try and make it so the beat for the chorus lines up with the words for the chorus in leavin and same with verse-verse, bridge-bridge and so on. Otherwise it sounds random. In the beginning i heard what you were trying to do i think..making it on the off beat? sometimes it works, sometimes it doesnt. this instance it doesnt (partially due to the fact that it is slightly off of where it needs to be for that). This can work, just: Reorganize and line things up. Fix the beginning and add some flare.
SLOW DOWN LEAVIN! THEN IT'LL BE PERRRRRFECT! :)
squirtturtle665 8 months ago 2
nice try it's not bad and it's not great. But hey I can't do this :P so keep it up :D
cbocstar 1 year ago
Dont listen to these jerks, it wasnt terrible and it was creative, good try
StarsEyes13 1 year ago
BOO!!!!
dislibrachickluvjmac 1 year ago
Bad.
blahblah5492 1 year ago
NUL
baelben 1 year ago
its a nice try....but the rhythm to leaving and take a bow are totally different.
sbbhi 2 years ago 5
this song needs to be illegal cause it sucks so much
lou2cute09 2 years ago 2
so so lame!
micahtlc 2 years ago 3
go pack some fudge. worst video ever dont line up
jrf1996 2 years ago
try and make it so the beat for the chorus lines up with the words for the chorus in leavin and same with verse-verse, bridge-bridge and so on. Otherwise it sounds random. In the beginning i heard what you were trying to do i think..making it on the off beat? sometimes it works, sometimes it doesnt. this instance it doesnt (partially due to the fact that it is slightly off of where it needs to be for that). This can work, just: Reorganize and line things up. Fix the beginning and add some flare.
StudMuffn890 2 years ago
nope doesnt work.
LilAznNikiix3 2 years ago 2
sucks.but great effort making the video.
TheMellow26 2 years ago 2
ii MhEAN DAh SONG ISZ NhOT WhACkk ITSZ JhUSZ iTSZ oFF BhEAT.
lilbubbl3sz540 2 years ago 3
leavin is too fast...doesn't sound so well
Biedi237 2 years ago 2
it sucks!
cjdm78 2 years ago 2
if u slowed Leavin down then maybe it could work.
Neindus 2 years ago 12
A for effort, but F for the track.
Crystalom3 2 years ago 2
sucky song.. Nice Try Though..
KennyKhoo1765 2 years ago
noooooooo not good!
lildesi09 2 years ago
this sucks.
loserjess 3 years ago
Sorry but that NOTHING, Jesses leavin is way better -.-
PepsieJMacFan 3 years ago
off beat man! :|
revgail24 3 years ago
u have no beat!
antaboo 3 years ago
the song leavin is too fast u have to slow it down a little...
ilovekimerald4life 3 years ago
I dont like the verse much, its messy, but I can say that the chorus was awesome ^^
KeiTakaro 3 years ago
you have to make a vid of his voice only i would soo love that. he has a good voice. :)
theAfterSh0cK 3 years ago
it may be off a little bit but the chorus actually sounds really good on this beat! this sounds cool! thnx 4 posting
~mikaela~ ♥
xXbryansbabygurlXx 3 years ago
gd job!!!!
awesome
XxflammelxX 3 years ago
it sounds cool but its wayy off!
brittneydonaldkuhn 3 years ago 3
It definitely shows.
whitesprite 3 years ago
where can i download it?
tuongvivu 3 years ago
holy this is so off
dvu3 3 years ago 3
This actually sounds cool =)
JmacFan4ever0709 3 years ago 3