For your future videos, i think this monotone persona really works- it makes things a lot more funny but like the other post said, the writing needs to play off of the tone like when you said "she's more than likely a prostitute" or ".. for some girls 8". I really lmao-ed and try to keep the camera stationary. you have potential to really blow up! keep it up, god bless
I think your subject matter is hilarious and real. I think these are subjects that are not just spoken about enough in our generation. However, the points you are making are going right under the radar because of your delivery.
There's two ways to approach this: if you're keeping your calm, monotone persona, then your writing has to be alot more gripping than it is now. If you are not intending to keep this persona, then try acting out a bit more.
Lol lien too my eyes smhh!
AlyssaTootuffJade 3 months ago
whats cuffin' ?
bossladeelah 3 months ago
but plies is all sex music tho lmao
flyfancychick 4 months ago
funny stuff bro! keep the vids comin!
bangazz 4 months ago
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cee2cee77 4 months ago
For your future videos, i think this monotone persona really works- it makes things a lot more funny but like the other post said, the writing needs to play off of the tone like when you said "she's more than likely a prostitute" or ".. for some girls 8". I really lmao-ed and try to keep the camera stationary. you have potential to really blow up! keep it up, god bless
callmetagno 4 months ago 4
@callmetagno i appreciate the criticism, i'll definitely take that into consideration when making the next one, thanks for your help (:
GabeWilliamsTM 4 months ago
Woo super constructive criticism time!
I think your subject matter is hilarious and real. I think these are subjects that are not just spoken about enough in our generation. However, the points you are making are going right under the radar because of your delivery.
There's two ways to approach this: if you're keeping your calm, monotone persona, then your writing has to be alot more gripping than it is now. If you are not intending to keep this persona, then try acting out a bit more.
sosoherewego 4 months ago
@sosoherewego i appreciate the thoughts, & i'll keep that in mind for my next one, thanks!
GabeWilliamsTM 4 months ago
Very funny shit..lol
DancemyASSoffTM 4 months ago 2