Great attempt - you'll learn a lot from making this short. Some really good moments here. Next time, just tighten the script up a little bit, and tighten the edit - maybe you could cut to a few more close ups in certain scenes - also, try and stick to the rule of thirds law. I would also ditch the onboard mic on the cam - they just aren't up to it - if you need sounds, add them in post - foley,fx,music etc.
Good job, at your guys age, I hadn't even picked up a camera, let alone shot a film
@HungerCultFilms Hey thanks man this is a video we did when we first started making films so be sure to check out our newer stuff. I'll think you'll be impressed on how much we've improved :D
Hey Kiddo ...dont listen to those assholes , they have no vision , ..Remember we are never guaranteed success but we are certainly guaranteed failure if we dont try and I think you deserve big Kudos for being Doers and not just bags of HOT AIR like the haters who are leaving these asinine comments Good Job keep striving to be better and you wont fail !!!!
You should upload anything onto YouTube as a WMV file; the picture quality will be better. And my rule if you're going to use the Camera's mic is to not shoot dialogue scenes outside. Keep up the good work though,
I think some of the shots and direction is better - but the sound is still a problem. And yeah, it does look like u used a strobe effect...you have to make sure that when you render your film that it's set to 24 frames per second. This looks like 29 frames per second.. It should be in PAL instead of NTSC. Some of the fights were good, to an extent. What type of file is it when you uploaded it to YOUTUBE? Is it an Mpg. file?
i now have a lot more conconoius (spelling :S) on how to do scenes, shoot them and the camera position for sure i use a wmv file to upload so i dont know y its like this
Hey matt that was great i had been waiting to see it for ages but the only bad bits were the wind making really bad noises and when maison (if thats how you spell it) stabbed the guy with a trowel you should of done that bit from behind his back to make it look better! but apart from that it was amazing!!!! 9 and 3/4 out of 10!!!
I would have muted most the outdoor scenes in the movie, and dubbed over it, the wind sounded terrible. Really bad choice of music guys, I have heard some of those in your other films. Lets be honest, the editing wasn't to good, the 'fade to black' transitions ruined the suspense and actual horror of the scenes. The sound effects were all the same, and didn't match the scenes. But all up, it was fairly good, great acting, decent filming, (bad cam) and it was definitely better than number one! :)
yer i 100% agree with you in every u sed i definatley need a better cam cos the pics cruddy and pickss up a hell lotta wind ill put ur 'fade to black' thing into mind in my editing and thks for watching and the advice :D
Great attempt - you'll learn a lot from making this short. Some really good moments here. Next time, just tighten the script up a little bit, and tighten the edit - maybe you could cut to a few more close ups in certain scenes - also, try and stick to the rule of thirds law. I would also ditch the onboard mic on the cam - they just aren't up to it - if you need sounds, add them in post - foley,fx,music etc.
Good job, at your guys age, I hadn't even picked up a camera, let alone shot a film
HungerCultFilms 1 year ago
@HungerCultFilms Hey thanks man this is a video we did when we first started making films so be sure to check out our newer stuff. I'll think you'll be impressed on how much we've improved :D
belrock1 1 year ago
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k4in1zere 2 years ago
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k4in1zere 2 years ago
whos grave did you spit on?
PastaCheifFilms 2 years ago
dn lol
belrock1 2 years ago
wow it was pretty scary and it would be csaryer if you putt god sounds efeckt +++++ man!
heavyspy13 2 years ago
I LOVE IT
mariogalaxy500 2 years ago
wow connor casement you did a pretty good job on that with simon negle as the killer dude, bet you cant guess who this is.
PastaCheifFilms 2 years ago
Nice one belly cant wait for fos3! keep it up
steviep13rocks 3 years ago
Thats Pretty good well done
guitargod995 3 years ago
fear of silence 3 coming very soon even more blood and violence lol
jaybwen 3 years ago
sick vid dude! Great job man!
KJ0012 3 years ago
this vid is good and we may film fos3 soon
scholsey360 3 years ago
O yeah mate ! nice one,at last a bit a blood !!
deadkoalas 3 years ago
hey m8 its callum this video is great
callumh1305 3 years ago
Hey Kiddo ...dont listen to those assholes , they have no vision , ..Remember we are never guaranteed success but we are certainly guaranteed failure if we dont try and I think you deserve big Kudos for being Doers and not just bags of HOT AIR like the haters who are leaving these asinine comments Good Job keep striving to be better and you wont fail !!!!
headrushindi 3 years ago 4
thks so much man :D thts probz my fav comment of all time ;)
belrock1 3 years ago
thanks that comment means alot to us
jaybwen 3 years ago
Keep up the creepy good work!
EerieTube
eerietube 3 years ago
thks man :D
belrock1 3 years ago
8. Ginge keeps changing accent.
9. That trowel didn't look like it went in him tbh.
10. The finger in the corner of the camera didn't do you any favours
BodzLFC 3 years ago
1. It's Association not accociation.
2. Change the fucking music (why the exorcist theme all the time).
3. Surely you could jump that fence!
4. How strong do you want your drink lol.
5. You can't hear half the dialogue.
6. Why when you have ran away from the lad with a hood (very scary) then run back towards him by going past scholesy's house.
7. Can't hear you again.
BodzLFC 3 years ago
One word....SHIT!
BodzLFC 3 years ago
dont forget to subscribe!
belrock1 3 years ago
I won't subscribe don't worry
BodzLFC 3 years ago
oh well i just have to put up with my other 99 subbers
belrock1 3 years ago
other 99 suckers
BodzLFC 3 years ago
hehe there actually called subscribers, at least u got the first 2 letters right :)
belrock1 3 years ago
get a life out side of being a harsh critic and maybe try and make a horror ure self then u can judge other ppl
jaybwen 3 years ago
awesome! best bit the last fight scene and great wiv the rage at the end
rugbyrock101 3 years ago
You should upload anything onto YouTube as a WMV file; the picture quality will be better. And my rule if you're going to use the Camera's mic is to not shoot dialogue scenes outside. Keep up the good work though,
AnthonyJFrame 3 years ago
I think some of the shots and direction is better - but the sound is still a problem. And yeah, it does look like u used a strobe effect...you have to make sure that when you render your film that it's set to 24 frames per second. This looks like 29 frames per second.. It should be in PAL instead of NTSC. Some of the fights were good, to an extent. What type of file is it when you uploaded it to YOUTUBE? Is it an Mpg. file?
AnthonyJFrame 3 years ago
i now have a lot more conconoius (spelling :S) on how to do scenes, shoot them and the camera position for sure i use a wmv file to upload so i dont know y its like this
belrock1 3 years ago
that was pretty cool..but when the wind hit the microphone, it made the sound kinda shity
mematt665 3 years ago
i know there was litterally no wind in some scenes but its was quite loud when i watched it over
belrock1 3 years ago
how come the cameras not as good as it was in fos1
zeawesomeness 3 years ago
i think it was the length of the film i dn lol :S
belrock1 3 years ago
why is the camera like a strobe?
jwmovies1031 3 years ago
i think it was the length of the movie cos this is quite longer than my others but obv the pictures shitty
belrock1 3 years ago
nice bro!! very creative
OzzyTheDevil4 3 years ago
thks man :D
belrock1 3 years ago
this was a good homemade horror movie. 5/5. got anything else comin up?
HORRORZone666999 3 years ago
yh we've got a lot planned like fos3 and a friday the 13th fan film which im really looking forward to making :D
belrock1 3 years ago
cant wait 2 c them.
HORRORZone666999 3 years ago
and sackface belly
jaybwen 3 years ago
U little guys r good cant wait to see what u guys do later down the road loved the end :D
wandy64755 3 years ago
thks man :D
belrock1 3 years ago
you dont remember me the guy above this was me lol :D
MrDvDFREAK1 2 years ago
lol :P
belrock1 2 years ago
Hey matt that was great i had been waiting to see it for ages but the only bad bits were the wind making really bad noises and when maison (if thats how you spell it) stabbed the guy with a trowel you should of done that bit from behind his back to make it look better! but apart from that it was amazing!!!! 9 and 3/4 out of 10!!!
huffy1095 3 years ago
thks man totally agree with u on the wind and btw me + u = best mosh pit eva
belrock1 3 years ago
AMAZING! ive bin waiten 4 this 1 4 AGES. the end was classic. will the guy with the mask carry on to be son of jason?
rugbydude12321 3 years ago
thks man erm cant reveal to much ;) but he is his son but hes not jason
belrock1 3 years ago
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borochone 3 years ago
thks for the comment and how is gran torino?
belrock1 3 years ago
mason hades is dead
jaybwen 3 years ago
not great editing
not great music
great acting (by me)
and the wind was anoying lol but fos2 is quite good
scholsey360 3 years ago
loved the wake up bit at end my idea for the music lol yay thanks for watching and commenting guys plz sub we have a lot more coming your way
jaybwen 3 years ago
thks for the idea jay tht made the film awsum 4 me
belrock1 3 years ago
it was a great vid guys well done cant wait till fos 3 is filmed
iboomedi 3 years ago
thks man
belrock1 3 years ago
I would have muted most the outdoor scenes in the movie, and dubbed over it, the wind sounded terrible. Really bad choice of music guys, I have heard some of those in your other films. Lets be honest, the editing wasn't to good, the 'fade to black' transitions ruined the suspense and actual horror of the scenes. The sound effects were all the same, and didn't match the scenes. But all up, it was fairly good, great acting, decent filming, (bad cam) and it was definitely better than number one! :)
KamelFilms 3 years ago
yer i 100% agree with you in every u sed i definatley need a better cam cos the pics cruddy and pickss up a hell lotta wind ill put ur 'fade to black' thing into mind in my editing and thks for watching and the advice :D
belrock1 3 years ago
Great choice of music at the end
Tyas004 3 years ago
thks timmy :D
belrock1 3 years ago
the best bit by far was the
this
time
i will
KILL YOU
it was such a great adea and brill acting by me lol
scholsey360 3 years ago
amazing the bit where connor is punching me is amazing
internalflame34 3 years ago