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From: XxxoAtrophyoxxX
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  • I had to look up every word.

  • @Kaymell117 correction almost every word

  • i like how u told a story :) keep it up. ur a role model!

  • I feel like I just got a school lesson haha, that was siiiiiiiiiiiick!! If I ever get into an argument, I'm just gonna attempt to recite these lyrics, and people will just go "he's right...not sure what he's saying.. but he's right" loll Keep it up man!

  • You are a genius. literally. I am sure you must have an IQ upwards of 140 because I had to engage myself to understand your lyrics. Very abstract. Great work!

  • the background music(music) was "till i collapse by eminem" lol kl vid man

  • dope man , thanks for the invite

  • ur good at raping

    

  • damn you gotta teach me how to spit, keep rapping yo!

  • Can u give Me The Lyrics I can Manage with The Flow if u can change some lines Please and What Beat U need because i need the Sound to work and The Flow i think i can manage it --What metaphor are more important Please

    If U want I can Manage A bit I need A Sound Please Or The Concepts If U give Me Something Id like to manage the Flow More

  • do you breath? lol you bust rhymes non stop lol

  • I like I really like

  • Dope Track! Thumbs Up!

  • Hey, you got skills.. good lyrics but cut straight to the chase dude.. I like the beat from Eminem's 'Till I Collapse in the background, but you gotta 'clean' your rap up, if you know what I mean... It's all good though, you can make it big. But what happened in the end of that?! You couldn't go on?!

  • Fuckin Great

  • You rap so good..

    But the audio clarity isn't that good..

    Buy a microphone dude...

  • i like these songs better than most of em out these days

  • U can rap, No doubt, But ur flow is eehh... jus needs to come out more Fluently... Nice though

  • awesome.

  • I DIG!

    I DIG!

    I DIG YOUR FLOW MANE!

  • Unorthodox yet I am still amazed. I'm sure you'll find ways to make your delivery even better. All you need to do is maintain clarity and people will follow all the time.

    You're truly versatile and that's always a plus.

  • listening to the auditory? siccckkk....

  • Yo you need to hit me up and check my shit out, click into my channel and find Stand Phat by the Phat Duo. I don't think you'll be disappointed :) Your shit is so good though I know I commented it before but damn...

  • this is the beat from till i collapse by eminem right?

    these rhymes that u use r exceptionally incredable not to be weird but i dont even know what half those words mean these rhymes r better than eminems i have to say

  • this is the beat from till i collapse by eminem right?

  • Pretty awesome! =]

  • Yet imbeciles go miserable cuz they let those imperial.Political figures own their biddable spirits

    Hmm

  • beastly flow dude!!! keep at it

  • this sounds hot but honestly i have no idea what the fuck your talking about. I'm not stupid and I know all these words but it's like there's no real context.

  • Respect...but try to clean it up. I know it was written, so make it clear. Didn't get the point. But aside from that, it was creative. Like.

  • make more vids dude... very clever style you got IMO!!! is this part-freestyled, improv, or what? either way, cool rymin!!!!

  • Dope shit man. Can make another video with lyrics?

  • Holy FUCKING shit that was SO good

  • Ho

    ly

    shit..

    AWESOME! :D

    Check out remix I made? :)

    /watch?v=dN9H8h0w9KE

  • damn.

    

  • good flows man usual ill see a video like this an think oh god anouther white guy trying to rap. but this good

  • dope

    

  • one of your best freestyles so far, i think

  • holy shit yo

  • this goes hard

  • crazy word play aka he is throwin swords

  • but what does it mean...

  • dope thumbs up

  • i appreciate that. wax is a beast.

  • @XxxoAtrophyoxxX fuckin awesome flow bro, keep it up!

  • you kinda remind me of wax

    

  • @NikeSBMatt Wax is fucking awesome

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