i wonder sometimes, is what i give never enough why cant i be smooth in a land of rough is it cause im only 14 yrs old aint seen enough to make me wise n old? well ive seen enough to make me cold and ive walked so many miles that ive been told "kid im sorry for what u been through ya mother didnt have a clue what she got u into" well i do she put me n a bad situation step dad beat me so much i wanted to waste him but ive grown up now and i cant see how
i wonder sometimes, is what i give never enough why cant i be smooth in a land of rough is it cause im only 14 yrs old aint seen enough to make me wise n old? well ive seen enough to make me cold and ive walked so many miles that ive been told "kid im sorry for what u been through ya mother didnt have a clue what she got u into" well i do she put me n a bad situation step dad beat me so much i wanted to waste him but ive grown up now and i cant see how
i was just curious if I would be able to use this instrumental for song lyrics that i have that i have yet to figure out a beat for. please contact me asap :) thank you. and of course i'll give you all the credit <3
Nicely done ! Great idea with the voice over, you're right, ppl would jack this in a minute.
ButI wish more ppl would post lyrics to beatz like this the way StompaDannoee did ! That way you push creativity to the max --> music composers AND lyric writers all together so we can all enjoy... =)
nasty instrumental bro. imma young rapper (13 years old) trying to get started. do you think i could use the beat? no mixtapes just me spittin and i'll be sure to give you credit
damn this shit goes hard!! how much? can i use it? i got lyrics to it already..imma up coming rapper i got some of my videos on youtube but there from awhile back but ah im lookin for some beats an this is the one :) hit me up
she got me blown away cause she bomb and she cute all the guys be fallin for her left and right she the prettiest girl in the whole wide world and she dont even know until i told her so
you stole my heart away from me and now i stole yours how ...did i steel i dont knoe you tell me you got me dreamin bout you thinkin about you i hope we can be together someday i dont knoe witch day but i hope its today you take me to a whole different place...
Listen, I know I didin't know you like that. But it seems like you knew me so close. If I could go to your grave I'd give you a rose. Now you mean so much to me. You now are leader to me. I just feel so werid now. Just seems you knew me so much when we never even met. Now I wish I could chill with you under the sun set. Im trying not to think so hard But was it easy for you? Now your gone but before I didn't know what was going on Now I do, you educated me without knowing.
@iLLM4TiCx Part (2) But one day when the night is glowing I'll see you there. I dont care what people say I know you weren't what they said. The evil you tossed helped me see it through. Just that little song was enough to give me a clue And Im sorry for any disrespect I put towards you. But hopefully you can forgive me now I didn't cry for you then but I cry for you now If I could go to your grave I'd give you a rose and let my eyes close. _^Dedicated to Michael Jackson^_
Everything ends badly otherwise it wouldnt ended It wouldnt have but on you that depended Theres a reason why i love you and this is it You made me smile when i felt like shit I struggled wif life you pulled me throo And i felt my heart pound when i looked at you Im so unhappy that were through I wanted to walk down the isle and say i do baby i love you Let me no if these are any good Im a girl lol Only just started this shit :) Just cus its smet i enjoy :) x
Ay man i just wanna let u no dat dis song here helped me right a good sorry long song to my gurl and i got her back because of it so man thx u for makin dis
yo bro can i use this beat? i could really rip the track this beat so far is the only one of many other beats in the world that sparked up some deep lyrics from within so can i use it? nd my bad if i sounded corny and mysterious xD hit me up if anything =)
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i dont got a great voice hope i can be your choice gotta make that pussy moist up and down like a hoist hoist me up into the air cuz im guna b a winner this year hear everything i have to say girl we could play its ur lucky day tom hanks lost like a cast away its the freakin weekend pour some alize mondays just another day do work get my cheque got bills to pay but imma make it thru imma be ok
the voice is obv so man cnt catt it still lol beats are alot fam check ma boys tune he looking for a few beats init it on ma channels anti nife an gun crime epic
can i use this
isssissippi 1 month ago
Bad ass
dmlisa1987 4 months ago
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i wonder sometimes, is what i give never enough- why cant i be smooth in a land of rough -
is it cause im only 14 yrs old- aint seen enough to make me wise n old?- well ive seen enough to make me cold -
and ive walked so many miles that ive been told- "kid im sorry for what u been through- ya mother didnt have a clue what she got u into"-
well i do she put me n a bad situation- step dad beat me so much i wanted to waste him-- but ive grown up now -
and i cant see how--
bestofalltime10596 6 months ago
@bestofalltime10596 thats how its supposed to look
bestofalltime10596 6 months ago
bestofalltime10596 6 months ago
bestofalltime10596 6 months ago
i was just curious if I would be able to use this instrumental for song lyrics that i have that i have yet to figure out a beat for. please contact me asap :) thank you. and of course i'll give you all the credit <3
boricuakr 6 months ago
perfect beat
Breeza2011 6 months ago
the intro is waaaay to long, and the piano sample is looping to much.
KhaozBeats 7 months ago
Nicely done ! Great idea with the voice over, you're right, ppl would jack this in a minute.
ButI wish more ppl would post lyrics to beatz like this the way StompaDannoee did ! That way you push creativity to the max --> music composers AND lyric writers all together so we can all enjoy... =)
Thumbs up.
sparkeeNY 7 months ago
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Kan i use pls.?
S4dEyeZ14 7 months ago
Kan i use pls.?
S4dEyeZ14 7 months ago
I love you, you love me, but it aint that simple
See ya live so far, so far away if only you were closer
When I look in your eyes I know your gonna be the only one
Cus compared to all the others you’re the one that shone
You’re the best thing in the whole wide world
Yeah boy, you complete my whole universe.
And there’s nothing more I wanna to than to, feel your touch
every time you go away I just miss you so much
HMusticone1 9 months ago
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StompaDannoee 9 months ago
you ruin thaa beats wiv thaat t dot c shit!
StompaDannoee 9 months ago
i wan download dis
5crowZero8 10 months ago
i like this song but i dont like little voice ... man...
24evil7 11 months ago
- umhh , its another beat on here and its this one , just by a diff person and pic =/
MusicChild231 1 year ago
Pretty nice beat you got there, this beat is pretty calm and chill to rap too. Can use?
daaayumMARKK 1 year ago
Your work ist really really nice ^^ But the voices in the background really freak me out xDD
Kurti1992 1 year ago
CAN I USE?
indigoohr 1 year ago
like i said on the other videos u wanna make some money get at me jcrazyj69@yahoo.com i write, i sing, rap whatever im ready
sassie131820 1 year ago
lmao. that voice sounds retarted
njd94able 1 year ago
u realy good at wat u do
keep it up
esalagrima 1 year ago
nasty instrumental bro. imma young rapper (13 years old) trying to get started. do you think i could use the beat? no mixtapes just me spittin and i'll be sure to give you credit
RALPHcPRODUCTZ 1 year ago
damn this shit goes hard!! how much? can i use it? i got lyrics to it already..imma up coming rapper i got some of my videos on youtube but there from awhile back but ah im lookin for some beats an this is the one :) hit me up
tomassalazar1 1 year ago
can i use dis track?
fl4ko5 1 year ago
Is there any wat i can get this instrumental?
LilDreama1408 1 year ago
she got me blown away cause she bomb and she cute all the guys be fallin for her left and right she the prettiest girl in the whole wide world and she dont even know until i told her so
you stole my heart away from me and now i stole yours how ...did i steel i dont knoe you tell me you got me dreamin bout you thinkin about you i hope we can be together someday i dont knoe witch day but i hope its today you take me to a whole different place...
renegadeGM 1 year ago
chek ma trak 2 dis beat, leave commentts
Mg16mg16 1 year ago
where can i get the download link for this?
FUNNYAZN05 1 year ago
amazingly made man
ttoastboi 1 year ago
Really good beat Hope you don't mind what I wrote.
iLLM4TiCx 1 year ago
iLLM4TiCx 1 year ago
iLLM4TiCx 1 year ago
hook?
jamiegosnell 1 year ago
Please check my tune to this beat. If you dont like it please dont hate, im only 13. cheers. x
KyleBruvv 1 year ago
devias tirar essa voz dos beats... mas ta mesmo brutal
Marcogangster1 1 year ago
ay can i get this download link.also "tears on her pillow".. can u send it to antwont22@Live.com plz thanks
despop20 1 year ago
yo i lyk this show me more of your music ima rapper and i would want to know if you would produce m raps with these beats??
Mrrap4life05 1 year ago
where's the hook?
bellsnff 1 year ago 29
@bellsnff i think he forgot to add it lol
xBABYxB0YxM0N3Yx 1 year ago
@bellsnff EXCLUSIVE! haah
scimyyyy 10 months ago
I luv3 u I promise
to be honest
if I was to say every reason that your the 1 for me
this 1 track would take up a whole cd
fuck puppy luv3 this is full grown
pure breed shawty we on
I never felt this way before
cant get enough of this feeling and I want more
TevonLewis 1 year ago
keele1988 1 year ago
@keele1988 yeah i liked that thats good
inverbone09 1 year ago
@inverbone09 Honestt arr thanks mannn :) xxx
keele1988 1 year ago
hey beat is sick yo my kind of style
you think i can get this yo...
feel like writing somin up with this
veryfastcivic4now 1 year ago
Ay man i just wanna let u no dat dis song here helped me right a good sorry long song to my gurl and i got her back because of it so man thx u for makin dis
Warlord638 1 year ago
yo bro can i use this beat? i could really rip the track this beat so far is the only one of many other beats in the world that sparked up some deep lyrics from within so can i use it? nd my bad if i sounded corny and mysterious xD hit me up if anything =)
lilpimpinLc3 2 years ago
@xBABYxB0YxM0N3Yx Yeahh ive done this track just havent recorded if you want to jump on the mike?? xx
LilLady2k9 2 years ago
theres a reason why we fall in love
theres a reason why it ends
theres a reason why it hurts
and theres a reason why were friends
Anyone wanna collab holla :)
LilLady2k9 2 years ago
I'll collabo, u seem like you got the basics ;P Hit me up with a beat and ill start writing in da booth :)
xBABYxB0YxM0N3Yx 2 years ago
hey i really like this beat, was wondering where i can download it from? thx xxx
SparkleWithstarz 2 years ago
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AcceptYourPunishment 2 years ago
This beat koo hey can i please you it??
Youngb707 2 years ago
gurl u kno i love u dearly,
i just want u to be near me,
every single time of the day,
just so i can hear you say,
the 7 words that i love the most,
i love you, i love you too,
stay with me forever too,
coz i never wana leave you.
VowlseyBwoii 2 years ago
Heyyyyy Can ii Use this beat to do a track plsss? its sick !!!! x
LadyExonic69 2 years ago
the voice is obv so man cnt catt it still lol beats are alot fam check ma boys tune he looking for a few beats init it on ma channels anti nife an gun crime epic
lllyricalllbadmannnn 2 years ago
the voice is so people wont jack his shit dont be retarded just enjoy the beat and offer a price to the producer and you can the joint exclusively
ultimo2000 2 years ago 34
Thank you !
icetrecords 2 years ago 8
cmon man put out the voice the beat is so sick but i hate that voice !
taenamokatayaga666 2 years ago
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QueNKay 2 years ago
sick man keep it up
Just1In1Time 2 years ago
very great beat ,
but the voice in the beat has destroyed it all !!
Coffus 2 years ago
thats so u crt use it mate u have to buy it uthawise ppl will download it for a guess lol
cruscoe8530 2 years ago