Hm... I'm not the one to talk, but I think that you should start out with an outline first, you know, with circles... It always helps adn improves the proportion size between the head and body... And like I said before, don't hesitate to erase something and re-do it... Pretty good, but some scenes need improving, like the profile scene between Akito and Eyebrow-guy at 2:26...
Oh, no, that's not the idea that I wanted to imply... I really admire you for being able to draw manga (in other words, being able to draw the same Akito in some many scenes)...
no it's not like that I am going to remake the 1st chapter again and using the computer I will add the speech bubbles and word allowing me to draw a better picture and also I've have been improving the proportion size.
it looks much better so far and to tell the true i don't like how this one come out.
i see its good but comment ma stuff dude comz on i take time on ma vids
Sillyantman 3 years ago
Pretty good. Congrats.
TheTreeAMV 3 years ago
Hm... I'm not the one to talk, but I think that you should start out with an outline first, you know, with circles... It always helps adn improves the proportion size between the head and body... And like I said before, don't hesitate to erase something and re-do it... Pretty good, but some scenes need improving, like the profile scene between Akito and Eyebrow-guy at 2:26...
qhappyjoy96q 3 years ago 2
thanks you help me to make up my mind, in the end i dont think i will go with this one its not as good as i hoped.
andrew6318 3 years ago
Oh, no, that's not the idea that I wanted to imply... I really admire you for being able to draw manga (in other words, being able to draw the same Akito in some many scenes)...
qhappyjoy96q 3 years ago
no it's not like that I am going to remake the 1st chapter again and using the computer I will add the speech bubbles and word allowing me to draw a better picture and also I've have been improving the proportion size.
it looks much better so far and to tell the true i don't like how this one come out.
andrew6318 3 years ago
The legs in the fight scene aren't fluent.
andrew6318 3 years ago
you meen make the pictures better
andrew6318 3 years ago
Very cool, i like it! =)
Cinzia7 3 years ago
thanks cinzia, do you think any of it needs improving?
andrew6318 3 years ago
I just like the way it looks =]
Cinzia7 3 years ago