 1 year ago
liked it
JohnBlandly 1 year ago
I don't get it, the timing and her being in the background...
randommRobot 1 year ago
Lo0king Good! ;)
DanielBlissful 1 year ago
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InfanitPictures2010 1 year ago
CRINGEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
ITS SOO AAAAH,,..
mezymoo 1 year ago
that was cool
bellax214 1 year ago
I don't think it's too fast for a first meet when she only has a week or two to be with him.
I've been here. This story hit home.
aimray12 1 year ago
You tell me yes Love" But why is it i get she was slutty ? Girls just don,t get laid like that Specially if the man got morals.I at lest wait 3 dates ; ) most of the time.
JesusJack4x4 1 year ago
Ahh i loved it! :D The background picture part was AWESOME! <3
XxXMickeylaylaXxX 1 year ago
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VexCentral 1 year ago
Awe! :(
gmax341 1 year ago
I loved this so much.
LittlePoochy 1 year ago
To be honest, I'm not the kind of person to fall into a love story's plot so quickly, but this kind of showed a more bleak, harsh side to things. And for that, I give yoiu guys props, this was something more than just a love story.
LukewarmHotdog 1 year ago 17
What was the name of the song that is playing at around 5:00 minutes?
Rachelrocks32596 1 year ago
it was fantastic film...love it...good job zamboni27..u have the talent to be a director......
MegaDiksh 1 year ago
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MKellogg93 1 year ago
i don't get it... :/ someone explain?
amberadrenalinetm 1 year ago
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i dont really get it...
Alliedarkwolf 1 year ago
omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg .. awesome!!
ilagahlot1 1 year ago
this is an akwardly awesome short film. way to go guys :)
evecece 1 year ago
Excellent, excellent film. Well done my friend. Well done.
Handbalancer101 1 year ago
impossible.
DVDz11 1 year ago
OMG IS IT A GHOST ??!!?
0light8dark0 1 year ago
this made me happy. [: than sad...
tbjsamich12 1 year ago
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tbjsamich12 1 year ago
gawd that was so beautiful but so sad
hotrod2403 1 year ago 2
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dustproductions17 1 year ago
Breathtaking... Heartfelt... AMAZING!
3002Sole 1 year ago
This is an amazing short video... it's heartfelt and at the same time leaves a hole in your heart for the character and how it's affected him... great depth perception :)
caseySAYSgoodbye22 1 year ago
dude...I'm trying so hard to finish watching it..but the "emo" factor is overwhelming...I mean some azn guy under a tree singing Elliot smith songs.. bleh
MCrushala 1 year ago 17
@MCrushala hahahahha i was thinking the same thaang, but i think ima stick it through and watch it..
aseptic37 1 month ago
Cool if yall had a look at my latest short. insignificant man. thank you
VideoProjectX 1 year ago
Wow... I wish I could work with this guy. My team and you would do a great story.
mward816 1 year ago
Too fast for a first meet. lmao
akareine 1 year ago 4
aww. I wish stories like this wouldnt end :(
msoliva 1 year ago
so sad i almost cried at the end :( poor arthur. hes so adorable too :\
xxaiidaxx 1 year ago
Great short movie! did a good job with the characters !
joj6666 1 year ago
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great work there you guys! sure, it was short BUT we get to like the characters in minutes ! FINE JOB !
joj6666 1 year ago
great work there you guys! sure, it was short BUT we get to like the characters in minutes ! FINE JOB
joj6666 1 year ago
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oh so sad
emloar 1 year ago
one of the best on youtube :]
iHeartZim16 1 year ago
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DO NOT WATCH THIS SHITTY FILM. thumbs up so everyone knows
vdumbadze 1 year ago
Epic!
expressioncollege 1 year ago
arthur has a cute voice
xtiredxemox 1 year ago
Sad...really really sad. But i loved it)))
SunSvetShine 1 year ago
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loved it. great story
Nanipono 1 year ago
okay, this was a great story line.... i was a bit confused about the casting. i think it may have been more clear if one of the girls had been a blonde, that way i wouldn't have confused them. or, was that the intention? i am not sure. good film tho. good acting
ltum2 1 year ago
thats so mush pain to the heart agreeing to go on
dunsha666 1 year ago
Elliotttttt.
owlandpenny 1 year ago
Arthur is cute:)
andypandi20 1 year ago
soo cute !
andypandi20 1 year ago
wow! such good acting from both actors. Interesting, real, vulnerable - just perfect. If you guys (actors, director, crew etc) turned the production up a notch now e.g. - hire/borrow a d.p to shoot on a better camera, get a good sound man and just get a little higher production value so your films look totally profesh - tight edit, good colour grade too (all very achievable with final cut and a knowledgeable off/online editor) then you'll be 'up there'. What u already have 'can't' be bought.
tomes55moon 1 year ago
Damn.
Tucker3903 1 year ago
Fucken good with a little dash of wtf
jchipmunk 1 year ago
Lovely <3
sentimentalkillah 1 year ago
hmm..
28880 1 year ago
nice story :)
mimoi21 1 year ago
Great production
NellyTymeTV 1 year ago
Very tender moments in the restaurant, coulf feel the excitment. Well done.
Pong123Kong 1 year ago
Really cute!
peonies76 1 year ago
i like it so much
peke12eliza 1 year ago
awesome short film, thanx 4 sharing. The ending was sooo sad though, but perfect.... i jus wished it was a full movie. GR8 work!!!!!!!
banafsegy 1 year ago
That was so fucking good and cute and i just loved it. Hope to see more
wrrettr 1 year ago
Wow. That was good.
Robbie80015 1 year ago
awesome ! <3
crazyimo 1 year ago
very nice idea, but the photography & the acting could have better, but carry on guys.
ma3joog007 1 year ago
great job! Loved it.
markinshelbync 1 year ago
Oh my God, that was amazing. Adding it to my favorites now. It made me tear up at the end. Very well done.
crissiexella 1 year ago
wow.. amazing :)
MizzKos 1 year ago
'' I have a husband and 3 kids''....expression on his face? Pricless
Great film
brainwashedserb 1 year ago
Just awesome
LivieLing 1 year ago
a little emo
nowxthatximxdying1 1 year ago
Oh my gosh. Nice short film. I hope there is a continuation. :-)
TheJigs08 1 year ago
ohhh shittt
like!
i had to watch it twice
it made me smile
love the ending
loveandsunshine3210 1 year ago
I absolutely love the meaning in this film :)
DamnItMika 1 year ago
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thats a pretty cool film
check mine out its pretty funny
craig931509 1 year ago
:'(
XXsuperbadchickyXX 1 year ago
I'm not really fond of the actress, but it was a really touching film :)
hfnicholls 1 year ago
I really like this. What college do y'all guys attend?
Xay90 1 year ago
@Xay90 expression college of digital arts
Optikaliluznz 1 year ago
Just came back from the Cannes Film Festival! Hope y'all did good!
Xay90 1 year ago
wow. amazing.
beachbabe20 1 year ago
It almost reminds me of Eternal Sunshine of the Spotless Mind, in a way...I love this. It's heartfelt, emotional, with great acting, and it's beautiful. True art, in my opinion.
SympatheticMisery 1 year ago
Awesome movie!
I like to search and watch new short films all the time, and here's another really good short film I found: Write "Goodbye Brian Short Film" in search engine.
Check it out!!
trex991 1 year ago
This Film hit home.
great film.
Am I going to see another romance soon?
epidemiczombie31 1 year ago 16
automatic favorite button.
xxKissxGirlsxLotsxx 1 year ago
LOL this is amazing
if you count the amt of words shared btwn them from wen the flashback happened
ITS 1000 WORDS!!!
that just made this video 50x more amazing
szhan1022 1 year ago
the endingg was da bestt
awsum job on dis film
3Nk3s6 1 year ago
OK...Where to begin. On a whole, it was adequate: the camera work was sub par at times, the direction was OK. Positives: The acting was quite strong, as was the dialogue - at times. There were however some very good lines and the connection between the leads was believable. Kudos there. The ending...superb. Adorable, well-written tale. You should all be very proud of yourselves.
heavyd814eva 1 year ago 2
that was so good but really sad! if you love someone that muchh how could you leave them? i guess its life..
vaners914 1 year ago 24
This is my favorite thing on youtube ever... I watch it all the time its amazing.
Rhythz 1 year ago
Awesome movie!
I like to search and watch new short films all the time, and here's another really good short film I found: Write "Goodbye Brian Short Film" in search engine.
Check it out!!
trex991 1 year ago
Very good!!!!
rafael55 1 year ago
I really enjoyed this short film. Some of them are rubbish hehehe
clazza01 1 year ago
Adorable movie! The unexpected ending is well done, because it's always a truble with this. The plot itself is brilliant. But there could be less long shots, to see the feelings, and the acting needed improvement, I'm afraid. Work hard and try new movies! Good luck! :-))))))
HappyChild1989 1 year ago
awwwwweeee thttt was soooo cuteee!!!!!!111<333333
sarahmfanclub 1 year ago
Oh my god that was great. She lied to him. That part wuz sad!!!! >:[
XxButtaphlyxX 1 year ago
Loved it
4992Sarah 1 year ago
...the Guy (Actor) is very deap and sensitive...
...the film touched because of him... I really like this job...
VitaaatiV 1 year ago
....hmm.... you'll have a better chance if you get people to sit down and watch it in front of you. You'll see in their expressions where it gets too slow and where the acting is too bad. You can edit those parts out. You'd do well to re-cut it anyway because right now the actors faces are stretched horizontally. Good luck with Cannes!
jesseshulman 1 year ago
i didnt like the guy actor as much. he needed to be more emotional in some scenes. but other than that rlly good
Fallenskate069 1 year ago
It's a very cute story. And I like the photography, the spectator is very comfortable with the hot colors. But very very sad the end.
For those who like love stories watch "el largo adios (cortometraje)" (the long goodbye) by Victor Gonzalez. Hope you enjoy it as much as I did.
fr3387luci 1 year ago
Can't believe 130 people didn't like it? WHy?
This is awesomme!!!
Creative........Beautiful..
Good JOb! Keep it up!
AnuRegmi 1 year ago
although im a boy...ive almost cried...XDi just remember"her"...cant help it...:<
joma13000 1 year ago
Wow.. I didn't see that coming..! Wow! =D
foreverchristina 1 year ago
OMG that was touching!
hypnotic26 1 year ago
Lindo
ldfoxie 1 year ago
this blew my mind! absolutely amazing, great job!
xbittersweetx1 1 year ago
Great video! Good art is a reflection of life's truths... this is good art.
Josoton1 1 year ago
Wow. I freaking love this. Wow.
ErinReneeSweet 1 year ago
Be proud of your work!
ControlofMoney 1 year ago
Really good! :)
juleisha123 1 year ago
Don't listen to the haters. This is good.
Also, if you're interested, my latest short "Bullet Theory is online now! Check it out on my channel. Comments and ratings would be really appreciated!
Sheimii 1 year ago
This is really good, i love it. I love the photo ending thing and everything, and the actors are really good considering theyre just ammature:) 10 out of 10:)
MrsLornaJane 1 year ago
i wish i could hear what they were saying clearly >_>
ChrissyHyper 1 year ago
perfect
RealPhantom507 1 year ago
That was a beautiful film, you should be proud
02bpook 1 year ago
Loved the photo detail. Great job!
DigitalUnityPro 1 year ago
Very well done. I applaud. The twist with the photo in the end was brilliant :)
IamDifferent1633 1 year ago
absolutely amazing =] i love it so much really made me think <3
MiShelly82109 1 year ago
Too much planning and not enough attention paid to the screenplay.
boyscoutasylum 1 year ago
omg he dont love his current gf :( GG-NOEXP
KrumpetNylon 1 year ago
I didb't like it and the ending made no sense!
cacaolover1 1 year ago
hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh nice movie
muhammedsabry 1 year ago
that was great.
i didnt think it was going to be very good at the beginning but by the end, i loved it.
im going to show many people this :D
NicoleNewvine 1 year ago
oh how it reminds me of how it feels like to run into or go to places that reminded you of the life you once had with another..can be sucky at times..i guess, somehow, past loves can never really leave you, a part of them will just sit in u..somewhere..
stewiek 1 year ago
beautiful..
kohprush 1 year ago
This was beautiful. I'm gonna send the link to everyone I know.
Athnagzo 1 year ago
the obligatory student school film inside the fridge shot has gotta go.....
zabezabe 1 year ago
I don't eat cows.
MrEmoskater26 1 year ago 2
Very nice =)
whatkatiedid213 1 year ago
it isn't that bad... I liked it.. keep it up
kerimil 1 year ago
i love the end.its a nice short film :)
wildangel20 1 year ago
this was a very varied story, there were a lot of dark shots but they were contrasted by the love scenes, great job!
emceefreshjiveLA 1 year ago
EMO!!!
neotherside 1 year ago
awe, awe, aweeee
GabrielleBuck 1 year ago
How close the camera is to the characters almost makes me uncomfortable but i think its really cute. I love the dinner scene, the black background is so artistic i love it
TaliTorture 1 year ago
check out this short comedy film its hilarious. "Go Hard- short comedy film"
thadisciple 1 year ago
this was good!
easyyluckyfreee 1 year ago
My first opinion it is not good but Last Scene.... İt is very impressive..
so Excellent...
Theyearbaqir 1 year ago
This is an awesome short film. Cute and an inspiration. :)
CrystalShadows 1 year ago
Trippy
cs4lsk8team 1 year ago
I get it, I so get it...
RoutesOutOfAlbion 1 year ago
aww cute i cried when she left and more when she was in the picture so cute!!
Katogirl1 1 year ago
Nice job, enjoyed this short film.
Ranie1980 1 year ago
that was touching....
andreagarwal 1 year ago
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ManiacMovieGroup 1 year ago
i like how they made it so morgan was in the bg at the very end. It's a sign dude, find that girl!!!
jlw46890 1 year ago
wow that was yet another beautiful short film.
Essah15 1 year ago
i just uploaded my first short film called sniper at the window an action/comedy please check it out and give me some feedback
vigigamevideos 1 year ago
cute end...
MissLillah 1 year ago
Nicely done. I enjoyed it very much,
epicstorm2006 1 year ago
great story
would be a great movie!
netleeNand 1 year ago
The ending wrapped it up beautifully. Amazing.
eroeden 1 year ago