That slurping noise when the characters take a drink is ridiculously loud. It's really distracting and annoying.
The scene with the copy/pasted bodies lying around the field looks awful. It would have looked a lot better if you had taken the time to use three different poses rather than the same one three times. And the perspective for the body on the right was way off. It was the same size as the one that was supposed to be closer to the camera.
is this the exact opposite of a beer commercial.. where are the palm trees.
ultraengrish 1 month ago
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MrRagingDerelict 1 year ago
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MrRagingDerelict 1 year ago
Also, who would pick up a half-empty bottle of beer they found in the middle of nowhere? Was she meant to be a hobo or something?
That being said, the message behind it was kind of heavy-handed, so if that's what you were going for, nice work.
ProudAnselmo 2 years ago 2
A couple of things.
That slurping noise when the characters take a drink is ridiculously loud. It's really distracting and annoying.
The scene with the copy/pasted bodies lying around the field looks awful. It would have looked a lot better if you had taken the time to use three different poses rather than the same one three times. And the perspective for the body on the right was way off. It was the same size as the one that was supposed to be closer to the camera.
ProudAnselmo 2 years ago 2
Well that was a waste of 4:55 minutes.
HowAboutSomeTruth1 2 years ago
Whoa man... that was the most life changing 4:55 minutes of my life.
SoCcEr864 2 years ago
It's my first time been here. Here looks great.
aceshigh7 2 years ago 3
really nice cinamatography
FoomerFilms 2 years ago 5