E' una lama rovente nello stomaco, viene su fino alla gola, mentre il cervello è ghiacciato. It's a red-hot blade into my stomach creeping up to my throat, while my brain is freezing.
awesome! i love that u expressed alot of emotion, made it more meaningful! thats what i love about making poem videos! u express the emotion of the poem! great job! :)
I liked the music! At fist I thought it was intentional, but then clued in that the sounds were muffled music coming from outside of your room. The distant base somehow intensified your words...I think.
Fantastic as always. Only criticism is the muted music in the background distracts from the power, in my opinion. The impression is that it was incidental; like the bleeding through of activities distant and removed from your words. If it was intended to be present I'd still say it detracts rather than adds.
However, per the words, you speak beautiful truisms.. painfully beautiful truisms.
@Anarchosyn The music was unintentional, a band were playing downstairs. If only I knew how to isolate sounds and mute them or something. I hope it didn't distract too much.
I have just returned home from a shitty, shitty, shitty horrid evening at work to find your poem waiting on my pc. Listening to you perform this poem turned my mood around.
This is bloody brilliant poetry and an amazing performance. Your words, as ever, are genuinely felt and your humanity shines through and that is why I find your poetry so inspirational.
E' una lama rovente nello stomaco, viene su fino alla gola, mentre il cervello è ghiacciato. It's a red-hot blade into my stomach creeping up to my throat, while my brain is freezing.
Amazing, girl. So true and bitter.
Emptiness
silbaar 2 months ago in playlist Liked videos
So beautiful.
brybutlerrr 4 months ago
awesome! i love that u expressed alot of emotion, made it more meaningful! thats what i love about making poem videos! u express the emotion of the poem! great job! :)
rockerforever10 5 months ago in playlist More videos from peebzzz
really good :)
I like your style.
I think u might like mine, similar style and subject matter... check it out.
I'm gonna go view all ur others :)
leobermi 8 months ago
Very emotional...
SkullyHippie 9 months ago
pretty.
newcomposition 1 year ago
I liked the music! At fist I thought it was intentional, but then clued in that the sounds were muffled music coming from outside of your room. The distant base somehow intensified your words...I think.
meghanthebrave 1 year ago
@meghanthebrave Well, I'm glad you think it worked with it =] I should have a live video somewhere that I'll post up soon. You can compare =]
peebzzz 1 year ago
Powerful stuff.
23discordians 1 year ago
bit over the top....
have a spliff and get more ignorant, everyone else is....
lIRhYsUKIl 1 year ago
Fantastic as always. Only criticism is the muted music in the background distracts from the power, in my opinion. The impression is that it was incidental; like the bleeding through of activities distant and removed from your words. If it was intended to be present I'd still say it detracts rather than adds.
However, per the words, you speak beautiful truisms.. painfully beautiful truisms.
Anarchosyn 1 year ago
@Anarchosyn The music was unintentional, a band were playing downstairs. If only I knew how to isolate sounds and mute them or something. I hope it didn't distract too much.
peebzzz 1 year ago
I toataly get this! Keep up the great work!
TeresaSemenuk 1 year ago
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chree2008 1 year ago
Loveyou!
Hafzhan312 1 year ago
So goooood :)
lillyroseb 1 year ago
i really felt the emotion on this one, i love this one and am glad you have come back to us :) x
JoinTheCollective 1 year ago
Hi Pennie,
I have just returned home from a shitty, shitty, shitty horrid evening at work to find your poem waiting on my pc. Listening to you perform this poem turned my mood around.
This is bloody brilliant poetry and an amazing performance. Your words, as ever, are genuinely felt and your humanity shines through and that is why I find your poetry so inspirational.
Kind regards, Peter
nordicsky 1 year ago 2
that was brilliant, really powerful, awesome comeback :)
G x
garfieldthecat1994 1 year ago