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  • masy and Kira sound like me and me friend Mikel. watching the kills then killing everyone...bUt am TOTALLy the demon chick!!! >:)

  • HAHAHA lol this is great! :D The 2nd alice was a hobo XDDD that made me laugh so hard my mom was like O.O? Great job :)

  • There's also, LOTS of errors here.

  • It's just,..not the same without Miku.

  • lol the 2 kids kill the demon girl

  • Lol color fail. .

  • holy crumpets people, read the description, it says that she/he is aware that the colors are wrong and that Rin and Len aren't both girls. THIS IS HER/HIS OWN TAKE ON IT!

  • @TheMes4 um.... Len's a guy!!!!!!

  • @KagamineSydmay yeah i know

  • Awesome job :D I like ur human style, better then mine -w-'

  • awsome song, horrible art :/

  • That was awesome but your colors are off. Meiko's red, Kaito's blue, Miku's green, and Rin and Len are gold. Still spectacular video. I commend you on your depictions of violence.

  • @JollyRancherBoy384 read the descrip. it says that the person is aware that the colors are wrong

  • @TheMes4 Oh, didn't see that. My bad. :P

  • can u please tell me how can I find the original version of this? thank you! n.n really good vid u made a really good work! I luv it <3

  • I love this :3

  • Great video. I wanted to ask u for some advise if u dont mind. Im trying to finish a story but Im missing something. My friends suggested a manipulative type of character, u know like Cyake, but Im not sure. Any suggestions?

  • the colors are messed.......

  • your effects are amazing, so are your drawings, at the end it was very clever, putting the shapes on :D

  • Anyone remembers suiginto...

  • 1:07 sweeet^^

    very good! (my english not...)

    but the twins are a boy and a girl.

  • @AlecAngel14 This is what Dragonchick said in her description "I am aware that the colors aren't correct and the Len and Rin twins aren't both girls. As I said below, this is my own take on it."

  • wow! this was awesome :D i love the storyline. very original!

  • Listen people, THERE IS NO STORY, THERE IS NO ANIME, NO MANGA, NO MOVIE, NO NOTHING. IT'S JUST THE MUSIC VIDEO. It annoys me when people keep asking what anime it is when there is none.

  • sweet story i want to buy it if it gets published

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  • thubs up if u laught when the little guys were dead 1:07

  • jadors !!!!

  • This was AMAZING

  • thats cool,i like yours is (i think so at least) just as good as the origanal,a little better(it would probaply be better if i watched this one first^^) and i want to read this story,sounds really interesting 0(^-^)0

  • THAT WAS AWESOME :3

  • i love this. i like third alice ^-^

  • this is so epic!!!! b(^o^)b

  • Go twins

  • @maximumride131313 I think you're so dumb to not realize all those things you said were in there because you read Maximum Ride.

  • um the twins are supposed to be a boy and a girl why are u apoligizing for them not being both girls???

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  • that was awesome!!!

  • The story you have is completly different to the song. There was no dragon, no eye thing, and the twins didn't murder. WTF???

  • oooh~ nice~

  • what is the original book called?

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  • oh and ur drawins are awesome

  • in stead of makin a remake of it u made ur own awesome version ^^ 1000000/10

  • i love this video

  • OC Pride!!! XD

    I salute to you!!

  • What book is this? I reeeally wanna know

  • @anju0623 what r u explaining? I dont think that is the storyline for this video cause of the description.... I really wanna know cause it sounds interesting

  • I love it <3

  • @ArtseyTrilogy omg!! whats the book called? it sounds really good!

  • I like the story behind the version that you made. Well done. ^^

  • (Oh, how'd you do the blood efftets?)

  • THIS is a book I'd READ! :D

  • Dammit I killed the replay button. ._.;

  • Best thing ever made. :D

  • I love the story very nice i like how u did the color skyme and the plot id like to read your book!!

    <3

  • i like your version of this song^^ really good^^ yeah i like this video. it is good really.

  • 2:42 Me And My Firend Allanah xDD

  • It is a good video but it confuses me because I know the lyrics in English. >.<

  • o3o 1:44 bitch XDDDD

  • THIS IS AMAZING!!! I LOVE IT!!! The colours are perfect for the way that YOU did it.  XD

  • EVERYONE!!!!!!! READ THE DESCRIPTION!!!!!!!! She made this for a school final! It's HER own creation!!! She KNOWS the colors are WRONG. Leave her be and just watch the video!!!! >.<

  • :D good project with your friend even i would make tht video even tho it has blood in it i love gore and blood no matter wat :D

  • keep pressing 6. it sounds like haku :D

  • It's Red,Blue,Green,then Yellow.

    Meiko was taken by the dream and began to kill people as she thought she would escape that way, but she was caught, and trapped in a cage.

    Kaito began to sing and a crowd formed, he then realised the lyrics and went mental, He shot himself.

    Miku was taken in by the king to be his queen, but soon after she was taken over by a nightmare, only being able to see dead people.

    Rin and Len were lost in wonderland, and eventually they found Meiko who killed Rin.

  • @anju0623 OOOOOOOHHHH!!!!!I GET IT!!!!THANKS SOOO MUCH FOR EXPLAINING!!!! IF YOUR A BOY I LOOOVE YOUUUU!!!IF YOU A GIRL THENN...YOU ROOOOCCCKKKK!!!! XD

  • I loved it!!!!!!! It really made me think about WonderLand.... I think the JabberWonky got them!!!!!!!

  • I was so confused i'm like these aren't the vocaloid colors but either way i enjoyed especially kaito part

    always have to add *w* < rape face

  • u got the chacter colors wrong!! xD red blue green then yellow!

  • I can't believe you got marked down for blood, that is what shows the insanity!

    Oh well, you still got an A, i loved it myself :3

  • GET YOUR CHARACTER HAIR RIGHT!!!

  • I love it ~~

  • "Smart Little Brother"? But they're both female! XD

  • This is the greatest OC version I've ever seen!! I like how you changed the story a little bit, it's VERY epic indeed. I've been wanting to make my on OC version for a while, but won't be as near as good as yours!

  • I wanna read ur book XD

  • Interesting take on the song. I know it doesn't match the song but still a very interesting story. I like it.

  • You got the story wrong I know you put about the colours in Desc!

    but the first Alice (Red) had a sword and made a bloody path and she disapeared

    she didn't turn into a demon then killed every one

    and the second Alice (Blue)

    was a rose and he sang songs and he got shot by a 'mad-man'

    THIRD ALICE (green)

    WAS QUEEN! then she went evil and she could not go out of the wonder land

    not with a knife killing people ...

  • @TheLaurenify Read description ^-^

  • The Fourth part kinda confuses me. . was Kira already around in Kaida's present time or not when she killed her? Because if Kira and Masy killed Kaida before Kira even existed, Kira wouldn't exist. . . so please clarify if Kira was already around.

  • by away cyake look more suite to be 1st alice cuz she look just like meiko

  • good video ^^ A++++

  • Anyone else notice.."The Spade Suit of Wrath." "The Diamond Suit Of Greed." "The Club Suit of Lust." and "The Heart Suit of Envy." All names of Homunculus off Full Metal Alchemist...lol just thouht i'd point that out ^^ Anyways....great video!! I would've gave it an A+ ^.^

  • That was amazing <3 I love the designs for all the characters and how you put a new spin on sucha wonderful song! 1000000000000/10 <3

  • ok so i have this song on mah iPod right? well ironically, RIGHT after this song plays, i hear "IMMA FIRIN MAH LAZAR!!! BLAGH!!!!!" becuz i have that sound on mah iPod for some reason ._. .-. o_O

  • Would you please send me the link to the story you're writing? It seems really good.

    If you would be kind enough?

  • 29 dislikes were killed by Kaida

    lol anyways this is so awesome!

  • can you please put the story on here?

  • @OMGhappiness I'd pronounce it "siak" or "syak."

    @ Everyone: The surviving Alice's name is funny, for the main character's (a serial killer) cover name in Death Note is Kira. If I remember correctly, it translates to "Killer."

    Love this song, haha. Not many songs are morbid enough for me.

  • How do you pronounce Cyake? Just wondering cause anyone who isn't used to weird fantasy names is gonna be like lol Cake.

  • EPIC.

  • I love it :x

  • its all so mixed up!!

  • Where can I find your story?

  • :P

  • Ahhhh so amazing!

  • Kira? like in deathnote they said Kira -> Killer.... Did you get insperation from there O3O

  • I liked the artwork alot. Kaida was probably my favorite if not the twins.(Creepy twins always tend to be one of those things that gets people everytime)

  • this might sound weird but 1:08 looks kinda cute XD

  • @gamefangirl it does! :D

  • I love the end I was like, "Look out gu- oh you killed her already." ._.

  • Alright, the end just plain creeped me out. But noce job anyways!

  • I like it!!!

  • different, but i still love it. great job on this video.

  • Where did you buy this song?

  • Veeery nice :D

  • AWSOME. :D

  • cyake look like meiko i think she should be the 1st XD good video anyway (ps i didn't even finish watching it yet)

  • That was a insane experience, and i liked it.

  • that was the stupidist thing i ever watched

  • If there was another card, it would be joker

  • 1:32 me: LELOUCHHHHHHHH!!!!

  • *faceplam* read the dam top comments and stop being trolls.

  • 歌ってみたかよ!

  • people she/he made her own version its not supose to be the same, theres not supose to be a girl and boy at end and there not supode to die, and everyone is not supose to be the same color, and the third alice isnt supose to be queen at the end!!!! its her own version!!!!!!!!!

  • very good vid :). i enjoyed it very much and it is colored beautifully :).

  • guys,

    SHE IS AWARE THE COLORS ARE WRONG!

    SHE INTENDED IT TO BE THAT WAY!

    GOD.

  • its awsome how you took it and wraped it to your disire!! Its very intersting!!! i love it! Could you tell me where i could fing the first (And realy) Alice Human Sacricie book?

  • MAN, I wish I could do that! :P

  • dudes, i dont care if its out of colour order or whatever, I LIKE IT! go you dragonchick :D

  • amazing :D

  • it goes red the blue then green then yellow

  • OH AND FYI THE LAST ONES ARE A LITTLE BROTHER AND A BIG SISTER!!

  • DUDE RED IS THE FRIST!! NOT BLUE!! ALSO THE TWINS ARE YELLOW AND THE GIRL YOU PUT FRIST IS NOT BLUE SHES GREEN AND THE BOY IS BLUE!!!! >:(

  • @fantageandppgzrock1 Do you realize that she/he decided to make their own version? I think it's very creative.

  • Wat, theres a book? TELL ME!

  • Everyone shut your stupid F-ing mouths! Like you guys can do any better and this video is his/her version of it dumb-asses! Read the description before you post!

  • Twins: DAMMIT!!! ALL THE GOOD PEOPLES ARE DIED!!!

    Twin1: Ooh, lets go through this doors!!

    Twin2: Wateves, just gets me a persons to keel

    *Blue Alice walks up* Twins:FINALLY!!! *Kills blue alice*

  • I love the little people that Meiko allegedly 'kills'.

  • I do actually like this. Very creative ides. Most people just do a re-do of the vocaloids or do the other -loids. Love the art. It's cool that you did the real people as well.

  • ทำไม เล็นเป็นผู้หญิง - -''

  • great video

  • every version of this songs give me thrilled in my spine

  • I thought the fourth alice was guy and girl!

  • @rubberbander08 yeah len and rin "twins"

  • @DarkVampireAngel9 But in this video it looks like they both are girls.

  • @rubberbander08 the singer are a boy and girl of the real one they are vocaloids

  • Epic..

    This says everthing..

  • OMFG I LOVE THIS

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  • This was frickin amazing..i watched it a few times n didnt get it but once i read the description i totally understood :)!... this was very creative

  • @halla4763 Like you can do better?:/

  • @IchigoLYagami your right we should never judge anything unless we can do better whether it be art,politics,or acting.

  • @halla4763 Alright :3

  • @halla4763 Obvious troll is obvious. Credit for creativity, though.

  • @halla4763 SHUT UP HALLA EVERYWERE I GO YOUR FREEKING THERE WRIGHTING A MEAN COMENT ON A VIDEO THAT SOMEONE WORKED HARD ON AND ITS NOT LIKE YOU CAN DO ANY BETTER!!!! YOU CALL YOUR SELF A VOCALOID FAN BUT YOU MAKE MEAN COMENTS ON EVERY VOCALOID VIDEO EVER MADE!!!!! (7 pages away from me)

  • yay!! this is pretty awsome. i like it!

  • wtf?!?! none of the vocaliods look right an len a girl?!?! its stuborn older sister and smart younger BORTHER

  • *¬*!

  • Yay I loved it and now I understand what it's about!!!

  • this is amazing c':

  • one other thing the twins did not kill the first alice dddaaaaa

  • morron the first alice is red stupid

  • @sandpaw327 Read the info before you post. This is based on her own story not the original. :P

  • this is freaking me out o_O but its a good story

  • Marked down for blood?!? What, That's the best part!

  • the colors are mixed a bit but its awesome :3

  • Absolutely AMAZING video! Did you draw all this? The character bios make my head hurt a bit though...

  • trap

  • actually nice concept. Might be interesting to look into the story of yours.

  • thats very very beautiful

  • owo

  • MIKU REMIND ME KURUMU LOL

  • I always thought of the Vocaloids as just narrating (not that I ever had a problem with their inclusion in videos), so I like your take because all the characters are yours.

  • I love this! It's extremely creative! And for anyone who doesn't like the fact that it doesn't match the original 4 Alice's, just think of this is as her 5th Alice. ^^ .... And 6th, and 7th, and 8th XD

  • Epic twist like it

  • I love how you only added certain colors. Very good job. :D

  • ok i understand who die first on here

  • Aw, I really loved your version. It doesn't match the song lyrics, but still I loved your stories, especially the ending. ^^

  • yep!!!

  • i think they where