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  • when ya making this part 2?????

  • You must make a new one, you don't have to start a series just make a ending, listen my head hurts so I'm going to tell you why you should tomorrow.

  • If a lot of voice actors have walked out on you, I would be most pleased to help you out with the voices :)

  • Hey! Since all your... what'cha ma call-it's walked out on you, I could voice someone for you!@

  • Do you animate these frame by frame or do you use armatures/pivotpoints/controll­ers and animate them with keyframes. Drawing frame by frame is hard, but building/rigging a character with controllers and Inverse Kinimatics is just as time consuming.

  • @TheWaynelds I usually try to animate with frame by frame. It is definitely a lot harder, but usually looks better in the end, since I can do more with it.

  • when is part 2?

  • cool ^_^ i liked it alot .. read your coments too and i am sorry your voice actors flaked.. thats kinda sad this shows alot of promise and it is interesting already i want to know more

  • that was very very very good, but, your run cycles need work, hopefully no offence found there.

  • um well very nice job i luv how u do the animals they just so good

  • very nice, . but please don't take wabbit snacks away them's good eatin'! lol/!

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  • Don't give up because you got bad reviews, there will always be those people who don't appreciate hard work... This was really good and I'm sure it took a while to make, don't let a few bad reviews bring you down... look at this, your animation was good, the sounds and music were really good and well placed, and you have a good story line... and if your voice actors left, don't worry... that's the beauty of a cartoon or animation is that you can switch the voices, use friends or family :)Gd bls

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  • Don't give up keep going if you need voice actors just ask

  • Oh, this is great! I suggest you continue this series, but if you'd rather not you don't have to of course. But I really like the idea of the series and i'd be very much interested if you'd continue!

  • I might see soon, but do the lynxes not eat meat or something? That's interesting if not. Well if they did, I guess the rabbit wouldn't have come back and stood right in front of Zasshi's (how do you spell her name?) face.

    Oh, I'm so glad that I can find series like this on Youtube. It's the first one of lynxes I've found and it looks good. Onto the next episode!

  • If you need voice actors, I would be willing to do any female voices needed, just check out my pervious auditions, I'm able to do quite a few accents too~! :3

  • I will voice any small or young you like!

  • whats the music at 3:35 if you don't mind me asking.

  • AWESOMEE!!! i luv it!!~!

  • How did you do the music? You composed and recorded it all?

  • Are you making a part two because if you are right now your most likely still making it so yes it does take a long time so I'm asking are you in the making of one and what animator program did you use?

  • I love the story, but when I try to watch it at newgrounds I automaticly go to google or something like that D:. Sorry your vioce actors walked out on you too. But it looks great!

  • I loved this peice. Thankyou for taking the time and efffort to creat it. :3

  • i wish ud continue it reading the script aint the same :(

  • when's part 3 coming out?

  • It doesn't matter what others think. If you like animating these, I think you could do quite well. I and many others want this to continue, as it should. :)

  • plz!! you must make the part 2!!

    i´t can´t be without voice!!

  • MAKE ANOTHER PLLLLZZZ

  • I know you've said that you might not complete it and everything but I'm not sure how long ago that was! So I was wondering if you were going to continue it?:) Sorry if I sound bossy:s

  • thumbs up 4 part 2!

  • aww the bunny is sooo cute!

  • Cool

  • This is really good D:

  • I think your an amazing animator, please dont give up on it, I think its wounderful D: come on, everyone gets haters once in a while, but please dont get put of by them, keep going, follow your dreams :)

  • Your animation and pictures were phenomenal!!

  • I like it. I think you should make the rest of it. : )

  • Scribbly clouds!! xD

  • Widdle butterfly.. Just there.. xD

  • Ahh! If you need voice actors, we're out here! xD

  • KITTY. 'Nuff said. XDD

  • more please

  • ya u should! Just like the girl or boy obove said! This is amazing! Dnt pay attention to the nagativaty!! This is GREAT!!!!!! Pleaze continue!!!! ill make sure you get alot of vewers! I have sooooo many friends that would LOVE this as much as I do!

  • ya u should! Just like the girl or boy obove said!

  • r u evr gonna continue it?

  • plz finish this iam still looking forward to part 2... and yes ignore the bad comments dont let them get you down trust me im writing stories on deviant art and on the first chaper of one i got a bad comment but that didnt stop me from continuing the story

  • you HAVE to finish this! ignore all the bad comments, there are THOUSANDS of people who would LOVE you to continue this series!!

  • weres the next ep?

  • Wow you are amazing :D the animation is very good and I like the background you are amazing work :D

    An animation that has lynxs in it this is the first one ive seen :DCongradtes on episode one :D Hi five of doom

  • Also i would listen more to every one here saying good things and ignore the negative comments because theres alot of trolls out there by that i mean haters that hate for no reason what so ever again great animation and story.

  • All i got to say is that was a wonderful story liked the story line the animation was great and i hope you cont with your story and wish you the best of luck and success. if you need a voice actor i am yours to command i got tons of different voices i can pull off so when ever your in the neighborhood for voice actors im here.

  • what the heak was the murderer

  • OMG! you HAVE to make prt two! I will do a voice, they aalll dont have to have the same voices! PLEAASSEE!?

  • I'm suprised by the negative comments you did very well. :) Why did your voice actors even walk out? They are crazy!

  • I'm suprised by the negative comments you did very well. :)

  • this is horrible....  just kind its awsome

  • oh my gosh this is amazing! cant wait for part 2, hope you do make it!

  • I want a part 2

  • it looks like its running back -werds

  • why cats cats suck

  • Wheres part 2? Good animations too.

  • Not the bunny... good animations though :)

  • awww the rabbits voice is so cute

  • Exuse me if you want a voice actor for any females ill try out :)

  • i think you should finish part 2. it sounds like a pretty cool series!the animation is really good and i love the rabbits face.O_O !

  • Love It!!!

  • this is amazing!:Di envy you:)

  • You re an Awsom Animater. I will subscribe! Please continue, the people who dislike this are TOTALY Jealouse of you skill! :D

  • Aw well I'm sorry you aren't going to finish it.It looks like a really interesting story maybe if you do end up finishing it i could right a book for it,if you wanted?

  • This is realy good :) Im sorry you had some tough luck. Though I'd being willing to look in to helping you with a your comic :)

  • Do the lion and the wolf fall in love yes or no and I went to free webs and looked you up but your site was not there

  • ar edoes lynx'es and wolves?

  • AWESOME *_____________* BRAVOO :D

  • This is so cute! Great job! Can't wait to see part two!

  • OMG soooooo awesome!! *_*

    Favooo<3

  • I think people on other sites are jealous because you're doing this. I know it's been a year but people on this site really like it, me included. I wouldn't mind if you would continue making this series on here, we all probably would enjoy it.

  • Imma just post a video for an audition for Sahsi m'kay? aaawwweeeessssoooommmmeee

  • Dude this is awesome do the rest oh and does the wolf and lion girl fall in love

  • PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE THIS SERIES ITS THE BEST SERIES I HAVE EVER SEEN

  • err what killed them?

  • @nanowolf97 Well, I can go ahead and say, an evil army was what killed them...not each other.

  • @Jessismith2000 an army?

  • Oh, I'd absolutely love it if you continued! What were those negative reviews all about? The animation is pretty smooth, the lip-sync is perfect and right on, and I find the backround to be very creative. The music at 3:53 sent chills down my spine, and all the dead bodies made me really curious as to what killed them all xD I'd definitely suggest continuing this.

  • I want to see part 2. This is awesome.

  • Wheres episode 2?

  • y is it about linx and wolfs fighting

  • @anyssae Thank you. :) The story is actually about intelligent animals living after humans.  The lynx and wolf thing was just a side story. :P

  • @Jessismith2000 oh r u gonna continue this

  • @Jessismith2000 pretty cool!!!

  • Woah that was actually really good.

    Though the graphics kind of remind me of a game called Out of this World.. same with the growl/pounce sound effect. :)

  • @Kire667 Thank you! A flash game perhaps? Sounds pretty interesting; particularly the name. I might check it out. :)

  • cool

  • I REALLY think you should continue on with part 2. Your animation is pretty sketchy, but its not bad at all. I'm really interested in the story, the characters look really interesting, and so does the story. Its a lot better than most people could even dream to do, and I admire that. Don't listen to those other who gave you negative reviews, you shouldn't let them get to you. I'm sure it takes a long time to do this, so no pressure, but just know their are people who enjoy your work :)

  • this is good im horrid at animating i wish mine could come out this good

  • dont listen to them some people on newgrounds can be harsh! also most people on newgrounds are older and more experienced. your a great animator !

  • the screen goes all colourfull so I can't watch it 3: I is sad now

    But I am sure it is awesome!

  • plz hurry with part 2 cause this is like a million times better than my animations so i'll be waiting for like eves till it comes out

  • Well, those people who gave bad comment are stupid!!!You HAVE to continue!!!!

  • WOW! This is Great! Keep up the good work! And the films XD

  • This is AWSOME! ! PLEASE make more!

  • This is AWSOME! ! ! PLEASE make more!

  • What did you use to make this?

  • lol this is adorable. How old are you actually? This seems really amazing for a young teenager age range actually. I quite enjoyed it

  • Your animation style is really good. I loved watching this ^^

  • That rabbit is afually cute at 5:14! Some of the art isn't great, the voice actors are ameture although I do like the black bobcats voice. Overall you have a great storyline and the potential to create a master piece Studio Ghibli style!

  • is that a bobcat adopted by wolves?

  • i love this plz make more x

  • I like this so far, WOW that is one stubborn wolf

  • Ok,was this made on paint?

  • ive ben wating 1 year for part 2 .............

  • Wait. I decided that your services are unneeded. You're too busy with this, Im sure.

  • What program do you use?

  • Could you please animate my series? I need to find an animator soon...

  • ur amazing ^^ r u making a part 2? i hope soooo XP

  • Great animation skills!!!!!!!  I wanna do stuff like that, but idk how..… :(

  • this is very cool do you make part 2?

  • This is so awesome!!!

  • this is great, finish it, hey how d ou do this any way?

  • please do a part 2. it was quite good.

    BBS

  • this is awsome plz make a part 2 i love it!!

  • Wow that was really.... well it was REALLY good O_O I can't think of the right word but this thing certainly got me pulled :-O You have very good sense of timing, the whole dramatic scene at the end was very smooth and satisfying. I also like your style of animation, it's different :-3

  • seems a lot like lion king hmmmm

  • o,o the bunnys face was sooo cute at 5:15 >w< i just what cuddel him and keep him his just soooooo CUTE!

  • Great vid i really hope you carry on. im doing a animation serice my self with a friend and we do our using hatena flipnotes.

  • @HoofClaw omg i have that XDDDDD

  • OH GOD THE RABBITS CUT AS HEK

  • this is really good but one part that made me luagh was the whispering part...hey ..a shh a shh ashh...but everything else was wonderful

  • PLZ MAKE ANOTHER ONE YOUR VERY GOOD!!!!

  • Five stars that great I could never do such a thing and all you frekin haters and shuve it up your butt cause this girl is super good and it takes allot of work to somthing like this so unless you work at pixar you can shut your a holes. And btw don't let hates stop you form what your doing and u better make a part two cause me and all my school would love it nice job

  • ive see the comments and i agree that u should make a part 2. ur really good at drawing and i look forward to it.

  • wenz will pt 2 b ???????????????

  • @MUmmiNR4Ch3L I'm really not sure if there will be a part 2. On the other site I collaborated on, I got mostly bad reviews, and a lot of people told me not to continue. I hope that I'll finish part 2 soon though....but it is very doubtful.

  • @Jessismith2000 noooooooooooooooooooo!you can't stop i really whant to see part 2

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  • @Jessismith2000 Well those people don't know what they're talking about. You have some real talent! Ignore them and keep doing your best!

  • @Jessismith2000 tell them they are stupid and need to shut up before they become my siamise twin (my fist will be in their mouth and will have to be surgeicly removed.) haha

  • @Jessismith2000 That wasn't very nice of them. I know I'd sure like to see more of this story! (:

  • @Jessismith2000 i saw it, they are just idiots! don't mind them, we love it in Youtube, keep it up!

  • @Jessismith2000 they don;t know anything! this is great! you animate better than me and your drawings are good, it sounds like a good story too, i'd continue

  • @Jessismith2000 Don't listen to those Bad reviews. Please put Part 2 on.

  • @Jessismith2000 don't listen to them!! can't you see theres plenty of people who do like it and would love to see more? your good at this, don't be discouraged, i for one want to see the rest of this story, and i see alot of other people commenting they want more as well. don'r give up on yourself!!! :)

  • how long dose it take to make animations as long as this?? im thinking of animating now 

  • @basketballrizzo Animation takes me a long time, but I work on it on and off so it takes me a few months to get a few minutes worth of animation. But I'm not a good animator, and draw pretty slowly. If you're good at art, it shouldn't take you long at all. :) Thanks for commenting, and sorry for the late response.

  • @Jessismith2000 You are a great animator in my oppinion. Please don't let some bad reveiws from a bunch of people who have NO clue how hard animating is, get you down. ^^ It takes a long time before you start to get comfortable with animating. Your art is beautiful, and you animations are smooth. I am looking forward to more of this, the story line is very interesting. :)

  • this was really good

  • really gr8 animation!!! when r u finally gonna make part 2?

  • @99WolfGirl99 Hey thanks. Sorry for replying late.  I'm not sure when I'll finish part 2. I got so many negative reviews on another site that I go on, and everyone was telling me not to continue....so I am probably cancelling this series. I'm glad you like it though. :)

  • @Jessismith2000

    make a secuond part!

    you stuborn fool -.-

    lol jk

    but srrsly.... make a seocund part O_O

  • @Jessismith2000 Hey dont let t hose people get you down, This is way better than anything I could do. You stayed focused enough to get this done, The animation is fluid, That rabbit looks better than mine |D and the wolf and lynx conflict is amazing, also fairly accurate. Your anatomy is also something to be credited. The people on that site might just have gotten either jealous, hated fantasy, or talking animals, maybe all three

  • Uhm the cats that you used, they are not social animals. In fact they are very independent, they don't meow or anything, instead if they even needed to communicate they would use signs such as putting thier ears back in submission etc... You should have done a little more research before animating.

  • Nice animation? Whats the name of the song? and where do you get it?

  • @animaluver1231 Hey thank you. :) Sorry for the late reply. The music was all created by me. You can view my songs at jessismith(dot)newgrounds(dot)­com Lol...I had to write it that way since the comments don't allow links. :) Thanks again.

  • Nice job, But the narration is hard to hear,

  • LOVE IT! Especially the animation, could do a lil work on the art tho. But i LUFF Eet

  • Loved it, Thought the Linx (or that's what i think it is) Draging the wolf was funny, and if you need some voices I'll help.

  • WOW! O.O I can't believe this! I love especially the way how the backgrounds move. It makes me feel like I'm really in the place where those animal's are.

  • wow! cant believe i only just noticed something amazing like this was on youtube! :D brillant job! ^^

  • GO BOBCATS!!! :D

  • *sigh* It's a pity that the second part won't be finished.

  • OMG WHAT DA HECK MY NAME IS JESSI SMITH!!! LOL isn't that cool?!?!?! Small world eh? Oh, by the way, awesome animation!!!

  • Small world!  :D

  • @Jessismith2000 apparently!  ;D

  • THAT'S AWSOME !

  • OOOOOOOOO THAT WAS..... AWESOME!!!!! Is there a part 2?

  • This is REALLY good!

    :D

  • omg this looks so good and sad. im confused did the wolves do it? or something else?

  • Have you considered making this into a book? it would be a good one

  • Now that was really good! Wat animation program do you use? id really like to know cos im thinking of animating too.

    That was really great!

  • @56weasel I use Toon Boom Studio 4 to make all of my animations, but there are also lots of free ones to play around with.  Good luck. Animating is a lot of fun. :)

  • Your animation is impressive.

    Im thinking of animating myself.