0:09 (little major thing is cool), 0:20-0:24 (that counterpoint is awesome) , 1:49 (just that note. so good), 1:55 (cascades are very effective here but may need a little tweaking), 2:34 (may need a smoother transition). I really liked the new material for the recapitulation. Also, your variety in phrase lengths was good. It kept my ear interested. Just one thing: I feel that there are a lot of thirds and sixths. Be risky and try some other intervals out. Other than that, I enjoyed this.
very nice from 1:25 to 2:33
NeoclassicYT 2 weeks ago
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NeoclassicYT 2 weeks ago
Beautiful work!!!!! You say you're 16? BRAVO, my good sir.
BenGabbay 3 months ago
I like it very much.
InnocentParadis 4 months ago in playlist Top YouTube Composers
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InnocentParadis 7 months ago in playlist YouTube composers
dang.. musical genius.. future Bach and Mozart (:
mockingjay42 9 months ago
I love this composition. I wish I could be as good as you in composing.
StanBorys 1 year ago
0:09 (little major thing is cool), 0:20-0:24 (that counterpoint is awesome) , 1:49 (just that note. so good), 1:55 (cascades are very effective here but may need a little tweaking), 2:34 (may need a smoother transition). I really liked the new material for the recapitulation. Also, your variety in phrase lengths was good. It kept my ear interested. Just one thing: I feel that there are a lot of thirds and sixths. Be risky and try some other intervals out. Other than that, I enjoyed this.
musicguy119 1 year ago
@musicguy119 Hey! What do you mean by "Lot's of 3rds and 6ths" ?
AnAmericanComposer 1 year ago
the first part reminds me of loz and i thought it was great
coryn1250 1 year ago
The piece is very nice! Enjoyable rhythms, and an interesting melody!
DarkRaimundo 1 year ago
I have a decent machinima idea for this.. hmmm let me think about it over with my friend to see if he is down :)
illuSsioNxX 1 year ago
@illuSsioNxX Ok, thank you for concidering!
AnAmericanComposer 1 year ago