The Call- One Shot Entry for JBLuvStorys Contest Part 1

[bennyboy9012]

OH HELL TO THE NO! That boy is well gonna get beatins! HA :L What the hell is wrong with him?! I hate guys who cheat! Makes my blood boil -.- He's a stupid arsehole.

I love it Ann :) You're writing is really good :) Good descriptive writing and I love how you've set it all out :D You better win this contest I will be serving out a dish off whoop ass. :)

[JBfiction11587]

@bennyboy9012 LOL Thanks Ben its good to know you got my back. XD

I know how could he be so stupid.

[JBFanFiction]

At the part where Joe said "You're really dropping out, I think my battery must be low. Listen If you can hear me we're going to a place nearby Alright! Gotta Go!" I got reminded of that Backstreet boys song and the music video, lol. I don't know if that was intentional but I will admit it made me laugh (not in a bad way). I freaking love this even though Joe's a total dick. :D

[JBfiction11587]

@JBFanFiction That's exactly where I got it from I Love BSB almost as much as JB, They were my first crushes. And this is sort of inspired by their song The Call. I had the idea of the breaking glass and then I ran with it and found the song fit too. I tried to put it as the audio track but I was having problems getting it to upload so I had to pull it. And Yes Joe is a Total Dick... a Hot one but one none the less. XD

[LovinTheNileyLoveX1]

GO BETH! you show him what you're made of! xD

Joe's a douche. -.-

[JBfiction11587]

@LovinTheNileyLoveX1 Yes he is.... Well in this story at least. XD

[craker1s1]

Oh wow!!! What the hell joe!!! thats just wrong! how could he do that to beth! and wow martin! really?! "Sorry! i gotta go! bye!" haha i kinda found that funny since he tried to think of an excuse after but what can you say when beth just said joe would be with him and the guys! smart. atleast now beth was able to take action and kick joe out! you go girl you do desrve better! Amazing one-shot im definatly sure youll win! gunna go read the next part!

[JBfiction11587]

@craker1s1 Thanks for your support. It's my first entry. I know it's just for fun but I'm kinda excited all the same.

I know with friends like Martin, Joe had no chance.

[JBLuvStorys]

Aww I feel sorry for Beth :( stupid Joe.

Im loving this :D Im off to read next part. :)

[JBfiction11587]

@JBLuvStorys Yes Stupid Joe!