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From: x3Nelena
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  • When will you make another one... This is so good!!!

  • PLEASE continue this! Your an AMAZING writer.

  • :o are you continuing this?

    pleaseee do.

  • your a wonderful writer... please continue this!

  • Awesome!! :D

  • gahhh, i love this! why must you captivate me so?!??!

  • i cant wait until u post the next one!

  • i love this sooooo much!

  • i think i already commented but YOU CANNOT stop writing so i will keep commenting until the next one is out :) i love this so far it is amazing :)

  • I really love this, i think i commented already... im pretty sure i did... hahah vut i just LOVED IT SO MUCH I EVEN REPEATED IT.

  • omg, i you seem to have fallen in love with Lolena, DAMN i love it :DDD

    for real, YOU are the reason I fell in love with them too ;D

    so yeah.. :D

  • oh and also 1) i will definitely enjoy watching this! i do like it so far!

  • I LOVEEE ITT! lol., u probably hate me by now. but at least im leaving comments haha(: but i love this one!

  • ok. i am officially..addicted.

    I CAN'T WAIT FOR THIS SERIES!!!!! :D

  • I adore this series. Why? all are ah-mazing. Seriously the story is really great & the characters are awesome. So yeah keep it up please ^_^

  • this is seriously A M A Z I N G !

  • of course you would get me addicted to yet another one of your stories...it wouldnt be like u if i hadnt been hooked on the first chapter hehe what is his deal? i dont get it i wanna knoooowwwww

  • i love it!!! and also hurry with saving rose 3!!

  • whoaaa. This is really really intense LOVE IT.

  • woah i love it!!!

  • this is really good :) i love watching your stories x

  • that was AMAZING!!!!

    Can't wait for the next one =)

  • That was intense! Trilling! Omg, I could really picture everything in my head. Great gripping story. Keeps you off your seat. Very well-written and I'm looking forward for more. :) Can't wait.

  • Ummm..it was...oh amazing!!!!! Loved it!!

  • OMG . YOU HAVE PURE TALENT . YOU INSPIRE ME !

  • oh wow.... AMAZING <3 i will watch this story <3 i really like it, because it has the sense of what next?

  • this is so amazing and yes i will watch it! :) thanks for sharing.

  • AMAZING!

  • Oh my gosh!! SO amazingggg<3

  • I LOVED IT! I siriously can't wait for the next one. I love your stories, they are so awesome <3 :)

  • OMFG! this is amazing! all your story are so perfect and well written! i like this one a lot. and i think that logan isn't that bad IHIH lolena <3

  • that was really good! :)

  • Wow dude this story looks so interesting :D

  • ok this is absolutley amazing!

    hell yes i will enjoy watching this story! and of course i loove it so far. i love that its lolena and i love how its actiony but also a mystery. can't wait for more! :D

  • this.is.too.good. youre such an amazing writer<3 great job! (:

  • holy shit. this is amazing.

    speechless.-

    it's intense & just perfect.

    the story line seems intresting. next! <3

  • totally amazing

    

  • Love it <3 

  • Really good so far! please write more! (:

  • I love all your stories. They are great. This story is really interesting. Please continue :)

  • Ohmygosh! I love your writing:D yes I will definitely read this, it's pure perfection:) this is barely the first episode and i love it:3 more please:)....

  • This is so intense and suspenseful. I like it

  • this is amazing my face was literally 2 inches away from the screen you are an amazing writer

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  • omg I loved this! so much suspense.

  • I seriously LOVE this story already. It seems different than all the other series on here. i hope you do a new one, and i should say - You are an amazing writer ♥

  • WOW! This story is seriously amazing. Everything I've ever looked for in a fanfic. And I must say, Logan Lerman in the picture you used in your video.......yumm.

  • I like this story a lot. It's very intriguing. I wanna know what happens, because it seems like Liam is just as scared as Allison is. I cannot wait for the next chapter. (:

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  • Awesome<3

  • LOVEEEEDDDD IT! hooked already, omg :o

    next one, pleaseeeee?

  • this was AMAZING!!

    you are such a great writer!!

    great job! =)

  • :OOO THAT WAS AMAZINGGG! i seriously cannot wait for the next one, i love how intense it was! I love it, because its so mysterious and thriller i just... loved it.

  • I love all ur stories they are so realistic

  • Oh my gosh! that was just so intense!

    I love Alison's character :))

    I can't wait for the next part

  • Oh my gosh, this is amazing! I really can't wait for the next one! :D So interesting.

  • I'm in love with your writing! x3 cant wait to read the next"

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