Above Top Secret! Episode 1, Part 1 of 3

[kingdrew909]

straight creeper

[OMNISLASHER1000]

All people of science,math and education,obviously have already concluded the numbers behind the reality of alien beings,wether they be,demons,angel,physical or supernatural,they are real,there is no question behind this,it is no longer a debate...facts are facts brothers...but this guy seems too be full of shit as far as i can tell...there are things out there though...

[Geistjaeger]

Very enjoyable.

[demoncleaner1000]

hahaha - i know your secret and phone man's!! You bought a bottle of kaolin and morphine, waited til it settled and fermented and sucked all the separated brown liquid down your greedy upper class mouth!!! Now your just on a babbling ragga tip!! where a tin foil hat dude, as you masterbate in your own faecal matter. Sad!!

[TrutherD1]

Above Top Secret (ATS) and C2C suppress the truth!! They banned me for talking about ___. watch?v=L7_ICeHmfWs

[ausdiv]

"some big words there, shame their misused". Talking about misusing words, 'their' should be 'they're' which i think is strange as you seem to consider yourself a wordsmith. These are not words of insult but merely advice.

You need to seek some help my friend.

[JohnDoylepoems]

@ausdiv yeah im not sure what i was talking about there to be honest. I dont need to seek help, but thanks. its merely me messing about making a radio play when iw as young and bored, nothing more, nothing less. although it does have 12,000 hits, more then some of my better poems, and even the one that was actually published in a poetry magazine oh and the time i wont on utube a poetry competition, so wordsmith or not, thanks for your comments.

[fedorthelastempire1]

this sucks!

[ezranpee]

I accept the Old british radioplay style and I dont think you actually need visuals save an old time radio set perhaps in a 1940's family setting..perhaps some art deco space art,which could simply be pictures fading in and out,then back to varying old time war radio shots

your voice is very good you simply need to craft the content down and stylize it into a clear start middle and end..

Otherwise the style is orginal..

[computerpolice]

this is indicative of a mental health disorder. I beleive you may be completely insane. Suggestion: you need some pics to go with your subject the voice just isnt enough.

[JohnDoylepoems]

some big words there, shame their misused.... lol. mental health disorder? insane? How is that proved by my stories? Its not, you wordsa of insult are merely that... yes pics would be nice, but dont have time or skill to do so. sorry. thanks for comment.

[JD1010101110]

your name is John Doyle and your from Portsmouth?

[JohnDoylepoems]

hi, thanks......

[jose2111]

misterious voice sounds a little scary uhm a little boring with some video coool be great keep going good job

[JohnDoylepoems]

yeah i know if i could do animation, then yeah it would be great, if u know an animate, then he can take the file and do something with it. ty

[watts98]

boring

[JohnDoylepoems]

sorry u were bored, pls check out my other stuff.

[watts98]

Thanks for responding. It was very classy of you to do so. I did not wish to have my comment to be interpreted as being mean. I shall take your advice and look at your other works. Thanks

[JohnDoylepoems]

no worries. i dont mind. Its good to get good and bad comments. It is life to have people who like and dislike what you do. why should i get annoyed at it. as the saying goes you cna't please all people all the time. And its not mean, just your personal comment. i value all comments, good or bad, especially those which explain why, as then i learn. Thanks for responding to my response. peace.