betrayaL - [17]

[purplexskies]

I loved this chapter possibly my favorite chapter even If I'm not a fan of these two.

[famousgirll77]

wow...nick nick nick....you make me hate him and then love him...i just can't decide great work on this chapter it was so beautiful and really great twist to the story line...i love it. :)

[waaybackintolove]

loved it

[tonzylove]

awwwwww, i love it!!

[MrPrezRocks]

:0 ahhhhhhhhhhh!!!!! As much as I feel bad for Selena, I love Niley even more! :D They are soooo freakin' cute <3 ahhh! Next one soon Jenny!!! <3

oh....the comments on this story have been....great! ;) haha

[musicluver771]

"Youll always be my baby" AWWWWW. i love niley so much in this story. selena needs to just leave haha. if nick gets sober and yells at miley agin im gunna flip the fuck out haha. BTW this story is the only reason i come on youtube anymore. 

[NileyFan30]

WHATTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT­TTTTTTT? -dead- that just made my life, omg. "You'll always be my baby" anskjansasa,laz <3333333

[CasiAngeles193]

loved it!!

[BabyvFan98]

Ew. U kissed him rite after he threw up, now thats love @.@ 

[p1nkLov3rr]

I hate that he keeps doing this to Miley but yet I love it, no matter how twisted niley is always better than nelena I just wish nick would see that

[ultimatenileyfan101]

nick... please don't do this AGAIN!

[MusicLoveNiley]

Omg! :) the puke part was kinda disgusting but I loved it! Lol :) can't wait for the next!

[jonasluver9892]

Omg!!!!!

[209emmadiva]

Oh wow Nick , way to go...cheat on and hurt Selena more after she just started to trust you ! Smh

[BeSomebodyXx]

nooo miley

[lovely6396]

You can only resist the urge soo long before you cave in and some people wouldnt do as good on this as you did.:)<3 My guilty pleasure;)

[PettyInPink1]

OMGOMGOMG! I CAN'T wait for the next one!!!

[h3l3n4rodrigu3short4]

I absolutely freaking LOVED it, lol!!! sooo... you got the 50 comments, please tell me you also got the 52 subscribers so you can post the marathon... D:

[kenijoe161921]

awwwwww! I hope they get back together!

[xalwaysmileyfanx]

AHHHHHHH! that was so good! Niley should get back together!

[nicolegoro]

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww he should so dump selena

[lyndsey1398x]

awwwww! I hope that doesnt lead to anything he needs to pay! And break up with selena and beg miley back an i hope he was sober when he kissed her

[LuluuBs]

hawjgeaihgbangjauio SPEECHLESS

[niley4everbabez]

Awe!! Its getting better and better! (:

[tjayJBfan]

I know you're trying to deny him miley....i know it's hard....aspecially with him soaking wet with his shirt off....hes just too damn desirable lol

[nytmka]

noooo miles stay strong! great job, can't wait for the next one!

[inano121]

Love this story can't wait for the next one

[ilikenerds554]

Scandalous !!!!!!

[xxiluvnileynjoejxx]

Miley don't!!! You had just begun to get over him, don't fall into his arms again!

Amazing!!!! Love this story!!

Cant wait for more :)

[supportonmiley]

miley don't he's a jerk, and panting jerk.

[ladyxxlilcutiedivaxx]

omg i love this story so much is so good cant wait for the next one 2 come out

[smil3ychey]

:O whoa!

eww nick just puked and they're kissing ? xD

yuckk. hahaha:p

i love your writing! <3

[czarinajeanb]

Whoa! I was kind of expecting a jiley moment but what ever. They kissed and Nick just threw up before that... EW!

[TheGenesis804]

NOOOOOO! Why?!?! Miley instead ofkissing him go clean up the puke and leave him there. Take him to his house. Gosh ugh well post soon.

[3333skatergirl]

I have never been more confused.... Idk which couple I like anymore and which charcter I hate :/

[nightowlbaybaybaby]

Miley, nope, don't do that. One, he's drunk, and two, he threw up. GROSS.

[chrisbrownhsmjblover]

...........idek what to think.

[takeerah13]

nooo miley pull away

[xlovingmiley]

Noooo, nick needs to learn his lesson. Selena is gonna be PISSED shed prob sleep with justin. Please update soon :) love it

[xxpurplerain]

ughhhhhh

[Kaiteyful]

Miley is a moron. Nick is fucking stupid. Just no.

[Smilerz2101]

AMAZING XD

[mrsniley]

nick first throwed up and now miley is kissing him...ewwwwwwwwww :D

anyways love it :)

[CyrusJonasRuleX]

Eurghh niiiickkk ! Realllyy?! Hmmm...I don't think miley would be enjoying that kiss...I mean like wouldn't his breath stink ? Ahahah :|

Loved itt!!

[musicismylife500]

they're both stupid. 

[Vanessaforeva12]

Oops , I meant throwing up

[Vanessaforeva12]

Umm , eww . Nick is a dickhead for going to her house , tutoring up on her & kissing her . He disappoints me . Anyways , aww .. Miley ...

[summerqueen17]

Finally Some Niley Action!!!

[purplehearts74]

Nick! What the hell?!

[smilesarecoolheyhey]

poor miley

[MissNileyObsessed]

I'm just wondering...why would Miley want to kiss Nick? I mean, I know she's in love with him and everything, but that's not what I mean by my question. He just threw up and didn't brush his teeth...I wouldn't want to kiss him.

[LALover94]

Loved it :D

Poor Miley :( , wish Nick would just pick her already :P

[bffupfaee]

poor miley that was disgusting! I loved it!

[bayaby887]

I feel bad for miley damn nick pick

[MuffinManFan16]

ugh.. that was disgusting :D but also cute <3 mooooooore!! =)

[litaedge17]

I feel bad for miley she was trying to get over him then he dose this

he needs to make up his mind and choose who he wants to be with and let the other one be happy and move on

cant wait for next one...loved it

[x0xvaleriex0x]

Noo. Ugh Nick doesn't deserve neither of them.

[lakitawilliams]

ewww if that happend to me i would of puked lol and miley dont fall for him AGAIN and in a way i hope selena finds out but has a go at nick and not miles

[sabriiarg]

nick needs to stop doing this to Miley & Selena..

he needs to CHOOSE!!

loved it anyway lol

you are a great writer :)

[xXMarlznAriezxX]

eew nick fell on his vomit, loool!! This is going to cause drama, and guess who'll show up just in time....Selena, well i hope so, so that she can finally see wat Nick is doing to her and end it for real

[XLoveXXDreamX]

miley dont kiss back, nick is drunk and will most likely change his mind in the morning! :(

[MissMileyObsessed]

amazing.amazing.amazing.

I feel sorry for Miley though.

Nick needs to choose her or leave her the fk alone.

Loved this: )

[EpicLovex]

I'm so excited for the next part! This story is so fun to read.

[angelika601]

omg i love it!

they both will regret this tomorrow.

can't wait for next one :)

[Dollhousexx3]

eww nicks vomit :p

[popstar27430]

"I'm Not ur baby!" LOL XD More

[jocyproduction]

I have slight feeling Selena is going to show up......

Poor Miley, Nick is being a Dick.

[TheMsBrandy1]

all I could think about after Nick kissed her was the taste of vomit. Oh my gosh, seriously, that's all that entered my mind was that he just puked haha. But still, it was great. I melted when Nick said that Miley would always be his baby.

[LovableBearRox]

That is so disgusting what Nick did. That shows, he can't hold his liquor. LOL. Anyways it was great.

[babygurl5410]

Finally niley!!(:

[nileyfan1998]

not being funny but didn't nick kiss her JUST after he throwed up.....ERRRR!

And also wat is he doing i mean i kno his drunk but still u cant hurt miley again she has moved on until U! came ....men confuse me

[shahilover3]

Awe come on Miley he'll regret doing this tomorrow morning so you're just to get another heartbreak. Don't fall for him again. It's amazing. I loved it. I can't wait for the next one. Thx!!

[TBHS2012]

Miley .... you need to pul away.... do it for Selena, this could earn you hee trust back.... Loved it... cant wait for the next one

[NileyXhope]

ohmygodddd eeeeeeeee this is so addicting!!

I love this story :D

hahah "babbyyy" "I'm not your baby!" LOL.