oops i accidentally clicked enter....hee hee. and forgot to put my opinion of the one-shot!
i loved it because of the emotion and how you did it so well! plus! i love the fact that you went off the map and did jaylor for a lil while and little less of nelena cuz for some reason i was missing jaylor stories....MENTOS!!
Aww that's just so cute :)
camella98 1 year ago
will there be another 1???
julez3a 2 years ago
U r an awesome writer! btw can someone tell the name of the final song plz??
ceci1996 2 years ago
@ceci1996 its good girls go bad by cobra starship..but u probably already know tht since its been like 3 months..and awesome! i loved it...lol
NickJBabe13 1 year ago
GO NELENA!!
cheezey09 2 years ago 2
MENTOS hahaa
I loved this one shot it was pretty cool:D
greenRockz3 2 years ago
I like the font. :)
Mimii133 2 years ago
mentos
AngelDogz777 2 years ago
mentos and ive read this somewhere are both of them urs?
csnelena 2 years ago
i love your nelena stories
domi11jb 2 years ago
mentos
mylifesucksish 2 years ago
mentos
minimesmileyface 2 years ago
mentos
Riley18504 2 years ago
Mentos.
I say post Manhattan and cancel I'll be there forever.
soyrebelde08 2 years ago
u should post Manhattan
n stop I'll Be There Forever
mentos
luv the short story
kitkar123 2 years ago
MENTOS!!
I love mentos!! lol
this stroy was really good!
JBrocks109 2 years ago
i really liked it
it was sweet :]
mentos♥
3SxaxS3 2 years ago
it was soo cute!
it wasnt shitty
awesome ending!
Mentos! :)
ILYRissa18ILY 2 years ago
this was better than mentos.
post manhattan and keep writing HOPE. i absolutely love it already!!! :):)
nickjluv1212 2 years ago
eep :O i loved it! that was amazing, really good
not shitty at all LOL :]
Mentos :DD
suchaloser10 2 years ago
How cute?
Perfect ending.
Mentos are yummy. :]
ladiicrazii234 2 years ago
mentos are chewy :D
Manhattan!!!nelena! :D
blaiklewisfan 2 years ago
Aw, that was so cute. Yay, new Nelena story! LOL.
Well, if you're stopping a series, then stop "I'll Be There Forever". And I say you should post.."Manhattan". :]
Mentos. :]
x3xiiloveiitx3x 2 years ago
i'm in the mood for mento's :]
haha, this is really good. i love this song.
itsJemiNelenaSeries 2 years ago
Wow that was awesome :)
The start of this one shot where they got split up and then she came back from England is a great idea for a start of a series :)
SelenaGomezfanNelena 2 years ago
i LOVELOVELOVE oneshots! this is amazing (:
six months please (:
& if you have to stop a story do i'll be there forever. i like how HOPE is going (:
mentos are fun to put in soda (:
x3kristyx3 2 years ago
that was adorable (:
too bad it was only a one-shot,
it would have made a great seriess.
:D not that it wasn't a great story !
kay, i'll shut up now. x]
mentos = life.
bakebr2 2 years ago
Mentos ... eh, not to crazy about Mentos :]
I LOVED IT :D
It was really, really good!
stashhjonas 2 years ago
i LOVED this one-shot.
post manhattan.
demi is kinda funny :)
mentos are the best candy ever!
SelTwiDemJBMil244 2 years ago
MENTOS YES PLEASE DEO NELENA:D
rebeldegirl1818 2 years ago
That was really cute!!!
I can't wait for the next one!!
LiveJustToLive 2 years ago
LOL.
"I love your accent. You sound so sexy and bangable. I'd totally do you but your like a girl."
I loved that part. xD
selikhievlol 2 years ago
amazing!:) lol. loved it. plz post more one shots. :) i just adore them.
yakutiya 2 years ago
oops i accidentally clicked enter....hee hee. and forgot to put my opinion of the one-shot!
i loved it because of the emotion and how you did it so well! plus! i love the fact that you went off the map and did jaylor for a lil while and little less of nelena cuz for some reason i was missing jaylor stories....MENTOS!!
soulsistasforever101 2 years ago
Six Months!!!!
soulsistasforever101 2 years ago
Yay. 1st Comment. I Love nelena. I LOVE the song ''Catch Me!''. This one shot was SUPER DUPER cute! :)
mimid96 2 years ago