I like this, as I like the collective and vaguely magical force of all of you together, whereever your life force may come from.
But many a great concept or tune may fail because it was not partyish enough. And was too full of pretty images and not anything disconcerting, or meaningful. (Reference: see Faithless who have gone too far in the other direction).
I feel a sense of joy is missing. Express your lives, and make it more linear.
I feel a sense of purpose is missing here also. What is your message? There is no point unless a meaningful newish idea is articulated, a way you had not thought about things before.
I like this, as I like the collective and vaguely magical force of all of you together, whereever your life force may come from.
But many a great concept or tune may fail because it was not partyish enough. And was too full of pretty images and not anything disconcerting, or meaningful. (Reference: see Faithless who have gone too far in the other direction).
I feel a sense of joy is missing. Express your lives, and make it more linear.
Maney57683454 4 years ago
I feel a sense of purpose is missing here also. What is your message? There is no point unless a meaningful newish idea is articulated, a way you had not thought about things before.
I think it was a very nice comment.
Maney57683454 4 years ago